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Brilliant, your writing is fantastic - I'm really choked reading it. You capture what I think Dalby's feelings at the time would have been. Can't wait to read more and your new fan fics.

Sounds great, I really wish they had done more about Ric's past on the show, he just seemed to be over everything so quickly. It will be great to read some more about his past and his feelings. You're a really talented writer - looking forward to it!

Brilliant, I've been looking forward to an update and you certainly didn't disappoint. The way you capture Ric's feelings is really great, I hope Sally and Mattie help him deal with it. I can't wait to read more.

I love this story, I hope there are two more chapters. The way you capture Ric's thoughts is really good. Looking forward to reading more.

Brilliant, this is a great story. I really hope you write some more

Brilliant, this is really good. You captured everything so brilliantly. Can't wait to read more!

Briliant fan fic - loving it can't wait to see if they get together!

Absolutely brilliant - this is edge of your seat stuff can't wait for more

It's getting so exciting I don't think I can take the suspense much longer! - brilliant writing

Brilliant - can't wait to read more

The suspense is killing me!!! Can't wait for the next chapter

This is brilliant and you're way of writing is excellent! Always keeping us on the edge of our seats!! Can't wait to read the next chapter

This is really great - can't wait to findout what happens next!

This is a really good fan fic, I would love to read more - I think there is more to Ric breaking up with Maddie than him just using her.

That was wonderful - I'm so sad it's over but it was a great ending. Well done

Brilliant - can't wait!

Great chapter - I can't wait to see what she does next. I really hope that Ric and Mattie stay together.

Brilliant two chapters - so glad that Ric and Maddie have made up!

Brilliant chapter once again - your fan fics are great. Can't wait to find out what happens next!!

Poor Mattie and Lucas. I actually feel really sorry for Ric as well. Great chapter

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Brilliant two chapters as usual! I hope they don't split up!!

Brilliant chapter - looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Another great chapter - I agree with Kase I really hate Parker and Lily, I really hope that Cassie and Mattie give them what for and Ric and Lucas come to their senses and tell them to get lost. Looking forward to the next chapter!