elikell

A truly wonderful piece of writing. Amazingly well portrayed and written so convincingly. Loved how you've written Dex. It seems so real. Well done.

This was just so amazingly well written and just a purely amazing story all around. Very sad that Charlie had to leave, but sometimes life doesn't turn out the way we planned. Just amazing. I loved it so so much. Well done

Beautiful and sunny. Not too hot, not too cold, just nice

Beautiful and sunny

Sunny but windy, which makes it feel cold.

Nice and warm. Windy. Cloudy but sun continues to shine through every so often.

Yep, that's the original Flynn, Martin Dingle-Wall. Not sure why he left the show though!

Sunny and warm. And windy. About 30 I think

Absolutely terrible actually! Windy, rainy, cold

Sunny

Nice and sunny. But still a bit chilly though!

No, they're not together, they're just friends. And being a small town, everyone knows everyone... Sorry for the delay in posting. I'm still away, but should be home on Wednesday to post another chapter, if everything goes well...

Very interesting indeed. Poor Charlie. Can't wait to see where you take this... Update soon please

Oh wow, this is a very interesting fic. I can't wait to see where you take this next. I'm very intrigued by it all. Update soon please

Oh wow, Charlie was going to meet him. And then that happened. Poor Brax. And poor Charlie. Glad that Brax qiut the River Boys in the hope of turning over a new leaf. Can't wait to see what both Brax and Charlie have to say for themselves when they see each other again (I'm hoping!) Very interesting. Update soon please

Its a little cloudy, but theres still a bit of sun shining through. A little chilly, but certainly not freezing cold anymore!

A good start. Very interesting indeed. Can't wait to see where you take this. Update soon please

A wonderful update. Glad that Charlie told Brax the truth about everything. I hope he can protect both Charlie and Ruby when Grant shows up. Hated that Grant's parents turned up in the Bay. Poor Charlie, that must've been horrible! Loved that Ruby was supportive of Charlie Can't wait to see where you take this. Update soon please

Another wonderful chapter. I loved it all. The phonecalls. Ruby turning up. The moment between Heath and Bianca. Aria making herself known. It was all just wonderful. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please

A wonderful update. I loved Joey's exit, and acknowledging his crush on her. Love how you're bringing in older things from the show, into a new story. Very well done. And very creative. I can't wait to see what you come up with in the future chapters! Update soon please

Another wonderful update. Poor Ruby, she really is making a habit of falling over! lol. Loved how late she was and the entrance! Very amusing. I do hope that Charlie will meet up with Brax at some point. Very interested to see where you take this. Update soon please

Its dark now, but today was nice and sunny. Pity I had to be at work inside all day!

A great update. Loved Charlie's reaction. At least now they both know more about each other. Can't wait to see if Charlie goes to meet Brax. I'm secretly hoping she does! Update soon please

Great chapter. Loved Charlie and Bianca looking after Aria. And the diaper changing. Very happy that Bianca decided to look after Aria so that Charlie could have a break from everything. Poor Charlie is probably worn out with looking after a newborn, Darcy and Ruby. Great picture in my head of Heath drinking Milo! Love that he's sticking with being a father and taking it all seriously. Can't wait to see where you take this. Update soon please.

Another wonderful update. I love how you've intertwined a lot of characters and storylines from the show into this fic. It's really entertaining to read. Feel sorry for Brax. He was only looking out for Joey, but I can understand her reaction. Really liking where this is going. Update soon please