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Danni! Sorry to hear about your papa. my condolence to you and your family xx Fab update! Poor Charlie for been alone when she went into labour, must have been scary! I had to laugh at Xavier's reaction to having his hand held Hopefully Brax gets there in time, he can't miss the birth of his babies! Charlie will kill him! Lil Jacob bless him. can't wait for the next one Danni

A fan-dabby-doo chapter! Charlie's right: a piece of paper doesn't mean anything, Brax is as good Jacob's dad anyway! At least they have both said about the idea of marriage now, and its something that could be on the cards in the future Most excellent Danni. Keep them coming!

Another great update Danni! Loved how Brax and Bianca did the nursery, even Brax telling Charlie not to paint! So, Bianca's little persuasion of marriage to Brax hasn't worked??? I don't think she could have been any more subtle! I loved their chat though, its nice that they are great friends and love Charlie, and I love that Bianca is the surrogate auntie to the growing brood. The room sounds lush I hope its good news about the adoption! Update again soon please Danni

Less than 10 degrees Cold Wet windy MISERABLE.... well, it IS 02:26......

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Great update Danni! Loved Charlie and Bianca's chat, feel for Charlie though, not having any for 8 weeks, a long time really! Jacob is just so cute, Ruby and her Matthew (Can't spell his surname, so we'll move right along) films! bless her Brax, seriously?? do you need a freaking house to fall on ya? PROPOSE already! (can't believe I am saying this, proposing is romantic and I don't do romance!) Update again soon please!

Fab couple of updates Danni! Jacob continues to be adorable Brax, PROPOSE already! I did feel so sorry for Charlie when she thought he'd got her an engagement ring Hope their money troubles don't last too long, especially with the twins coming! Please update again soon

Great update once more Danni! Hope the babies are okay and I hope Charlie and Brax can do something in the bedroom; I get that Brax doesn't want to 'harm' the babies, but he won't. Poor Charlie, everything will be heightened for her and Brax won't do it with her Ruby and Xaiver letting Jacob in their bed until Charlie and Brax got home was sweet. Update again soon please:) Merry Christmas

Great chapter Danni. Ruby has to realise that Brax has taken on the father role with her, he just doesn't want to show it as much as he does with Jacob. Still, the bit with them was sweet the snake zapping guns! how cute was that? Ruby and Jacob so cute Update soon please Danni

Charlie, Brax, Ruby, Xavier and Jacob were sitting at the dinner table, enjoying their dinner and talk had turned to names for the babies. “So” Brax said “We can’t really go on calling them Baby A and Baby B once they are born, so what about DJ and CJ” Brax grinned “Darryl Junior and Charlie Junior. And that’ll work for boy and a girl or for two boys” Brax grinned. Charlie sighed lightly as she reached out and hit his arm. “Be serious” “I was” Brax said. “Then no” Charlie shook her head. “You know this would be easier if you knew what you were having” Xavier said before he took a drink of his beer. “But we know” Jacob said seriously. “She aving babies” The adults all laughed at the little boys comment. “No laugh at me” Jacob! could you get any cuter??? Loved this chapter Danni! (I keep saying it, but you do an even better chapter each time so I have to keep putting it) Some of the names are so cute! And they're looking into the adoption after all.....hopefully all goes well Poor Ruby, I'm sure Brax does think of you as part of his family. Don't get upset Update again soon please Danni

Fab update Danni! Bianca wanting to buy matching outfits for the twins if they are the same sex had to laugh at her reply They're freaking cute Jacob is just getting cuter and cuter with each chapter, made me chuckle again when he repeated to Bianca what Charlie said Loved charlie and Ruby's moment so sweet. And poor Charlie not been able to get up! Update again soon danni! Amazing writing!

LOVED these updates Danni! Chapter 5 Charlie eating all that food! Well, at least she has the excuse! and Brax been in awe was funny Colleen been wound up by Brax was funny, she just needs to have things like that happened to her sometimes! (ooh I am evil.....) Jacob is just so cute! He's adorable! )Can I steal him away? Bianca can't have him!) Chapter 6 I had to giggle when Charlie wanted it and Brax did until he felt the babies kick. And the comment about not reaching was hilarious! I love how you write Charlie and Brax, its so sweet! And the whole PJ thing.... again, funny and sweet. Brax wants to adopt Jacob! Awwwww Jacob will be told about Angelo, Charlie doesn't need to worry about that, Brax doesn't seem the kind to push him out. Please update again.....LOVE this!

hehe, I'm getting good now! Im commenting when you've updated! (big step for me ) Loved it. Brax, propose, Charlie clearly wants you too...she just needs to say it! Colleen will you ever think before you speak?? Sounds like a good offer for Ruby there Update soon please

Lovely update. Brax crying Hope nothing is wrong with baby A.....but I got a sneaky feeling that you'll add lots of drama (I mean that in a good way, ya follow??? ) Update soon

