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Seems really obvious now as I remember the chapter in which Aden gave Geoff the shirt, but it took that chapter for me to be reminded.. Excellent chapter!

Awww.. Such a cute ending to that chapter!

Oh My... Wow. Where is Super Geoff when you need him!

It is a shame that the story is at an end, but I to have enjoyed collaborating with all three of you. Thanks again! and hope to see you around.

I'm going with the majority call on this one.. I'm confused. Looking forward to the next chapter, and some answers!

Surely the guy they are talking of isn't Geoff? :-|

That chapter has only left me wondering where the hell Geoff has got to! Oh well no doubt it'll sort itself out in due time

I didn't leave Marigoldly out on purpose.. it was late and I was tired

Brilliant update, glad Aden didn't take offence at Nicole's good natured intention. Awesome chapter, looking forward to the next update

It always makes me feel better to know that two writers of such calibre are also writing this, so if I make any mistakes then they can be easily covered up!

You killed Ella? :-O

Sorry I have spoilt your fun! I just like fictional killing.. I don't see it as a problem myself..

That would be great.. I am feeling rather inspired

The plot thickens.. To much the same consistency as mud Well written and thoroughly enjoyable

Hope its not to terrible an effort! haha

You really have to feel for Aden at this point, he truly is doing it rough isn't he? I hope the future brightens up a bit for him

I was wondering if someone would write a Ruff fiction?.. that would be awesome.

and on top of that.. where the hell is Geoff? haha.. so many questions.. this is brilliant!

That was a really good little confrontation between Miles and Axle.. had some real comedy value

It is amazing how such small gestures can move great mountains.

That was such a sweet end to a brilliant story. I'm so glad that Nicole got her happy ending, she certainly deserved it thats for sure!

I felt this was particularly good because it didn't rush to resolve everything in the plot because it had been labeled a 'one-shot' and the way it was written was brilliant, not a word wasted. I didn't particularly like the idea of Nicole/Aden but as time goes on I realise that it might be good at some point in the future, just like this fic suggested.. so in a way this fic sums up all my feeling towards this pairing. Well done.

Woah!.. I was sure that was going to turn into one of those chapters where all the boys fought over the size of their biceps! I enjoyed that chapter, especially the little conversations between Geoff & Nicole and Aden & Belle

Well personally, I can't wait till Nicole comes and causes tension.. its all a bit too happy for me :-P Looking forward to the next installment

That little exchange between Ella and the Children... explaining everything that has happened in past fics... I loved it I can see where Geoff and Nicole are coming from, and plus Ella and Roman have loads of sprogs, no wonder she lost her memory!.. having to remember all those names and birthdays and no doubt.. dietary requirements.. that last one was a little odd Loved the chapter, looking forward to the next installment