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Yay!

Great fic! I didnt comment much toward the end, but I loved all the chapters! You wrote it perfectly!

I am waiting to find out who the guy is Too bad that somebody had to die once again, but I think they have almost captured the guy. I think I have said it in all my previous posts but I still hope that Belle is going to be okay. Great one!

You succeeded in making Rachel look really proffesional ! Congrats for that ! I hope Belle, Charlie and her sister will all be okay! Good chapter!

Hmm, I wonder what's up with Belle. Hope, that she wakes up soon. I wonder how long will it take before Charlie figures out the meaning of the E-Mails ? Good update!

I was so confused, at first I thought it was Belle, then I thought it was Luc and finally it comes out that it was Beth. You wrote it great, the tension was always in the air. I really hope that Belle is okay. Looking forward to the next one!

Brilliant chapter, too bad that somebody has to die. I hope that Charlie and Jack figure it out fast!

Shouldn't have posted it Now everybody who read it wants to read it so baaaad

Oh damn, I hope Belle and all the other are okay. But where the hell is Lucas ? Did the guy already catch him ? ahh, so waiting for the next chappie.

You always hit us with something totally unexpected, that's great! I wonder where the guy got the keys, something to do with the cop in one of the earlier chapters ? And is Luc being dragged into it ? Can't wait for that next chapter!

Good to see, that Beth's okay. The Cassie thing was so unexpected. And the guy who's swinging the knife is a total psycho :S Reallly looking forward to the next chapter!

Another great one. I hope Beth survives. As I thought, the murderer was really close to Belle and/or Mattie. Waiting for the next one.

I guess he really found them . But he seems to know a awful lot about them, is it someone close to them ? I hope Beth doesn't die, I think it would be to much for Mattie. A good chapter once again.

I thought it was Beth. Somehow I can't imagine Amanda searching for Belle, I knew she loved Belle, but still... And the ending is really weird, is that the murderer or a stalker of some sort ? And those hints for the next chapter really got me waiting for it Good chapter once again !

Another great chapter, but I still don't understand why Cassie's father hit her. Did it happen because Cassie was asking all these questions about the witness protection thing ?

Ahh, I thought that something happened between Cassie and her dad. I didn't think it would be so serious, I only thought she was crying because her dad yelled so hard at her.

Best fic I have read. I like every bit of it.

Another good chapter. Can't wait for the next one.

This is my first post in the fic threads, and I'm amazed. Sure you've got the characters written for you already, but the storylines that you create are wonderful. The witness protection thing, wow. I hope the next chapters will be as good as the previous 4 have been.

I think it was Wanted. It wasn't that good, but watchable.

17C is not even remotely warm, let alone "hot". Maybe that's why I said that it feels like 50c, when there's no wind, not even a breeze. Have ya even ever experienced temps even close to 50C? 17C, regardless of wind, won't feel anywhere near 50C. No, I have never felt a temperature close to 50c. But why are you even talking about this ? It's not your problem. It was really hot, working on a field, with no wind and the sun blazing on the top of my head. And on a sidenote, the 17c was measured in the shadow, I was on an open field with no shadow.

17C is not even remotely warm, let alone "hot". Maybe that's why I said that it feels like 50c, when there's no wind, not even a breeze.

I worked outside for the whole day and it was just so hot. No wind, no nothing, just sunbeams. It's only 17c here, but it feels like 50c :D

The sun was burning today. My face is red and so are my arms. Little bit windy.