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cool adelle chapter

The ending to the most recent chapter was brilliant keep up the good work!

Awesome Stuff

That first bit was very good and the bit with Roman and Miles didn't dissapoint either, you are really good at writing these pairings

That was the perfect way to round off such a good story

I wasn't sure of Nicole at first but I have warmed to her after she got with Geoff because they match very well and I hope they are together for a while before they become victims of the powerful soap opera relationship culling tool - especially after they have confessed that they Love each other. I also think that because they went through so much with Melody and the whole break up thing that we deserve a little fluff from them - if anything to combat the overkill on Aden & Belle - (I might be killed for that) but I think that relationship is beginning to carry the show.. and that's not good.. Can't wait to see what they do with Nicole in 2009...

I don't like her anyway but thought she might pop up to question why they are getting married although we get enough of that from the TV - even if its not about marriage Good writing, really enjoying reading this.

^^ That was some funny stuff about the bouquet - certainly tickled me anyway, although that's not hard at this time in the morning. That chapter was brilliant, I loved the way you tapped into Roman's emotional state - he is always portrayed to be this Rambo style man in the television series and we have only seen him show any kind of emotion once or twice - its good to know even Rambo cries! Looking forward to your next update - and the Bay's reaction to the sound of wedding bells! - question, is Melody around in this Fic?

All that stuff about super couples is right -- 'Annie stop crying', just cracked me up, especially in the context of the story - good stuff

That was a nice chapter, I liked the ending. Very good writing - keep it going!

This is harrowingly beautiful

Awesome news about the new stuff - this story was pretty amazing

I agree - nice to see a fic that is not centered around the more popular characters like Martha / Jack and Adelle Good Work

Hope its all ok... Liked Belle & Aden's interruptions and the fact that Annie turned slightly green - funny stuff! Update soon

I have just read this over - after meaning to do it since it was first posted and I think it is really good hoping for the next chapter soon

That was a good line at the end, can't wait to see what the other couples can come up with now.. keep updating - its really good

Good writings and a very unique and sound concept

That was really good, honestly this and December Mourning are my favourite stories so far.. write more soon, I actually think you might be my favourite author - your other Nic/Geoff wedding story was awesome too.. you know the most embarassing thing that could happen know is you coming back and saying that you didn't write those others and I had you mixed up with someone else! Glad everything was tied up, and I loved the exchange between Belle and Aden here, gives answers but it's only on second reading I truly understood what it was getting at!

The overlapping bits in this fic are turning out to be comedy gold - really well written - it kind of balances the sad stuff with the more lighthearted stuff. Good Work

Good Stuff so far...

awesome stuff right here