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callyha

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  1. Alf - 6 Angelo - 5 April – 6 Bianca - 3 Charlie - 16 Colleen - 5 Daniel - 5 Gina - 5 Indigo - 5 Irene - 5 John - 4 Leah - 6 Liam - 2 Marilyn - 7 Miles - 9 Mr Oddly - 3 Nicole – 6 Rachel - 4 Romeo - 6 Ruby – 2 Sid - 5 Tony - 5 VJ - 5 Xavier - 5
  2. Oh my god! Shelly! Drinking! AGGHHHH hope this means that she's a lying B****! Good on Colleen for rushing around to see Charlie and Angelo about what she had heard. And I'm glad she was able to keep the 'news' to herself! Loved Alf's reaction! So typical Alf!! Loved Ava correcting Colleen that made me chuckle Ben was so sweet when he wanted to go swimming, bless him. Glad he had fun with Charlie though Hopefully, Charlie and Angelo will finally find out if Shelly was telling the truth, and if she isn't (please), they can get back to been a family again Thank you for the update Danni! Loved it as usual!
  3. I saw the update this morning when I looked on my phone and was really ANNOYED that I couldn't read it properly. So anyway.... Great update! Hopefully the paternity test (If Angelo does go through with it) reveals that Shelly is a lying BITCH. Chuckled at Charlie when she asked Rachel to tell her what was wrong with Morag as a 'friend' lol Ava is so cute with her Gabriella doll, And Emily bless her, with Sharpay. What's Jay hiding? Nothing bad, poor Ruby More soon please Danni! I love this!
  4. Loved that little update. Tony and Rachel are so cute More soon xx
  5. Great little update Danni! Loved it! Ava made me chuckle when she called Shelly stupid! And I loved how Charlie had to bite her lip, that amused me! How cute are Ben and Ava? They're so adorable! Grr, Shelly, I HATE her and I can't believe she tried to tell Ava! She a bitch! Oh no! what's wrong with Morag? Hope its nothing bad More soon please Danni, I LOVE it!!
  6. I loved that update! How Tony was beating himself up over Rachel and how she saw that. That was lovely. And I'm glad Tony and Jack have spoken with Charlie and seen how upset she is over everything. More soon please
  7. I really LOVED this chapter Danni. Morag is so protective over Charlie, its sweet And when the baby moved I loved that whole little bit, especially: That made me chuckle and go all warm and fuzzy But Shelly GRRR I want to PUNCH HER LIGHTS OUT!!!! And Colleens reaction, hopefully she will keep this to herself, but saying that, it is Colleen..... MOre soon please Danni, I LOVE you fic xx:)
  8. Loved that whole update Danni! I at Ava when she was teased by Charlie and Ruby, and then by Angelo. It was really sweet! And how Ava said to Angelo "You told me 21" I LOVED that little bit, it made me chuckle The surf lesson was a great touch, and Ruby feels at ease with Jay, but that message And Charlie and Angelo are going to talk more about the situation with uber bitch -I mean Shelly- More soon please Danni! xx
  9. Amazing update there Danni! I loved it!! The first part of that chapter where Charlie and Ruby were talking about how Angelo had accepted Ruby as his own daughter was so beautiful! And I had to chuckle when Ruby said the line "Acutally I was your sister when you got with Angelo". I love how close Charlie and Ruby are in your fic, its really lovely to read. And beacuse you write so well, I can see this happeneing as I'm reading. I loved it when Charlie put High School Musical on to get Ava to talk to her again, that was so sweet how they spoke again, and I had to laugh when Ava said "Rewind it , I missed it because you were talking". Ava is so cute and adorable. As is Ben! Morag's reaction was so typical 'Morag'. But I can see where she's coming from. Hopefully things will sort out for Charlie and Angelo. And that Shelly will go away never to come back and not to be pregnant at all. Can't wait for the next chapter. I LOVE this fic
  10. Poor Ava, Charlie didn't mean to shout, bless her. Loved her and Ben trying to reach Charlie's phone to ring Ruby, that was so sweet! And I loved how Ruby rushed over to help her mum, I really loved that part. Especially when she said I'LL ALWAYS BE HERE Poor Charlie, I just want to give her a huge hug and tell her everything will be ok!! I HATE Shelly! She's a B****. Amazing update Danni! My hands were flapping all about and clapping too! Two updates in a short time, ME LIKEY!! More soon please xx
  11. How sweet was Ruby been concerned for Charlie??? I loved it!! But now Shelly And I can't believe she's pregnant! What's gonna happen? Charlie better lay into both of them! Poor kids, wanting answers but they get told to go upstairs, which I can understand, but still. bless them. I HATE Shelley! Wish she'd leave! Danni!!! Update soon, make it all better! Charlie and Angelo can't have any more set backs!!!
  12. I loved that update! How Rachel is feeling, so vulnerable and afraid, it felt real, you wrote that so well! I'm glad Irene stayed with Charlie and listened to her, poor girl, everyone avioding her More soon please! That preview sounds exciting/worrying!
