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Wow.....a good twist...(I thought it was Aden's father coming back..but no...!) I hope Sean turning up does not spoil things between Nicole and Aden I sincerely hope not...but have a feeling that bad things will happen..... Looking forward to an update.....

Wow....an awesome update! I loved the conversation between Rachel and Brad, I can actually imagine them having a conversation like that on the show. Brad is that kind of man who usually make things look simple. I also love the Tony & Rachel interaction, and can't wait to read the update soon, esp. on the baby! Update soon....

Just caught up all the chapters up to now....and I must say that it is really awesome to see how's the relationship progressing with Aden and Nicole. I must admit, that I am now getting used to the idea of Nicole and Aden together. I am used to seeing Nicole with Geoff, Belle with Aden, but this story is going great, and I can't wait to see where it shall lead to. Well done! Looking forward to an update soon!

Brilliant! I love the outburst in the Diner and can't wait till Roman and Liz meet (is Liz Ella by the way?) and that Roman finds out he have a son! Can't wait to see where this leads. Looking forward to an update soon!

Thanks, charmed! I knew that it was a Tony character but wasn't totally sure...and yes of course the scene where Rachel found out about Bridget - that was another good scene. I love these kind of scenes, cos it shows Tony's vulnerably and his sensitive side. Anyway, aye, looking forward to an update soon...

Loved the update! You certainly didn't disappoint! I loved the fact that they talked about past relationships - that was cool. Nice! And I found it funny when they arrived home - good on Nicole for not rushing in, it shows a maturity in her. Can't wait for the next update!

Loved the update! I also loved that Nicole won't let Aden interrupt, and how that Aden just simply asked the question - that's awesome! I can just about imagine both together on H&A. Looking forward to another update!

You described Tony perfectly to his character as on H&A. :-) Loved that sentence, reminded me of one scene, when he found out about Jack, and angry and everything. I vaguely remember him clutching a cushion on the sofa in his house, something about it is familiar. Good little update and I certainly didn't expect the surprise to be about Rachel's father. Wow - Brad turning up is out of blue, looking forward to see what you have got in store!

Wow.......the ending (esp. the message Jack left on the answering machine for Martha) have sent a shiver down my back...and now I have goosebumps...I blame you for that! LOL A very beautiful written story. I loved it! Thanks

A good start, and I am liking what I see....would be interested to see where this goes! Looking forward to an update soon!

Good chapters! Can't wait to read an update soon!

I do have to agree with the above posters, your one-shot story is really excellent! I enjoyed reading that! I like Kristy and Miles together (am I going to get shot???!) but can see where you are coming from, Kristy and Kane were good together, but being on the run kinda spoiled it for me. Although, I am glad to see Kristy back on H&A!

Hiya....I am pretty new, and is slowly catching up with some recent Fan Fic stories, and I must say that your Fan Fic story is one of my favourite stories. I love the Tony and Rachel part and actually thought it might have been Kim at the bungalow but you threw that wayyy out of the field and brought in Jimmy - a very nicely twist in that one. I loved the grily chat between Leah and Rachel, after the honeymoon. Not too sure about Leah and Hugho...but I guess I will have to wait and see how that turns out. On the whole, your writing is really good, and you wrote the emtions very well, it showed the intense and strong emtions coming out from the beautifully written words, well done! Looking forward to an update, pretty soon....please!