
Beate
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Hmm, intresting start. Wonder what happend to Aden & Belle. Looking forward to reading more.
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Loved the dialouge with Amanda. Drew annoyes me in this fic as much as he did in the show. That must mean you write him good I guess. Good update. Looking forward to more.
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Great chapter. Loved the talking between Aden and Belle. The remembering of his grandfather and what he did was so well written. Looking forward to more.
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That chapter was just wonderfull, loved it all, laughed and awwed. Great update as always. Can't wait for more.
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I liked this story, great start. More soon please.
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Great update. More soon please
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Loved the talk with Roman. Great update.
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This sounds great, love this fic so far. But as monkeysmoke says maybe a bit to perfect. Knowing your writing there will be twists. I do hope she won't have a miscarrige or something like that. Adelle have been trough so much.
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Aww, that was so sweet. I love how he finally came around. And the way you descibed him looking at the ultrasound pictures and realising. I only got two words. Awesome writing. More soon please, I'm hooked. lol
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You are too kind giving us so many chapters in one day. Each chapter has me sitting like this , waiting for Belle to tell him already. Great update as always.
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Oh I hope it's not Nicole. Maybe Aden can pick up the bag and it falls out. And I don't hate you, Aden feels hurt and it would be weird if he was all loveydovey. This story is so good and are becoming better and better. Can't wait for more. Update soon.
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Aww, so cute. Can't wait til Aden finds out. And he better not ask her if she's sure it's his. Great update. Looking forward to more.
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Great update. Loved the fact that it was a clean brakeup, instead of the way they did it on the show. I think you explained their feelings beautifully. Looking forward to more.
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I wish the writers would have made another storyline getting Adelle back together. It did not make sense that Belle would be the one who insisted to keep seeing Aden and still be with Angelo. She was so hurt when she was cheated on by Drew. The reunion should be something that could happen in the open. I do agree with valli on some things, some of the fights were a bit stupid, and Aden calling Belle a skank was a bit over the top. But I guess that 's what they have to do to keep people watching the show. After all there happens more in summer Bay in one week than in an ordinary place in a whole lifetime. Hoping there will be much good times for Adelle ahead and good storylines.
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Great chapter as always, looking forward to Unfamiliar. I hope we get chapters from when they are travelling. Loved this fic, awesome written.
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Awesome update. Loved how you descriebed their feelings, especially Aden at the end. More soon please.
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Aww, how cute. Aden must be the best boyfriend ever. Looking forward to get to know what the recipt was for. Great update.
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Well I was getting really angry at Belle for saying they were nothing. I'm glad it seems like she really do care.
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aww, how cute are Adelle Loved the brother comment from Nicole. Great chapter as always.
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That was such an awesome chapter. Loved to see Belle's toughts about everything, and Adens behavior.
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This fic is great. And three chapters in one day, you are spoiling us. Loved the way you write this. Looking forward to more updates.
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That was a great chapter. Loved how she just sat with Aden, sometimes that's all you need.
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Angelo Good to hear there will be other twists, Felt so bad for Aden at the end. Great update.
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Loved this chapter, the Bedroom scene and Aden giving Belle the pendant was just an AOL moment. You know I was thinking maybe Larry was dead, but then I remember this when I saw Sam's post. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Wow, I just love the story. You are a really good writer.