  13. Hands were going again! I really LOVE your fic Danni! I LOVE LOVE LOVE it! So glad Charlie and Angelo have worked it out and I'm glad Charlie will move in to his house! Ava and Ben are sooooo cute, love them! You write them so well! I can't wait for the next update, I'm loving this story, loving all the cute things the kids do and I love how Ruby is all flustered with Jay and i love hoe Charlie and Angelo can still work things out and still love each other! More Soon please
  14. Esther is doing an amazing job. Looking back over her portrayal, she had got better as she's gone on. Charlie at the moment: I love all the scenes that are going on between her and Ruby. (Writers have finally got mother/daughter scenes!) although, I think Charlie is taking too much on: IE trying to help Angelo, sort the mess with the alcohol thing, sort a functional relationship with Ruby. She need to tackle one thing at a time. But, like I saw: Love Esther's portrayal as Charlie, thinks she's AMAZING and Charlie is -without a doubt- my favorite character
  15. Great update. Glad Leah is helping Tony and Rachel And I hope the talk Jack and Tony have with Charlie will answer some questions and prove she's innocent! More soon please
  16. Danni! My hands really really hurt!!! I was clapping again like a freak! (Really, you have no idea how much! ) I LOVED this chapter! All of it! How sweet was Angelo remembering what they had at their wedding? I thought that was really sweet. And how he planned everything out for the night. Angelo is so sweet! I love him! Charlie and her cravings for peanut butter is hilarious! I could see her eating peanut butter on the show I wanted to hug Angelo when he said what he had missed with Eva when he was in prison, bless him! Hope Charlie and Angelo move back in together soon! Loved the update Danni, More soon please
  17. I loved that chapter, It was really nice. I liked how Ruby and Lucas were there for Nicole when she needed them. The support she would need. Glad charlie and Richard were honest and can now be friends, more soon please
  18. Danni, I really look forward to reading your updates. I actually clapped like a freak when I saw the update!! . I LOVED it! How sweet is Angelo for wanting a boy so they have two of each? Glad Charlie is working on her marriage, they WILL work it out! And how sweet was Angelo for having his meal taken away for Charlie? So sweet! Ava and Ben sound like they have been a right handful for Ruby, but at least she has coped, and Jay! He seems nice, but I'm beginning to think there's more to him Can't wait for more! (But I don't think my hands are looking forward to it...) Update v. soon!!!!
  19. Danni! *Give BIG BIG hug* I loved this update! All of it! Jay is so lovely, Ben and Ava are so cute. And Angelo and Charlie Still so much love there! I loved the beginning with the peanut butter craving, And I loved how Angelo was assuring Charlie that the burns didn't change her in any way. More soon please Danni, I LOVE this fic!!! xxx
  20. Great update! Feel so sorry for Jack -he's torn over what to do! Can't believe what Angelo has done, to poor Charlie Hopefully, the truth will come out! Preview looks great... Can't wait for more!
  21. Aww, I love how you are portraying Charlie and Ruby's relationship. Its so perfect! And I loved their little hug at the beginning How cute I really hope Ruby does move forward, Jay seems really nice. And I am so glad Charlie was able to bring herself to forgive Angelo for what he did. (He still is a twat for sleeping with her), but I really hope Angelo regains Charlie's trust before the baby is born, and I loved More soon Danni, I absolutely LOVE this fic! Cally xx
  22. Amazing update Danni! Loved it Charlie and Martha have such a good friendship, I'm glad Martha is there for Charlie in her hour of need And I laughed when I read How sweet is Jay for comforting Ruby? I loved it. And I think Ruby is liking him, otherwise she wouldn't have told him (nearly) the reason why Charlie was so young when she had Ruby. Can't wait for the next update Danni, I really LOVE this!
  23. Yes, you're writing is definitely improving. It was good to begin with but I must say, mine wasn't perfect when I first started writing but it gets easier to correct the speech of characters & of course the use of description improves, along with vocabulary. Normally, I would also say spelling but mine are written on a word document & then copied & pasted so most of my spellings are okay unless I have forgotten to spell check :/ & you are very welcome for the comments. I am enjoying this fic, it's amazing & so therefore, you deserve a lovely comment from me. Now, as per usual Cally, perfect emotions. I was reading older chapters you have written earlier & I noticed how much of an improvement there is when you are portraying the character & their feelings. I am also loving the fact that you are incorporating ideas from the show. It works well & realistically. As a reader, I can see it unfolding. Everything about that chapter was perfect & then I read the following part. I didn't actually think your fic, or that chapter in particular, could have gotten any better until I read that part. Do you know how amazing that bit is? Did you define that yourself? Because when I read it, I couldn't help but relate to it dramatically. I really was an eye opener & made so much sense to me, seeing as I more often than not, a confused person. Lol. Just wow, Cally. A perfectly & beautifully written chapter once again & of course, as per usual. I loved it. I loved every second, every word, every emotion, every character portrayal. Words cannot describe that chapter or the part I selected in particular. Well done. Love Carina xxx Thanks Carina, The EMBRACE part was part me, part help. I just thought it would help describe what I saw in my head. I am so glad you liked that. (You have no Idea what my face was like when I read it)
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