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I so want to know what he's written on her cast...I bet it's a warning for Aden

Belle's first reaction...imediate denial! Perfect! I'm really curious now as to how this will develope Excellent writing

Couldn't have said it better! Eli, you're just mean! Excellent writing

What a perfect chapter ending! A perfectly written chapter!

Or alternatively it could be a blood bath - especially if Drew decided to annoy Aden. Either way it would be interesting

I was on my way to post an update to my fic and got sidetracked here, the scene has been set for what could be an interesting chapter. More updates soon please

^^Good point! The plot thickens!

Humph! After everything you've said about ME leaving people hanging...HOW COULD YOU? Who was he with? What was the unfinished business? You'd better update this excellent fic soon...or else

C'mon Eli! I want the scene where Aden tells Belle, soon...please! You are torturing us sooooo well, TOO WELL! *Waits - impatiently - for the next update*

You write so well! *Waits in anticipation of the next update*

I'm really enjoying this! It's edgy and dark, it also tackles real issues which I like. The Melody/Roman/Aden interaction is brilliently written. Update soon please

How soon's the next update? Excellent dialogue as always!

Oh my God, you made me live that! I've helped friends work though stuff like this and you've done an amazing job of capturing the emotions, I'm looking forward to seeing how you progess the storyline. What an amazing update.

I'm shellshocked! I really don't know what else to say!

Hmmm, Drew still doesn't know!!!! Good update, I can almost hear Drew whining Amanda suddenly seems very domestic and motherly though, what changed? Or is she just different in your fic?

Awwww! But I'm not likeing Lily! More updates please!

Axel freaking out is a nice touch, Nicole's reaction (post shock) ought to be interesting. Updates please!

The change of players keeps it interesting I'm really looking forward to Drew finding out about Aden :D

Severely allergic to it

5 cheese pasta? It's no wonder you're feeling ill! *sulks because I can't have cheese*

Hey, you updated! I was looking forward to to the discussion about the kiss and you didn't put it in I would really like that kiss to come back to haunt Geoff and/or Aden, just to see how the deal with it! More updates soon

Oh, Lily seems to be a bit of a bad girl! I wonder what the secret is? When's the next update? Sorry, I'm being greedy now!

Note:- you updated so fast, this ended up in the wrong place - it was a comment on chapter 19 YAY!! You updated and it was - once again - awesome! Aden's so sweet and gentle with Belle.

That ending, awwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Good update!

You're welcome happy editing!