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Everything posted by Danni02
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For the last couple of months at least now, whenever I try to link my fan fiction in my 'about me' section, I get this message: Oops! Something went wrong! One of the fields you filled in requires values in a specific format, but the value you supplied did not meet this format ('Website URL'). I'm doing it the same way I've always done it and all my other fan fictions have linked fine. Is there a different kind of issue here?
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The Hunger Games: Catching Fire. Not as good as the first one and took a while to get into it but was still good.
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The Book Thief. I was a little disappointed. I loved the book so much and the movie just didn't do it justice, but then again book to movie movies rarely do. (In my opinion)
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I had a feeling April and Heath would stay married in the end. They've never really made sense to me and I really hoped Heath and Bianca could have worked things out, but great story all the same. Always enjoy reading your fictions and will keep a look out for furture stories.
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Aww Bianca had a little girl. Here's hoping she brings her parents closer again. Little sad that Heath wasn't in the room to see his daughter being born but at least he was there right after. Looking forward to more.
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I didn't like this chapter much....nothing against your writing its great as always, just don't like April and Heath declaring love for each other and such. Even though I'm not much of a fan of either pairing I would prefer Bianca and Heath to be able to work it out but pretty sure that's not happen. Even so, looking forward to more and seeing where this goes.
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I feel so sorry for Bianca. Not liking April and Heath at all. I really wish there was a way for Bianca and Heath to work things out. I'm loving Dex and Ruby together though.
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Even though I had a feeling something might have happened with Dex and Ruby when she appeared back in the bay I was still a little shocked to read it. Dex and Ruby could be interesting.... Didn't expect Bianca to be pregnant. I am sort of hoping she and Heath work things out but not sure that's going to happen.
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Thought April and Heath might have had trouble getting divorced. It could be interesting to read them trying to be a married couple. I have a feeling they might start liking this whole being married to each other thing. Update soon .
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Surprised to see Ruby in this fiction. Liked the chat between her and Dex though. Had a feeling the annulment wouldn't be able to happen and the thought of them attending marriage counselling is interesting. Looking forward to more.
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April staying at Heaths probably isn't the best idea. Nice that Brax is going to try to help Heath, hopefully they can get the marriage annulled!
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Thor: The Dark World. It was good and pretty funny at times.
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Heath and April are pretty stupid for thinking it was just a joke wedding. I don't blame Dexter and Bianca's actions. I feel bad for Dexter but I feel more sorry for Bianca. She thought she was married to Heath then finds out her sister actually is. Can't wait to see (or should I say read) how all things are going to go. Update soon
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So glad to see a new fiction from you. Great start and I can't wait to read more.
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So I've fell behind and there is usually enough time between updates to read so I'm not sure how that happened, but oh well. While it is sad that Ruby lost the baby, it's hard to care too much as I really hate Casey and wouldn't actually mind if this did drive them apart. I don't like reading her with Casey at all. (sorry)
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Great chapter Was a little disappointed myself Charlie wasn't pregnant but I did sort of expect it. I hope it is just a bug she has and nothing more serious is wrong with her. Loved that Charlie and Brax sorted out the baby stuff quickly and that they are going to try again. Still not liking the little appearances of this man....
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Awesome update! The twins are adorable. I love how they still cover their eyes when Charlie and Brax kiss, super cute. And Hope being choosy with her clothes, loved that and her telling her daddy to be quick with the hands on hips pose made me chuckle. She's going to be a little sassy thing. This mystery man is going to rock up some trouble for the Braxton's I reckon. Good that Charlie is going to take a test. Hopefully if it is positive things go a little smoother for her this time around. Although I am aware this is a story and what's a story without a little drama, right? But yeah, would like to think all goes will if she is in fact pregnant.
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The twins were cute. I wonder what's wrong with Charlie. I have a feeling she might be pregnant, but then part of me things it's something more. Wonder who the guy at the end is...could it be their dad? Sorry to say I didn't read all of My Saving Grace so I'm not sure on the situation with him....looking forward to see how this develops.
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So I will try to keep up with this one better than I did My Saving Grace..... The start was funny with Ruby and the twins walking in on Chax about to have some sexy time! ha. The twins are so fricken cute! Loved Charlie's birthday party and even the adults seemed to be having fun. Loved Brax and Ruby at the end mucking around. Good start and update soon
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Liked the beginning with Nicole and Ruby....glad my Rubes is nice to Nicole.... but, then Geoff. Oh Geoffrey, Geoffrey, Geoffrey....I am disappointed! He was so sweet in his own home with her. Stupid Steph influencing him. I hope he grows a pair and tells her to go take a long walk off a short plank!
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Aww well isn't Geoff a bit of a sweetheart behind closed doors?!?! I liked he showed her his nice side and hopefully Nicole starts fitting in better in school too. Loved the cupcake scene and did I detect a bit of flirtyness between the two?? (I'm not actually sure that's a word, but hey, I'm using it, ha!) Looking forward to more.
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Super excited to see you back with a fic. Oh how I have missed you and your Niff stories and, well, Niff in general. Great start and looking forward to seeing where this goes.
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That was such a sweet chapter. I wonder what's going on with Bianca...maybe another Braxton has her eye... knew Rubes and Casey were going to get together....kinda wishing they didn't, I hate Casey! Although I guess in this fiction he's been through a lot and does seem nice, I guess. I wish Charlie and Brax could get their acts together and admit to each other they want one another! Looking forward to more.
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Two brilliant Chapters. Loved that Chalrie and Brax told each other about remembering meeting when they were 16, they've both helped each other become who they are today! They are made for each other, they just need to realise that. Super pleased that Charlie's surgery went well and I love the cheeky banter being thrown between her and Brax. Charlie and Bianca locking themselves in the bathoom when they were younger made me laugh. Update soon
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Sorry sorry, I’m slack already. Must try harder to keep up to date with this fiction, you are an amazing writer. Aww I loved the way that Brax looked after Charlie when she had her hot flush and at the restaurant. So glad Angelo and Nicole are leaving town! Heath passing on the scrabble because he wouldn’t win any money brought a little smile to my face. And Brax saying he’d rather watch Ruby kick his butt, too. Hehe. Love how you’re writing all the relationships in this especially Charlie and Bianca, it’s lovely to read. Poor Brax. This is affecting him so much. The poor guy needs a break himself. Glad he spoke to Charlie a little about it, talking to someone will probably help him get things off his chest and be able to relax a little. Love Rubes in this too, love how much she cares for her mother and them planning on going on a holiday made me smile. I hope it happens for them. Can’t believe that Cheryl would leave because Casey had Cancer, how awful of her! Can’t believe that Nicole ever though she and Ruby could be friends again, complete idiot! Okay so my theory was completely wrong but I knew Charlie and Brax had met before! So Brax got Charlie to go home, that’s pretty awesome. Hehe. So great that Casey is in remission too. Brax saying bald headed girls were sexy made me chuckle and I’m glad Charlie managed a laugh too! Aww poor Charlie wanting to shave all her hair off, but I guess as she said if it’s going to fall out anyways, why prolong it. But I still think it’s a brave move to make. Loved loved loved Heath and Ruby’s chat. Was so well written I could imagine them sitting there in my head as I read it, well done. The memory of the clown at the fair made me chuckle. Bianca being scared and Ruby saying only babies are scared of clowns. Once again loved the banter between Charlie and Brax about bald headed chicks! Me thinks they like each other.... Really hope Charlie’s chemo has been successfully and she can get surgery and everything goes okay and she can be in remission too! Please! Oh and did I miss reading that Bianca moved in with Ruby and Charlie? Keep up the amazing work. Update soon.