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I loved the chapter! Can't wait to read the next chapter and finding out more about the case!

That was a great chapter and the date - lovely! Looking forward to the next update!

A fitting ending to what has been a great story! Thank you for sharing with us!

That was nice! I liked it - slow-paced - just right at this stage. Glad that the case was moved sooner so that Charlie and her friends/family can get past this quickly and sooner the better!

OMG! I didn't see that coming! Who could it be?? Update soon! Don't keep us in suspense! Seriously, a brilliant chapter, as always!

It was such a wonderful chapter, I liked the chat/interactions between Leah & Charlie and it was nice to know how they become really close like family and how VJ ended up calling Charlie his auntie. Like carywary, I'm wondering about how can one woman push the boat over the three men...mmmm...and the noises coming from the shed. Looking forward to more chapters!

I haven't commented much but I just wanted you to know that I've read all the updates! And, trust me, I have really, really enjoyed reading all the updates, all the developments between Charlie and Angelo, between Leah & Roman, Ruby and Xavier. Each relationship has been very different from each other but all were awesome and I look forward to more developments. I've really enjoyed reading about Ruby & Charlie's relationship - one from sister/sister changing to mother/daughter and the obstacles and attiudes they've faced and fought and shared everything - that was just awesome! I loved the teens in this - they all have been brilliant to Ruby and Xavier - especially after they have found out about Ruby and Charlie - I'm sure that at the back of their minds they are curious as to what happened but are keeping quiet and being there for them both and being supportive. That was brilliant! I loved the chat between Leah and Charlie in this chapter - just lovely - oh and I must mention that it is really adorable how that VJ look up to Charlie and making sure that she was okay etc. Lovely!

Finally caught up with the last few chapters and WOW! Just as it was going well with both of them communicating and trying to sort it out together, things got in the way and they are almost back to the old ways but I'm sure that eventually Ella and Roman will get there! Oh poor Gabby & Jacob - I can't believe that the name 'Gardy' is in play here...somehow I just have this feeling that it's not the same Gardy we know - maybe his father? brother? son? I'm sure we will find out soon! I really want to hug Ella - she has been through a lot and hopefully she will be able to get past what has happened and to be with Roman and to accept his loving and care without question. I can't wait to see how things will develop with Marcus and Martha - and also the unanswered question about the missing twin. Update soon!

Will tomorrow do? Well actually later today....... Only I'd like to get some sleep before work in the morning!! Hee hee, of course you can get some sleep first! A bit if encouragement, if you update today, I will update mine tonight!

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!OMG!!!!!!!!! I so didn't see that coming! What a great twist but oh, poor Sophie, poor Megan, and I can't imagine how Gabby will react when she finds out. PS. I'm scared to say this.. ..but UPDATE SOON!

That was a great ending to such a brilliant and awesome story! A bit sad to see it ending but you've done it well and I really enjoyed reading about everyone's adventures etc and the journeys everyone went through to get to where they are now at this point. Thank you for sharing with us!

Loved Nicole grabbing Geoff and Aden and getting them to talk! ohhh, no! I was hoping for Roman to realise that he was falling for Miles and they stayed together after all, despite getting 'false' together to help Geoff and Aden! But I still loved how that Miles misunderstood Roman about 'Charlie' - ha ha! Can't wait to see how Roman would react to that and Miles's reaction when he realises that Charlie was in fact a girl!

I'm so proud of Ella for not completely walking off or making Roman leave! They have gone a long way to get to the point where they are and I'm sure that they can fight through with that b*tch Martha! Can't wait to see what you've got in store for the rest of this!

Ooohhh...this is great! Update as soon as you can!

Tele writes such great stories with amazing other orginal characters - I suggest you read all the other stories she mentioned in the post above me. Tele, I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this! And I promise that I will update my story....someday lol

I have enjoyed the last few chapters but is very very curious about the ending to the last chapter... I'm hoping that you are planning a sequel...please?

My mouth opened wide as I read in shock that Ella had two babies, not one baby all that long time ago...wow! I'm glad that Ella seemed to handle it well with the letter and that she has the full support from Roman, her dad and Irene. Can't wait for the wedding day and will cross my fingers hoping that it will go well. Looking forward to the next update!

Wow that was just...wow...very emotional. Well-written! Hope Belle will get all the support she needs from friends and family around her. Update soon!

Totally loved that chapter!

Loved the last few chapters, especially this last chapter because it's some sort of a cheering up chapter with some comedy with Morag and the teens, which is greatly needed at this time, with the last few chapters focusing on Charlie and her family, and the emotions etc. Now that, I, the reader, is cheered up and happy, I look forward to more chapters and seeing how everyone will react to Charlie and Ruby's news.

I know I haven't commented on the past few chapters but I just wanted to let you know that I am still reading this and still loving it! So glad that Nicole and Roman had the talk about what happened and that Roman and Leah made the right decision to wait till they talk to Charlie, which is awesome. I grinned when Roman punched Robert - he so deserved it! Awww...Charlie and Angelo - I just love the interactions between them! I love Ruby and her interactions with everyone. Am glad that Nicole, Xavier and Romeo are helping each other over the accident and supporting Ruby, too. Liked the little scene between Irene and Charlie at the end. Glad to see that Charlie is on the way to recovery after some struggles and that she talked to Angelo and he was so supportive and everything. can't wait for the next update!

Awwww....that was just...gosh...heart-wrenching! Brilliant, the way you wrote each person's emotions through, and I loved the reminders of the photographs laying around in the house, and it just felt right that Ric was the one who was the 'narrator' - it seemed right that an outsider of some sort would comment on each photograph, you know? Beautifully done

Loved both chapters! Glad to see that Charlie is recovering well... Wow, Nicole found out about Roman and Leah, I wonder how Nicole reacted! Loved VJ and his little present! Ruby and Angelo's interactions were brilliant! can't wait for the next chapter!