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That was such an awesome closing line.. quite possibly the best exchange in the entire chapter.. looking forward to the next bit

Really enjoyed the little conversation between Nicole & Romeo in that last chapter.. and I'm looking forward to the concluding part, to see if Nicole manages to get her man back after all that time! I'm also glad to hear you are working on more fiction.. as Marigoldly said in the 'Krystal Klear' thread its brilliant to see how your work is improving.. [im enjoying that too by the way]

I did wonder when the little issue of Bigamy would raise its ugly head, hope they can get it sorted without too much strife, and the gaps in Ella's memory still leave alot to be explored.. I really liked the little Geoff/Nic scenes in previous chapters, the relationship seemed a little rocky at the beginning but I am glad its starting to even out. I also found the little exchange between Roman and Elliot interesting, and those last lines made me think of the classic Starsky and Hutch partnership.. looking forward to further installments..

Really enjoyed the little cute moments between Nicole and Geoff, especially that little section with the baby kicking..you can almost imagine it happening on the television.. I even enjoyed the way Annie reacted.. really in character [judging by her current on-screen personality they are looking to ditch the ditzy innocence that we have come to know and love] so its great to get a little taste of it here. Looking forward to the next installment

Really good update, worth the wait.. just hope we don't have to wait too long for the final part. It's also a shame that the stuck up male model shares my name.. oh well, only a story after all!

Geoff always does the right thing... aww :-)

Those two chapters are brilliant.. Poor Ella.. she is always going through the ringer in your stories! :-P

This is brilliant.. haha Looking forward to seeing how it progresses! Brilliant writing so far by the way

Woah.. that was a bit heavy.. Good though, well written.. would listen to the song but im on my phone and it wont play ha :-(

my thoughts exactly.. Nice little chapter - looking forward to your update

Killing her just before a film career.. harsh.. yet dramatic and awesome at the same time. Looking forward to the next bit

I don't really have any words.. that was brilliant

That was such a hilarous ending.. loved it, looking forward to the next update.

Eww Gaden.. that's one relationship that doesn't make sense to me. but each to their own.. looking forward to the next chapter

Really good second part, although that last line doesn't fill me with optimism about the next bit

This is brilliant.. nice first part. I like the way you have reversed the relationship.. usually its Nicole who is on a downward spiral and Geoff lifts her out of it, but with this it looks like the other way around. Looking forward to the next installment

My reaction exactly.. Just a bit longer

Ohhhhh.... Wow

that was nice.. thanks I was wondering when the first fic mentioning 'Ruff' would pop up.. I've got a cool one-shot/short fic in the pipeline that features them fully.. im on tenderhooks whether to write it.. thanks again

That was awesome. Niff! yay!

Sweet first chapter, looking forward to seeing where you take this

Niff Sprogs Awesome couple of chapters, looking forward to seeing how they progress from here [especially telling Ella]

Yay Niff