Fab fic! Just read the chapters now...can't believe I've only just read them! This is really great; I like how you've made the younger adult cast the teens of the bay! I feel so sorry for Charlie, am I right in thinking you've done it from when Ruby 'adopted' by Elsie & Ross?? Heath is funny Brax and Charlie are super cute Bwax! awww Casey! And Lottie! I love the name and its so cute that Ruby calls Charlie Lottie! Update soon please

Oh My god! If I have a son, I want him to be as adorable as Jacob! he's got to be the cutest fictitious boy I've read! TWINS!!!!!! No wonder she big at five months... Brax is gorgeous as always and I can see why Charlie is worrying about things, but thinking about how much money a baby (or two, in their case) costs isn't good... Xavier....bless him. You will get better Update soon please Danni! (And you don't have to stay in Canada forever.........just until you have this fic done and maybe a couple others ;) hehe)

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHtheres the sequel! Didn't think it'd be this quick Danni! But OMFG so good. Jacob still as cute as ever Charlie pregnant and poor Brax not been able to get anything right Update soon (Canadian air must be good for you )

Danni!!!!!!!!!!! Amazing! Fantastic end to the whole story, which, has been fab form start to finish! so cute that Jacob went dressed as a pirate! and Jacob calling Brax daddy! so super cute! Charlie and Brax trying for a baby! DEFINITELY will be reading the sequel........ Okay” Charlie nodded as she pulled back “Let’s do this. Let’s have a baby” “Yeah” Brax smiled as he pulled back from the hug and looked into Charlie’s expressive blue eyes. “Yes” Charlie smiled and Brax grinned excitedly as he pulled her into another hug. “And, you know” Brax said as he stayed in the embrace. “You’re right. Nothing does last forever” Brax said and Charlie pulled back and looked at him worriedly. “Nothing lasts forever” Brax smiled lightly as he cupped his hand around Charlie’s cheek. “Except you and me” Has to be the sweetest/loveliest bit I read! (And I ain't much of a romantic) Thank you fro writing this Danni!

I keep missing updates! Oh my chuffing god! Anyway..... all fantastic as usual. Shame Charlie lost her job, she was a good copper. But now she can get a job where she could spend more time with Jacob (Who by the way is just getting cuter) Ruby and Xavier moving to the city after Uni.....Charlie will be crushed (Obviously) Loved Xavier's and Charlie's banter about the cooking course in Sydney So glad Brax and Jacob are getting along so cute Charlie making Jacob bite himself... a good move, just the crying breaking her heart Loved the whole Charlotte Michelle bit and how they were winding Colleen up with the biting. can't believe its coming to an end.....but all good things have to. Wait a minute....did I hear you say something about a sequel???????? hehe update soon

Either I'm slack at commenting or you are ploughing through posting chapters (I'm gonna go with the latter ) I've missed loads! But I do read them whilst on lunch at work seeing as though I don't take a book to work lol. I can't believe Xavier got arrested! You can't imagine how I was when I saw that. I really love how you are writing this storyline with the rape, its so well written. Ruby is happy about Charlie and Brax been together is I have lots to say about these updates, but I'd end up writing bucket loads....and you know how much I love this story anyway Fantastic as usual Danni...fantastic!

Love the teasing going on between Charlie and Brax so glad they are back together too! Hopefully Brax can bond with Jacob, I'm sure he will so, Casey sort of turned himself in.... at least he done the right thing Update soon Danni, this is great!

Fab chapter Little Jacob makes me laugh... "Should mummy date Brax?" "NO" I love how, even though Ruby has been through something horrible, she still wants Charlie to be happy. and its nice that she is ok with Charlie been with Brax Hopefully now Ruby will stop showering! Xave still loves her and finds her beautiful so that should be a confidence booster for her Xavier and Charlie's chats are and I wonder if Charlie is going to Brax to see if he knows where Heath and Casey are...either that or she going to the copshop..... hmmm Update soon please Danni

Jacob and his biting.....oh dear! A gummy bite might just have to do. I really can't decide who is telling the truth....I don't think either would lie about it, maybe its one of those things where Ruby said no, but she said it too quietly and Casey didn't hear, therefore Rape in Ruby's way of thinking and not Rape in Casey's.....that has happened a time or two. Its a shame Charlie is off the case, she could have sorted things out, but I can also see why she has been. All she can do is be there for Ruby like she is been its to read Update soon please Danni!

Great updates Danni, the plot thickening with the Casey&Ruby bit is really good. I have no idea which one to believe (I'm leaning more toward Ruby, I don't think she'd lie about something like this, especially with what happened to Charlie, but at the same time, I really can't see Casey been that type of person) I love Ruby and April's friendship, its so nice and I just like how April is there for ruby if and when she is needed Charlie shouldn't really push Brax away, he isn't to blame in this, but I can see where both Charlie and Bianca are coming from.....the twists in this story are FANTASTIC! update soon please Danni!

such a great update! Feel sorry for Ruby and for Charlie; Ruby for obvious reasons and Charlie for seeing history repeat itself in a weird way Xavier punching Casey was probably not the smartest move he's ever done, but the reasoning made it sort of okay....but Casey saying it was consensual.....hmm, this drama is gonna be good update soon please danni