This fic was great. I've been looking at it for a while now because I liked the title and the pairing was different to say the least. But I was thinking "Do I want to go there?" I'm not a fan of Jack, you see, and I didn't guess that this would all be happening 10 years down the track (you see where I may have been reluctant otherwise ).
But no, this was so beautiful, and I'm glad that I waited until after Friday's episode (Aus) to read it. It makes me appreciate where Jack would be coming from so much more, and that scene where he found Martha in bed with the "rat" - I could hear her so clearly saying that stuff to him. It would never be Martha's fault...
I like how it's a little unresolved as well. You can assume what you want from there - whether Jack and Martha were over for good, whether Lucas ever found out about it. It leaves just enough to the imagination
Well done