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I AM SO SORRY I HAVEN'T COMMENTED IN MONTHS! :'( My internet broke down! But every update has been amazing, it literally took me an hour to read up to date! Soooooooo glad Charlie and Angelo are working things out, no matter how hard Shelly tries to ruin everything! I can't believe she's sticking her beak back in again by trying to kiss Angelo! What IS her problem? Loving this, more soon please ♥

I love how VJ equates Recovery with Soup It made me laugh. A lot! The preview looks really good, can't wait for the next update

Aaaw I liked the chapter. The messages were all really sweet and emotional. The preview looks really good! Update soon please!!

You're definately not making it to long! I hate it when suddenly they're up and running around after getting hit by a car or summin. And its a really good opportunity to see Charlie's emotions over the recovery period. It was nice to see how Ruby gave Charlie the strength to carry on and walk! I hope things will get better for her! More soon please

Aaaw that last chapter ws beautiful :') It was so perfect and I'm LOVING Angelo's sensitive side. How he remembered everything and he's so caring to Charlie's every need. I'm so glad things seem to be getting back on track now! More soon please

Great chapter, the ending was fine Hope the op goes well! Update soon please!

The last line made me laugh-it was so sweet! Bless Romeo, Nicole & Xavier, I like how youfocused on how they were affected by witnessing the accident. More soon please!

That was a lush chapter I loved how Angelo went out to buy her peanut butter! Just so cute! I agree with what some of the others have said, I'm a bit wary of Jay. I mean, he seems nice and friendly but I just feel a bit.. Cautious about him. It'd be nice to find out about his background ;) Poor Charlie, i wish she wouldn't be so worried about her burns. Hopefully Angelo's wish will come true and he'll get his family back! More soon please

Aaaw that chapter was beautiful :') I loved Ruby's little rant about everything she wanted, typical 5 year old fashion ;) I loved VJ's cheeky comments about the sleep fairy as well Things seem to be looking up for Roman&Leah as well aye! So much love for Angelo, its really sweet how he's there for Morag. More soon please!!

Same, I've only just caught up. Your writing has definately improved and the part the others mentioned was fabulously written. Can't wait for more ;D

Hopefully the baby will be okay :/ I feel so sorry for Nicole, her Dad is dead and she feels like no-one cares. Charlie drunk was hilarious, though I feel sorry for Richard :/ Update soon ;D

Go on Nicole! I'm glad she's trying to make him see sense so Roman can make amends. Looking forward to the next chapter (: update soon please!

Oh no! I hope Rachel and the baby will be okay!! :S And her and Tony were getting excited about the baby as well! Euurck, why is Angelo being such a douche! I can't believe he cares about his job more than Charlie. I hope she drops him in it! More soon please (:

Aaaw I loved the last two updates The conversation with Martha and Ava was really cute and well-written. I don't blame Charlie for going off about Angelo about the promise he made to Ava but I'm glad that they were able to talk in the next chapter. I loved Ava's sneaky little plan to get them talking and to be fair it actually worked pretty well! Hopefully now on this trip away they can sort more things out (: More soon please!

Lucky she only fainted. She should know better than to not eat! It's good Ruby called Anglo, he had a right to know what was going on :/ The talk with Rachel was really touching and hopefully Charlie may be able to forgive Angelo or at least talk to him. Fingers crossed they can get through this! Looking forward to the next update!

I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in AGES, I've been away on holiday :/ I've read all the chapters I missed (and there's A LOT, you update amazingly fast) and they're fantastic! You get everyones thoughts and emotions perfectly and I love the way you intigrate thoughts into the story. Charlie's journal is an excellent idea as well, it gives you a really clear view of what she was feeling back then yet it also helps the story to progress I'm glad Angelo's realised he loves her >< and I love how he's always there to support her at rehab. And Ruby seems to be accepting what has happened, or at least finding out why which is a step in the right direction. I like VJs little moments in each chapter because they add moments of humour into the situation Brilliant updates and I'm waiting for more Georgie xx

Aaaw Ava's so cute Of course Angelo would know what her favourite dolls are ;) Poor Angelo though, you just know that his promise is going to backfire back at him :/ Uh-oh I hope Charlie's okay! More soon please xx

Oh my days! I missed a lot on my two-week holiday!!! On the other hand though, I got mass fiction reading time Right. I can't believe he cheated on Charlie! Especially with that ShellyB**ch! But I can see that he really regretted it, and he was completely drunk at the time... Its all Shelly's fault, I mean, she knew he was married and he had kids yet she still fooled around with him! And then to come up to him afterwards and ask him to call her! The complete stirrer! I'm glad Ruby slapped her. I hope Charlie is able to forgive him, though I understand that at the moment she doesn't want to be near him. I feel really sorry for the kids, especially Ava as she's old enough to understand whats going wrong. It was really heartbreaking when you wrote that scene between Charlie and Ava though it made me smile when Charlie cheered her up by tickling her. I can't believe she's going to have a termination though! And it does seem as if she's almost trying to spite Angelo! I hope Ruby is able to get hold of him before Charlie can do anything stupid. I know she doesn't want the baby, and never has, but you kust know that she will regret it if she gets rid of the baby. They say you don't know what you love until its gone. I hope Angelo can stop her!! Brilliant updates, and I hope this review makes up for the ones I've missed! ;) Looking forward to more, Georgie xx

I just read the last two chapters and just... Wow! They were amazingly written and just wow... I'm going on holiday for 2 weeks so I won't be able to read or review any updates for that time! I'll just have to do a massive one after ;)

Go on Angelo ;) Roman and Charlie should go on a 'break' like the Friends storyline Great update, more soon please!

Oooh that's not good :/ Poor Angelo, first his baby might die, then his daughter rejects him, then Charlie tells him she doesn't even want the baby. I just want to give him a big hug Update soon please!

Miles!! Oh my days I hope he's okay.. I have this feeling that it could have been Charlie who attacked him, yknow after she worried that he might have seen her with Roman O____o I hope I'm wrong though! More soon please (:

Oooh wow, so it IS Tony? Or are they like imagining it? But all 3 of them couldn't so Im guessing it is him! But... how? More soon please

I hope Charlie's going to be alright :/ I love how much Angelo cares for her and I thought the Ruby/Angelo moment was really sweet Oooh I don't like that Pamela -___- I still can't believe Roman nearly cheated on Charlie with her as well! More soon please

Oooh I was a bit worried for a bit that he was going to attack her or something, but lukcily he seems nice Glad she's getting over Geoff More soon please ><