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So happy Charlie and Brax are back together and Brax saying he, Charlie, Ruby and Jake will be a lil family bless That ending! I don't like the sounds of it! It sounds like Ruby has been raped, I hope not, but it seems that way. At leaset charlie knows what Ruby will be felling/going through if it is true... and, even though it was sad to read Ruby's breakdown in the shower, it was a beautiful image of Charlie not caring that she would get wet and was just holding Ruby Update soon please Danni!

Fantastic updates Danni! I keep reading them at work then try comment when I get home....... hasn't really gone to plan there....sorry I did feel sorry for Ryan, he did seem like a decent enough bloke, but he was right, if Charlie still has feelings for Brax in that way, she is never going to be able to build another relationship when she sees Brax a lot in the bay. I LOVED Charlie winding Ruby up about Xavier staying in her room I love how you write their relationship (Charlie&Ruby's) Is soo sweet Jakey just continues to be so adorable he's so cute! Cookie! The conversation between Charlie and Xavier was really sweet, something I think Charlie benefited from.....especially if she is going to go and see Brax... WHICH, by the way, I thought was hilarious that he used Jakey's building block as a way to see Charlie! and him texting her asking if Jake is happy now he has it back April pointing out that Charlie and Ruby are related to Colleen and that Colleen would have to go to the wedding if it were close family and friends going did raise a huge smile on my face too. Update soon please Danni!

I like that Charlie was honest with Ryan about everything, and now he wants time to think.......maybe he should say no to her so Charlie will then rethink Brax I hope Charlie is happy for Ruby and Xavier, I'm sure she will be Had to laugh at Xavier's Rory Update soon please Danni

Ending was fab! That's how it should have happened in the show! amazing

Sorry Danni! I've missed some amazing updates! I love the frienddship between Charlie and Bianca, its so sweet and they are more like sisters than best friends Jacob continues to be soooo cute! missing out his R's but the biting.... oh well Ryan does sound like a real nice bloke, and the advice he is giving to Charlie is helpful (biting Jacob for example, that's good, just maybe a gummy bite not a full on one lol) Ruby and Xavier getting engaged Heath and Brax both let out! wooohoooo! Hopefully Brax can prove he's gone on the straight and narrow and hopefully reunite with Charlie Update soon please Danni, these chapters have been super!

I've missed a great few updates here Danni! Loved them and how descriptive you've been, especially the dates because we all know Charlie misses Brax. Ryan does sound nice, be he is no Brax, but if Brax ain't coming back, maybe Charlie should let herself 'fall' completely for Ryan.......(don't really want that to happen, Charlie HAS TO be with Brax lol) Loved the imagery of Jacob asleep on Bianca, who was also asleep Keep going Danni, this is amazing work and I love reading! (Even though I'm not commenting as regular as I used to.....my bad)

Danni! Loved these two chapters! Bee dragging Charlie out for speed dating Bee reading to Jake ( Abble and Zeba! soooooooo cute!) The speed dating....i did have a moment where I giggled. Going from creepy, to a drop head, to a clean freak to a virgin to someone who could be right....a good variety! lol Hmmmmm wondering what gonna happen with Ryan.....(especially with Brax due for parole any time soon...) Update soon Danni! please

Glad that Bianca finally got Charlie to actually come to terms with the fact that Angelo is dead. I feel sorry for her because of the whole thing with Brax, and also I feel sorry for Jakey; he's not gonna know his dad Xavier coming to the rescue was sweet and I'm glad they gonna give it another go.... Update soon please Danni

Got no idea what weather is doing: I've seen rain, fog, sun and clouds today. Don't think it can make up its mind! Danni, send some snow this way would ya!

Great chapter Danni! Charlie watching Jacob sleep was soo sweet! 4 years in prison. I suppose its right, just sad for Charlie I did have to at Ruby about having a baby then a puppy! that made me chuckle More soon please Danni

I have really enjoyed reading this fic, it has never failed to amaze me I love how you ended it on a lovely high. Thank you for sharing this with us

I liked the Heath and Brax scene at the beginning, strong brotherhood they got, but Brax is right; Heath has Darcy to think about Charlie got Jacob Back! Loved how she banned Ruby from using the phone and how Morag just sat there and watched i think this covers my thoughts on this chapter Danni :wub: Update soon please Danni. loved this!

