Jackieleanne

Brilliant chapter Laura aww Ric found a house, sounds great as well hopefully they will both like it and move in together.

That was a great chapter Laura, poor Matilda nice that Scott and then Ric was there for her. I hope that she can heal again and that all these old wounds don't stay with her.

Read the chapter last night I loved it. I hope that Amanda stays away. I like how Becky and Lucas are together I hope they become a couple.

I caught up with this lastnight, and I'm still loving it, you write the characters really well especially Matilda I can really feel her emotions and feelings especially towards the other characters. Great work can't wait to see how Ric reacts to the suprise.

That was a great chapter I loved it I hope Sally is OK it doesn't sound so good.

Just caught up on all the updates and they are great, I love the relationships that you have built up between all the characters its great to see how they interact. Can't wait to read more.

Great updates I'm glad that Ric is there for her.

Oh no Tony I hope that Beth pulls through. Can't wait to read more great chapter perfectly written.

Oh my god just caught up and this story is hillarious I love it. Great work.

Great chapter I have a bad feeling that Beth was on the plane.

Thanks for the message. Titles edited and everythings sorted.

Great start. As has been mentioned please see this thread and alter the post accordingly with the fiction guidelines at the beginning. Thanks. http://backtothebay.com/forum/index.php?ac...;f=15&id=13

Aaron watch the SPAG. Joking and yeah we can kiss and make up. I'm off to bed as well now after all us girls did win this.

Ok then best get the coupon out. Haha Im not gonna let you win this aaron you better get begging and accept that you cant beat us women.

I can always go to ann summers.

Its ok Kat he will get his punishment dont worry. lol

Hey Kat, can you ban aaron lol.

Oh my god aaron I could seriously kill you. I will get you back for this just you wait.

Exactly what I just said to him Sian.

Aaron you are digging yourself into a hole here.

Yeah well its all your fault. And lol thats just stupid connection sorry for the double posts ill get kat to delete hehe.

And he passed it on to his poor girlfriend whos feeling totally awful.

Brilliant start I loved it. The dialogue between Ric and Johny was brilliant and poor Ric and Matilda I hope Matilda eats something don't want her eating disorder coming back.

Just fill in the form and post it in the Proof Reading thread, Nicole and SkyKat will then assign you with a proof reader. If you have any problems then PM either of them. The guidelines of what to do about it are at the start of the thread. Thanks Jackie

Pippa and Noah was adorable. I really hope that Ric is ok, please let him be ok. Well written great interaction between the different characters. Can't wait to read more.