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Wow, what a great update. I really love the way you processed everyone's individual thoughts in particularly Ruby. It's interesting to see what's running through the young girl's head. Feeling so lonely, confused yet wondering about her relationship with Charlie. I hope she finds answers to some of the things she is looking for soon but that it will bring her closer to Charlie. Also, the journal entries from Charlie. She wanted to be a mum to Ruby, it must have been so hard for her to give her up. Aw, the preschool part where they **** the door in her face, heartbreaking. I hope she gets to hear the word she's been longing to hear one day, 'Mum'. I hope Ruby gets a chance to talk with Charlie soon and also read some of these entries to see how much she was loved and wanted only if the circumstances were different. Charlie still has thoughts to write in the journal? Wonder what she is going to write down? Plus the missing birth certificate with Charlie listed as her mum <3 Glad that exists and not just the one Ruby has. Thanks for the updates. Hope you update soon, I'm loving this!

Great update, Cally! I love the stuff with Charlie and Ruby but I hope they work it out soon and Ruby gets some answers, whatever they might be. I love that Charlie called Ruby her daughter without a second thought or stumble, she really wants to be there for her, you can tell. I love the way your writing it all and adding Angelo in. I hope they have a future together, they would make a great couple. This whole birth certificate thing has still got me baffled, wonder where your going with that. I've been thinking and thinking but still draw blanks. Wonder if these past thoughts (jorunals) are going to help Charlie, maybe Morag has a way. Can't wait for another update! xx

Really enjoying the updates. Wondering what's behind the birth certificate issue. Interesting. Can't wait for more.

I really love the relationship between Ruby and Angelo. Although his made some comments in the past, I think he really looks to Ruby as if she were his own and it's really touching. I'm glad they were able to have that little moment and chat, I think it really helped them both understand things a little better. It was sweet. Glad the baby is ok too. And, wait, was that a smile from Charlie. She's feeling like she's ok with the thought of having this baby, perhaps. I really like that she's coming around. It would be so hard when they both want different things but don't want to hurt each other so I'm glad there's like a happy medium coming toward them in some way. Looking forward to see what Charlie's next reaction is from here on. Can't wait for more x

I hope Charlie is going to be ok, poor girl has been through a lot lately. Would love to see her come out of this ok. I love the emotions from everyone, you really cover all the characters really well and I love that. Angelo is so sweet, just wanting to know if Charlie is ok and being there for her plus wanting to also be there for Ruby too. It's really sweet. Poor Ruby, she breaks my heart. Watching her go through all the pain while waiting on news of Charlie. I hope everything works out for them soon. Can't wait to read more x

Love the latest part. Little Ava is cute and her colour of choice is a good one. Had to laugh at her going through all the colours but I think something might be up with her and the way she's acting towards her dad, maybe she just wants her mum. I hope everything is ok with the baby and it's a glitch or something with the ultasound machine. That would be awful. I know Charlie doesn't really want the baby or hasn't really come around to the whole idea of being excited but I'm sure it would be coming. Can't wait to see what's next!

My comments are far and in-between but I just wanted to say how I'm loving this story so far. Love little Ben sleeping through the whole ordeal while poor little Ava, I hope her arms ok, not mention the baby. Lots of drama going on but all at the same time loving it. Can't wait for more

Great to see you back Danni. I hope you had a good holiday. It seems to be getting interesting and even more interesting with Charlie's memory loss. I hope she starts to remember little things soon. Poor Angelo, his hanging in there but it must be hard. Hopefully things will work it's way out soon.

Hope everything is ok with Charlie

Love the ending Cute little family. I look forward to more of your writing

Love it. A second date cute. Can't wait for more

Love the update. Can't wait for more

Great update Looking forward to more.

Poor Charlie Please update soon.

It's nice to see some nice interaction between Charlie and Ruby. Glad Ruby is being nice again, altho someone the way she acted was out of line she did have her reasons so it's nice to see them together. Looking forward to more :0

Great updates. Love this one.

Cute chapter. Love these little 'family' scenes. Can't for more.

Great update. Hope Charlie is ok

Great chapter. Love the little chat between Charlie and Ruby <3

Loved the little scene between Ruby and Lucy. It's also good to see Ruby acting nicer towards Charlie although all the fighting with Scott must be really hard on Charlie *sigh* Can't wait for more!

Great update I'm really enjoying it. Can't wait for more.

Cold winds but the sun is out.

Amoured

Freezing! Around -5 degrees today.

The Ugly Truth .. It was cute and funny!