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This is really well written, but I am firmly with the people who don't want Geoff to marry Melody - that would be a bad move. Can't wait for the closing chapter, hope everything gets sorted out... and the right people end up with the right people - *hint hint. nudge nudge* hanging on for the last bit...

really liked this chapter, but hope Geoff pulls his finger out.. and soon

very good stuff - can't wait for extention on the Mel/Nic/Geoff triangle

Awesome... awaiting next update

I hope Geoff soon gets his act together and whatever is stopping him being with Nicole needs to be sorted pretty quick.. because the tension between them is almost unbareable Looking forward to the next chapter

Liked this chapter, hopefully Nicole & Geoff sort themselves out.. and same for Aden & Belle, can't wait to find out what happened to make them grow so far apart.. Melody is a bit of a spare part in my opinion, its obvious Geoff doesn't feel for her the way he feels for Nicole.. Anyway, Brilliant Update - Loved all the conversational bits in this one, really well written - Can't wait for the next installment

good stuff there

I really enjoyed this chapter, but have to agree that it leaves you with more questions than it gives answers... also it is obvious that both Nicole & Geoff still really like each other - what did she mean by choosing between them? and will she have to do it again, also I think that Melody and Geoff are wrong for each other so its no surprise that they are awkward towards each other, they don't have the chemistry of Geoff and Nicole. Anyway, keep the updates coming - they are awesome and December Mourning is one hell of a fan fic..

.... AWESOME!

You are quickly becoming one of my favourite Fan Fiction writers on the Board... heres hoping that it is less harrowing than 'December Mourning' - and to anyone who hasn't read that yet.. read it now. waiting to find out what becomes clear in Chapter Two

Amazingly heartwrenching and very powerful! I really liked the story, and hope you write more. Obviously you could write something a little happier in future lol

the update was definatley worth the wait and every word was pretty much amazing, sad - but amazing... have to say I really liked Geoff's little emotional release.. even if it is beating someone to a pulp

yeah, will be worth the wait no doubt... still trying to figure out who Anon. is!

this is one of the most original pieces I have read yet and is really, really good... one problem... and this counts for every fan fic on the board.... the updates can't come quick enough! amazing job!

No resurrection if that's what your refurring to but with Nicole and Aden involved things never stay depressing for long. Thanks for all the comments guys, next chapter should be up tomorrow night. I wasn't going to go that far... that would just be weird Just with everyone being so sad, even Morag cried in the last chapter and she is as hard as nails! and Geoff seems to be a shell of himself, I just wondered if their was any happiness thats all

This story is turning into nothing short of a bloodbath! its a really well written bloodbath though! Keep the updates coming, enjoying it so far

Awesome writing skills, coupled with a really sad plot - that is how you make me cry... hasn't happened yet but before this is finished it most likley will have. Update Soon is there any light at the end of this tunnel?

Really enjoyed this - hope we get some more soon

I also hope that Geoff realises that he has to stand by Nicole - but I can also see why he went a bit wierd - Nicole had known for two months and hadn't thought of telling him, hes just scared but will no doubt see the light at the end of the tunnel.. also is that Annie going all mad on us now? Good Chapter

Really like how you have given this story a cool turn - killing both Jai and Melody off in the space of about 5 lines - of course there is a chance that Jai has survived but I doubt that very much. I am left to wonder how Geoff will react when Nicole lets loose she might be pregnant - but if we take the scene from the actual show he should be quite supportive - I also like the way you have built the two relationships up - they both seem quite strong. Two really good chapters, Hope you post some more new stuff up soon!

its on my new to-read list that I have just this second formulated in my mind... hope everyone in oz is having an epic start to 2009! Edit: and everywhere else too!

Amazing Chapter, really well written. Edit: - I obviously didn't read the last few lines -

Looking forward to the next installment - glad to see the outlines of the relationships we know are forming, just with a difference - Nicole likes Geoff but Geoff doesn't like or hasnt admitted to liking Nicole... its all good, keep writing!

This was a good piece to read because it only focused on the Geoff and Nicole relationship, and it just radiated love between them - hope they will be together for a long time in the visual world too - liked the end. but would also like to see what happens next - could we get another Geoff hero moment? Liked Aden in his protective role, thats another element of his character that we have seen visually too - all in all it was a brilliant Fic and is definatley one of those that could do with a sequel or some additional material written - look at 'Good ole' JK' - she finished her books (oh, alright they where on a slightly bigger scale. ) and she keeps feeding fans bits of information about what could be happening next... im getting slightly obsessed so im going to stop typing.. ps. I find myself in a struggle to divide my time between here and the spoiler section in the run up to the new season

That was one of the funniest things I have read all evening, and it makes a change to all this miscarrigey, emotional stuff you see plastered here - nice bit of comedy makes the world seem alot brighter! Brilliant oneshot and written well in the fact it keeps to the characters and especially the dynamic of Nicole & Geoff's relationship 'just enough trouble to be worth it' and 'no, just good looking' - are vintage lines for Nicole, yet we know she loves him really!