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That last chapter was.. great. I really like the way you've written the passion of it all, the way it has kinda overwhelmed them until they couldn't do anything but give in to it. Great chapter, looking forward to reading more

This is brilliant, I have loved catching up with this. The originality of the whole Roman & Ella stories are just incredible.

S'all getting a bit complicated... - oh wait, that happened a long time ago!

I'm not sure if its my age and therefore my slight tendency to sometimes look at the world through my immature glasses showing, but that last line had me in stitches. Good chapter, looking forward to seeing - and being a part of how this story develops and also looking forward to RR1's addition to this blossoming parody. Good show.

So much to catch up on, but it was worth it. I did like Ruff but I preferred Niff so it is a nice direction you are going in with those romances.. and also the Adelle fluff is sweet too, and very well written - I sometimes find that Adelle fluff can get a little stale very quickly these days. What with no Adelle action on screen anymore to freshen things up but this was written really well. Well Done. Looking forward to your next offering

- Huge apology, our internet has been down to a large proportion of today and I'm due away for the weekend as of 3:00pm tomorrow. I also start a new job on Monday - but I hope Chapter 3 will be worth the wait. It'll be up Monday evening if all goes to plan if not it'll definitely be Tuesday. Really sorry guys, you've just caught me on a rather busy weekend!

That was an opening chapter, looking forward to Red Ranger's addition to the story - As I mentioned elsewhere his work is always good. I'm also rather looking forward to getting stuck in myself, I haven't written for a while, it'll be nice to blow away the cobwebs!

Just read this from start to now.. such a good fiction. It's had its twists and turns.. heartbreak, emotional warfare and even violence but that's what makes it so gripping. Looking forward to seeing the rest of it unfold, desperately hoping it has a happy ending. Geoff & Nicole seem to deserve it after such a rollercoaster ride!

Such an excellent chapter, the fact Nicole got rid of the pills leaves so many routes for this story to take. I am also looking forward to seeing Ruby's reaction to the whole 'comforting' incident. Excellent writing, keep it up!

:-O Woah.. that was a pretty epic chapter, looking forward to seeing how this turns out - Has Nicole gone too far?!

Just read the opening chapters of this fiction. I'm looking forward to see how this all works out

Some nice Adelle Fluff in this chapter, it's something I never thought I would really miss on the show - but I sort of am now! I liked the little one-sided exchange between Ruby and Nicole but find myself hoping if she is to break up anybody then it should be Geoff/Ruby as Adelle are just too cute... although Geoff/Ruby are quite cute too... but so are Niff.. Oh now I'm finding myself in a shippers dilemma!

The little break gave me a chance to catch up with what I've missed! This chapter was a nice surprise and brings me up to date with the story. Looking forward to the next part!