Jody

So funny that Cassie had to restrain Mattie because she didn't want to let Belle go. Everything else was lovely. Nice ending.

Loved everything about this chapter. I love how supportive Irene was of Belle still being in love with Aden. I didn't expect to see Mattie apart of this. But nice surprise though. Aden is such a romantic. I like that he made plans ahead of time and put so much effort into getting her back. The roses were sweet. The marriage proposal was shocking but I loved it. It didn't feel rushed.

Loved this chapter. I wish every chapter could just be the two of them hanging out and teasing each other. So cute that Aden could not resist her sad face. How much do you love me? Not enough. > Funniest line. Poor Belle just when Aden finally gave in, it rains. Love that I was reminded of the strip poker episode (one of my favourites). Belle and Aden playing strip poker though so much better. She is such a cheat. I liked how they kept repeating 'fine' at the end. It was nice that we were back to just Adelle minus Geoff and Nicole. They'll probably be back but it's good that your Adelle is so lovely that it's enough to make me ignore anything about them. A huge thing to accomplish with Geoff/Nicole, for me anyway. Congratulations.

Good on Aden for finally realising that he is not the weak one. Hate Sean but starting to like Justin.

Aden getting sentenced to three months in prison I did not see coming. Although once again Morag to the rescue then. Don't like Gavin but he does make things interesting. Wonder if he'll write another article. Loved that Belle was so pleased to see Aden.

Really good update. From Aden's lack of modesty, to not being able to stop himself from staring down the front of her dress, to lifting their hands so that they were palm to palm Aden is just a mixture of everything in this fic. Flirty, sweet, heartbroken, hilarious, jealous, and little full of himself (even if that one is just him teasing). I laughed so much at Aden's jealousy, wanting to hit Zac with the chair. Poor Aden losing the number. I just saw that happening when I read Zac came up to him by the pool.

This is really good. I like how he kept asking her why she was there. It's like he was challenging her to admit she still loved him. I love that he is going to win her back. Can't wait to see how he is going to do that but with the way Belle feels around him I doubt he is going to have to work too hard.

Geoff and Aden's secret. I find it to be so cute that Aden and Geoff have a secret together. Can't wait to know what it is. More Adelle fluff is always welcome.

The last few chapters have been lovely. It's amazing that after so many chapters this story is just as great as it was when you started it. It hasn't become boring or feels like your just dragging the story to keep it going. So congratulations on still keeping this story fresh and exciting after so many chapters. Theres only a few authors I've read stuff by that can pull that of. I'm glad Drew got his apology. So happy about all the Adelle interaction. Got so caught up the brother/sister interaction with Drew/Belle that I almost forgot how much I missed the way you write Adelle. They are still hilarious, cute and completely perfect for each other in every way. Aden was sweet in wanting to still repay Belle even though she already got her money and it's so like Belle to not want to take it. I guess after this Aden is going to be more determined to get Belle to take it easy and rest. Can't wait for that.

I like Aden walking of and not telling them what their father said. It was also good that he let them fight amongst themselves instead of trying to stop them and giving them a chance to start on him.

Love this already. It was nice to see how Belle went from really nervous to see him to somewhat comfortable around him so quickly.

I like that Aden is dealing with his issues and now Belle is the one who needs him. I hope Aden can make her feel all better, even if it's just him being her friend. It's good that Geoff is talking to Aden. I can see Aden being surprised by it though.

Considering how good your other fic is you have no idea how excited I was to see you had started a new one. It was so sad when Roman told Aden that Belle is okay with him coming back as long as they work different shifts. The way you write Aden, like on the show, you can always make me feel for him even when I feel Belle is justified in breaking up with him. Loving Aden and Melody's friendship. So cute that he calls her Mel. I like how Belle was a little shocked that he calls her that to.

You are just being critical of your own work. Great start to what already looks to be an amazing fic. I can't wait to see where you go with this.

The thing about this fic is I want to review all the time but keep getting stuck on what to say. I just love the way you are showing Aden's confusion over his feelings for both of them but I am guessing it's going to be irritating to have to read that after every chapter as I can't come up with anything else that shows how much I am truly enjoying this. I'll say this though as a huge Adelle fan who doesn't read either with anyone else you have me loving the idea of Gaden.

Just caught up with the last four chapters. I knew Drew would write something nice. I like the way you are keeping him concerned and not liking Aden for Belle but at the same time not making him sound like a jealous jerk. I am loving his scenes in this fic. I love how worried he was when he figured something was wrong. "I'm a veggie, not a rabbit." >Love that line. Amanda is brilliant in this as well. The talk between Belle and her was lovely. It's good to see Amanda giving some good advice. I'm glad you are portraying her as a good mother instead of a selfish, inconsiderate person. Didn't like that she immediately snapped at Drew though. Aden sitting at Belle's bedside was sweet. But why did he have to go straight to snapping at Drew. He is Aden though so it's believable that he'd do that. I hope he or Amanda atleast apologizes to Drew for blaming him. We haven't had much of Aden lately so there's not much to say but I am sure when there is I'll be back to gushing about how great he is.

If it's Adelle, then a 3-part fic sounds really good right now and it will make me feel a little better until your writers block goes away and we get more of this story.

I bet he wrote something nice on it. I love that she gave him a hard time about the apology. She has really got stop getting so defensive everytime he asks her something. He really hasn't said anything really bad about Aden yet, just that he doesn't like him and thinks Aden is wrong for her. It's good that he is concerned for her. Love the dig at Drew about Amanda.

Wow. This was amazing. Why haven't you written Adelle before?

Great chapter. It certainly made up for being left hanging in the last chapter. My favourite part was when she kept insisting he was lying then finally admitted she knew he wasn't. >So sad.

I am going to choose to believe that Drew really is just being concerned. Belle and Aden were real cute once again. What is with all the excuses that Aden is coming up with?

How can you make us wait the whole chapter for that moment then just end it? I just can't wait for Belle's reaction. Update soon.

I am so loving Drew and Belle's relationship. It is so much better than if he turned into a jealous idiot. I need to stop writing about liking Drew and Belle's interaction in every comment because I am almost starting to sound like I miss them together as a couple which I in no way do. But teasing Drew plus Adelle is like heaven. I don't think any other fics have both. Now I can honestly say I am hoping Aden comes for dinner. The teasing that Aden and Drew could throw at Belle together would be awesome. In the end, Belle asking Aden not to go to cofee or anything with Amanda, was that a subtle dig at Drew/Amanda. I seriously can't wait to read more of this.

Happy to read your note before the chapter. I guess this chapter made up for the lack of Adelle interaction. ''She loved the way he was able to switch from being such a romantic to being a tease in a second.'' >I love that too. Also loving Drew and Belle's relationship at the moment.

I am loving the interaction between Belle, Amanda, Drew, and Ryan. They are so funny together. The sister comment was the best. Is it weird that I am missing the Adelle interaction so badly but I am kinda dreading Aden showing up because I have a feeling that if he does it's going to ruin the family scenes if Drew decides to turn into a jealous idiot. But if you plan on having Aden show up and Drew really has moved on then I am all for it. Throwing Aden in the mix would make for some even funnier scenes.