Fab two chapter Danni! Charlie pacing the room, waiting for the 5 mins to be over was funny; I could see Morag and Charlie been like that! Mother and Son. So cute! I hope that Jacob been in Charlie's house doesn't spoil chances of her getting him back, but if Nicole is there with them nothing bad should happen I kinda feel sorry for Nicole, she has lost Angelo and all their plans have gone, but she can still have that, just not with the one she thought it would be........ More soon please Danni

Great update! I know Nicole is hurting, but did she have to be a bitch to Charlie??? Casey and Ruby kissed! the Charlie & Ruby part at the end and Charlie saying she was thirty for her first true love I hope Jacob does go back to Charlie, he doesn't need to go to anyone else, him been taken away from Charlie was stupid in the first place! Update soon please Danni!

Great chapter Danni! Glad Charlie and Ruby have spoken and have decided to put this behind them and focus on the future and the three of them been a family I do hope Jacob goes back to Charlie, and it should be because of a mistake that was made, not because the father of the baby is dead. Nicole will be crushed when she finds out I love how Ruby is still trying to get Charlie to get back together with Brax But a stint in jail is what's needed, if nothing to punish him for having Jacob taken away from Charlie Update soon please Danni, this is great!

Hmm, that ending sounds a bit...... what's the word..... I think it could be Angelo Hammer becoming worried over Ruby getting worse was actually a weirdly nice change, shame it was just a tad too late.... she should be alright -Here's hoping- Update soon please Danni, this was great

Loved her since her first episode and I still love her now! She deserves to be happy and find love. Charlie Buckton

Loved this, I read it the other day on my lunch break and never got around to commenting. A crazy theory of yours turned into a fantastic one-shot! It was amazing and sad at the same time. I was -in truth- expecting a happy ending, but I like how you didn't have that and you kept it close to reality. Even though it is still sad Loved it, and if you have any more crazy theories.....share them lol

Nice update! Angelo, you either stop taunting Charlie with the fact that Jacob is with you or I'll punch you! And don't get involved in this situation, you'll make things worse, not better! Love Morag been back and helping Charlie and giving Angelo a piece of her mind! Brax, doing all he can to help Charlie Update soon please Danni

Great chapter! I understand why Charlie was hesitant to be worried about Ruby, but I'm glad Xavier continued to push with his concerns and now chalrie knows she's missing, but now she's blaming herself its not her fault! I hope Casey and Ruby are saved and are alright, I don't think Charlie could cope without Ruby More soon please Danni!

Angelo Nuff said I really hope Charlie does get Jacob back, she's done nothing wrong and she's been punished for falling in love! Its heartbreaking (And I'm surprising myself here as this is showing emotion.......I don't do emotion and all that jazz lol) Poor Charlie Ruby: Charlie just needs time, and I feel slightly sorry for you to Great update Danni! update soooooooooooooon please

Angelo! You complete pillock! No woman other than the mother of the baby can feed him! You stupid twat! All you cared about was proving yourself right and now you've stuffed things up! Charlie! I just want to give you the biggest cuddle ever! And Rubes, I can see where Charlie is coming from, throwing you out and all, but she's still a mess from Jacob been taken away Fab update once more Danni

These have been two fab updates Danni! The latter of the two Oh my god, my eyes are stinging! Poor Charlie! Having to hand Jacob over! She is totally innocent in the whole thing, sometimes social services just don't do their jobs properly! I just want to give Charlie a huge hug! Heartbreaking stuff Danni, you really got that written great! I hope Jacob is reunited with Charlie, who he should be with because Angelo can't give Jacob what he actually needs whilst he is still very very young. I hate Angelo even more now, how could he do that to the mother of his son!??? That's really got me now, Update soon please Danni!

Missed some updates!!!! (well, not really, I read whilst away-sad I know, but don't write great updates!) Charlie had the baby! Lil Jacob!! Brax was told to leave the room....GRRR ANGELO!!!! I really really dislike you now...I did used to like you (not in the fic though lol) I can see why Brax wants to hand himself in, but at the same time, he'll jeopardise what he has with Charlie. And drug dealing, yea, its illegal, but it aint the worst thing in the entire world to do..... how Ruby says she still needs a father.....really has bonded with Brax (Sort of.....) More soon please Danni!