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  1. Aria and Harry searching for Gigi's legs, haha! And Harry acting like such a typical macho guy here, that was funny. Valen... yeah! It was a chapter without Brax, but I enjoyed it... as long as the next one has some Brax I will be happy! Aria wanting her mummy's attention, aw, she really knows how to wrap her parents around her little finger. But at that age and within certain boundries, it is really cute! And this was definitely cute! Can't wait for more!
  2. Glad they were able to talk about the whole marriage thing, they both know where they stand now. Poor Brax, but I think he kind of knew he wouldn't be able to adopt Jacob. Charlie is right though, it is only a piece of paper... but still, I understand Brax for willing to make it official. Just like I understand Charlie for wanting to make 'their love' official. Can't wait to read more Danni, I am loving every single bit of this story.
  3. Oh dear god Cheryl! Awkward! Brax and Charlie were so cute at the bar. Brax was actually jealous, it was good to see. They are still in love after all those years! Aw! I loving it! Aria is so cute.
  4. Brax doesn't want to get married, waw... hope he changes his mind. He should at least talk to Charlie about it, glad he is not the biggest fool for not taking a hint! Jacob as a pirate again... aw, so cute! The room sounds lovely, loved Brax and Bianca's chat by the way. What Brax said about Charlie was really sweet. But one little thing... You can't leave it here! Such a cliffhanger! I want to know what the letter says! Also, wouldn't Brax have a better chance to adopt Jacob if he is married to Jacob's mother? Loved it Danni! I will be looking forward to the next update! Thank you for this!
  5. Jacob was cute here (again). It was nice of Brax to come home to be with his family, but the guy really doesn't take a hint. Someone needs to tell him, really, Bianca, Ruby or Xavier... even Jacob, I don't care, as long as someone tells him loud and clear. Could he be this oblivious on purpose? I don't think so... Thank you for the update! Can't wait for the next one!
  6. Oh my god Brax! Just propose already! Poor Charlie, but I must admit... I haven't heard her giving him little hints, alright, Brax is supposed to take the initiative, but now Charlie said 'so much is changing', he is even less likely to propose... it would be another change (in his mind). I hope he proposes soon though! Jacob was so cute! Getting up so early, aw! Sad to hear about Morag passing away. Hope Charlie liked the earrings though! Thank you for this update! Hope you had a great Christmas!
  7. Charlie and Brax were so adorable here! I am glad Aria knows now it was Charlie who got her the dog. Gigi! So cute! Aria is certainly a daddy's little girl, but Charlie shouldn't feel left out... she loves her mummy too. I can't wait to read more! Loved it!
  8. Poor Brax, he can't change the past, so if his criminal record prevents him from adopting Jacob, so be it. That little paper doesn't matter anyway, unless something happens to Charlie, they could take Jacob away from him them... but that is worst case scenario of course! I hope they get out of their money problems soon, especially with the twins on the way. Can't wait for your next update Danni! Are there going to be Christmas presents (apart from te ones 'Santa' brought for Jacob)?
  9. Aw, that was too cute! Oh! Loved it! Love the ending! They are a real family, including Ruby, I am sure she will figure that out soon. Thank you so much for this Danni! Happy holidays!
  10. Oh come on Brax! Bit of an idiot here! Of course you have to get up at night for the babies, they are your kids as well. You didn't include Ruby in your 'happy little family', must be hard for her... please, please, please make that up to her. Ask Charlie to marry you! Thanks Danni! Can't wait for your next update!
  11. Charlie was (too) nice to Tegan here. I hope Tegan gets it now and stops playing games... that her main goal is to be a good mother from now on. I can't wait to read more. I am wondering how Brax will react when Charlie, Tegan and Lily go to him. Still hoping Brax and Charlie will work it out!
  12. Aw Charlie, she is jealous because Brax is Aria's hero. It is probably just a phase Aria is going through, but it must be hard for Charlie. Thankfully Brax handled it well, really sensitive. He should work on getting that 'thing' out of the living room though! Hope Aria gets it now that daddy didn't try to eat mummy, even though it is still cute she was thinking that! Can't wait to read more! I am loving this!
  13. Thank you Danni, you know why I really liked Bianca and Charlie's little chat here. Bianca is right, Charlie is a real 'mum'. To Jacob and to Ruby... loved their conversation. Charlie is probably so proud of her. The twins really cost a lot of Charlie's energy I noticed. But that is pretty logical, thankfully she is still coping. Even though Brax gets to deal with her hormones. I love how patient he is with her, she is probably driving him nuts but he puts up with it and tries to do whatever she wants him too. Adopting? Not too sure, they should get married first. And for that, Brax has to propose... so, hurry up Brax, she is clearly waiting for you to pop the question. Can't wait to read more! This is such an amazing story!
  14. Another great update. Is it me or would Charlie not mind if Brax proposed? I got that impression, although it is a bit weird that she doen't want to move but she does want to get married. A wedding is also pretty expensive, unless it is small and simple of course, but still... And all that food! They were so funny. Still hoping both children are okay. Thank you and I can't wait to read more!
  15. That was so nice, Brax cried... Aw! Hope the first baby is alright. Thank you Danni, I loved it, can't wait to read more!
  16. That was so funny! Aria still convinced daddy ate mummy, they better explain things to her. Or try to do a better job then 'daddy was hugging mummy'. Wonder what that person from the shop has to say to Charlie. I am also thinking about Cheryl, what if she hears Aria say 'daddy ate mummy', I can hear a lecture coming. Anyway, thank you so much for this update, I loved it and I can't wait to read more.
  17. Oh dear god! Cheryl getting married, waw! Good thing Brax was okay with it. Aria thinking Brax was eating Charlie was so cute! She stood up for her mummy there, good girl. The present from Brax... beyond adorable, really... he loves her so much. I can't wait to read more of this!
  18. Waw, I was sad when Nothing lasts forever was finished, but now I have got this one to cheer me up! Thank you! Poor Brax, Charlie is hormonal, I am sure it will pass... eventually! Jacob is still so cute, they are such a nice family. And a little baby on the way, waw, I am so happy. I am silently hoping for a girl, but I would be happy with a boy too. I am loving this already and it was only the first chapter! I really can't wait to read more Danni, thank you so much for writing the sequel.
  19. That was so sweet! Charlie and Brax still being madly in love after all those years, aw! And I am glad Cheryl is a little impressed with it, don't need more trouble from her side! Glad the food was nice, Charlie did a good job. Only christmas presents for Aria? No present from Brax to Charlie? Can't wait to read more, I love this story so much!
  20. Oh that was so sweet! Jacob is calling Brax daddy! I am so glad about that, Jacob's biological father is dead and he does need a father figure, so I think it is great he sees Brax as his father. I am so happy they want another one, I am sure Brax will love his own baby and Jacob equally. Ruby graduated! YAY! Jacob was sweet in his pirate outfit. I can't wait to read your sequel Danni, of course I will read it! Bring it on! And thank you so very much (really can't describe how much) for this amazing story, I will re-read it again and again, I am sure of it! Thank you!
  21. That was so cute! Charlie and Brax are fully back together now. YAY! I love how Jacob is warming up to Brax, I hope that bond continues to grow in the next chapters. I can't believe it is nearly the end of your story, I am enjoying it so much. I am looking forward to your updates every day and I would like to thank you for your entire story. I am loving it. Can't wait for the next updates Danni.
  22. Great that Ruby is happy for Brax and Charlie. Jacob is finally warming up to Brax, that is so amazing. I would love to see some more 'bounding' between them. Is it too early for Brax to play football with Jacob? Probably yes, but still... I love their interaction. Thanks again for these lovely updates! You are fabulous!
  23. Aria! She is so cute! A bit sad in the end, but I guess she needs to learn these things. Aw! That was so cute. So sweet! I am so in love with this story... and with Aria! Thank you so much for this!
  24. That was so funny! Heath and Jake... how did you come up with that? Hilarious! I loved it! Poor Brax, he thought his wife was talking about his brother like that. So funny! Well done! I can't wait to read more... and yeah, Charlie is right... Heath all the way!
  25. That was so funny! Are we moving? Haha! A great Charlie and Brax scene with Heath adding that extra bit! So great! Aria wanting Charlie's doll is so cute. I love this story so much. Thank you so much for it! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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