callyha

Fab update SO Angelo is going to the class just because he found out Brax was going......WHAT a jerk! But at least he's keeping schtum about what he saw -don't know if that a good or bad thing Casey has now involved himself and Ruby in the drug thing??? Award for STUPIDNESS i think..... Oh well Colleen! you do have your moments, and that sure was one. Update soon please Danni!

Great couple of updates! So Angelo was the one watching them........wonder if thats what he wants to talk to Charlie about Had to at Brax joking about the AJ name Love Charlie&Brax, soooooooooo And Angelo still bugs the pfft out of me. He turns up late to an appointment for HIS baby?????????? grr! For some reason, I'm hoping he misses the birth of the baby, just because of how he has been throughout....but then thats really mean of me lol. Update soon Danni!

I read this at work whilst on my lunch and if any of my colleagues were looking at me, they'd be wondering why I looked so angry! I can't believe Angelo! Still thinking Brax is dodgy...it has nothing to do with him! and him getting all 'upset' over the decoration of the baby's room -he should have made the time to come and do it himself, go away Angelo! I really don't like you now Loved some of the name choices Update soon Danni.....pwease

Glad its nothing too serious with Charlie, but still, its bad enough what she has! (I'm not going to attempt to write it, coz I can't say it! lol) Angelo continues to annoy the hell out of me, Brax has as much right to be in the hospital as he does, Angelo get you're head out of you're ar$e. More soon please Danni!

Great couple of chapters Danni! Casey! I do feel sorry for him, he was only sticking up for Charlie, but Ruby did trust you with that information....Ruby may come around to forgiving you.. Soooooo glad Charlie told Brax the full story, and he's so gorgeous! Love Brax! Angelo and his smugness is really annoying me like nothing else! why can't he just get off his high horse and leave Charlie and Brax be????? Charlie! Hope nothing is wrong with her and that it is just severe morning sickness, although, she did have those drinks Update soon please Danni!

G.I. Blues Elvis

that last part! my jaw dropped! maybe not the way Charlie would want that to be known, but at least its out now.... and the dope! wth are they thinking???? great update, update soon please

Fab chapter Bianca telling Charlie to ignore Angelo love it Loved Charlie and Ruby's movie marathon Poor Charlie with the around the clock sickness What is Heath not telling Brax??? this isnt gonna be too good! Update soon please Danni!

Fab chapter! Charlie & Ruby And Nicole certainly has changed her tune hasn't she??? (I still don't like her but thats besides the point) and Angelo! GRRR you're gonna do more harm than good; Charlie can easily keep you away from the baby if you keep going for Brax! More soon please Danni

Great chapter Angelo just p**s off, dont like you at all Brax and Charlie -nuff said Love how this is going....so different and just...yea. great stuff more soon please

Aww -Brax with the whole baby thing and he still wants to be with Charlie! AWWWWWWWW >< More soon please Danni

I think this should sum these chapters up: wow Can't really think of another word lol. So intense, so much dram, so much wow! I hope Charlie does make a full recovery, she has to! Poor Ruby, now facing the possibility of loosing someone else she loves I loved how Brax was there with Ruby and trying to comfort/stop her in the beginning, trying to protect her from the sight SOOO glad Grant is dead, although, killing himself is the wimps way out, but still glad he dead! More soon please Soph!

Another fantastic chapter Laura, more soon please

Charlie and Ruby - I think that pretty much sums up what I thought about their breakfast/getting ready/waiting for Brax bit Uh-oh! Casey let the cat out the bag! Hope Brax lets Charlie explain the situation! Great update, update sooooooooooon!

Amazing start Laura! Im think the same as Angel90: that Tegan is pregnant....could be wrong though! anyway, update soon!

So, Brax has noticed Charlie is looking a bit off it, and he was there for the sickness...although not in the same room. WHEN is he going to be told??? I loved how Brax got a lil sad when Charlie said, no its not a date but then cheered up when she said it was What's Heath getting Caey into??? doesn't sound good.... Sooooo glad Charlie had a go at Angelo: She's right, he has no right telling her who she can and can't see, I loved that whole fight, GO CHARLIE!!!! More soon please Danni, FAB update

pretty much sums up this chapter for me lol Charlie and ruby at home Charlie and Brax at Angelo's Charlie, Ruby and Brax at Angelo's And at least Charlie knows Ruby is okay with a relationship between them! More soon please Danni!

I missed updates! Great updaes Danni! Wasn't too sure when Nicole wanted to talk to Charlie, she has a lot of explaining to do for her actions! But it was nice to see that Nicole showed maturity and understood why Charlie 'lied' to Angelo. I do feel for Nicole been loely, bt at the same time, it is her own fault so she can't expect Ruby to foget everything thats happened and still be mates, thats not how things happen. Everythig would be so much simpler if Charlie weren't pregnant, but I still want her to have a baby! So much to actually mention on what I've liked about the chapters but that would take me agaes to type up next time I'll read the chapter AND comment at te samtime! Kep up the fab work Danni, this is amazing!

Ooooooooh loved this! Glad Ruby told Casey and he understood and will keep it to himself. and the 'Oh so handsome boyfriend, when's he coming' made me Glad Charlie told Angelo the truth, and I know he's angry and everything, but, I can't write what I think lol, Brax waiting, awwww love him and Charlie More soon please Danni!

Still a great update Danni, Casey and Ruby are on a lil date and Brax has asked Charlie on one... But they are both majorly attracted to each other! grr, just get together already! lol Update soon please Danni,

Okay, I've missed some very good chapters here. Chapter 17 I loved how Ruby was trying to get Charlie to spill all the details on her and Brax And Heath teasing BRax, such a Heath -ism! Charlie and Ruby's relationship is so lush Chapter 18 GO Charlie! Loved how Charlie just slapped Angelo, he did deserve it and I just loved reading that lol. And Brax eavesdropping into the conversation -lol Casey's line It's just that you're so hot, and he's so..not made me I do like how they are friends, its nice to read Martha's reaction -just another reason to HATE Martha. I didn't like her in the show, and I don't like her in this! I suppose now she and Charlie have had a cry and hugged now, Martha can be a little more tolarable, but still....Martha is one character I just don't like. I had to laugh at Leah and Bianca's comic relief So close That whole bit made me laugh! Chapter 19 Can't believe the Bledcoe's are in the bay! Poor Charlie, hope their stay is of the short kind. But I have a pretty big feeling that they are going to be torturing poor Charlie with their presence. I loved how Ruby called charlie mum and the reaction Charlie had, I love how you write their relationship I liked how Brax found out the truth, by pure accident and he didn't have to keep asking Charlie to tell him. I think that probably might have helped Charlie tell him everything Chapter 20 Grant is such a malevolent d!ck isn't he? Cocky and just so unpleasant! Well done for writing that so well! I'm SO glad Brax punched him -he deserves that and much more too! Colleen! Will you ever change and actually engage brain before acting??? Me thinks not. Now He has Charlie and Ruby's adress and he's going to make their lives a living hell!! Brax and Angelo working together to get Grant! this has to work! Chapter 21 Glad Ruby was able to hold Grant off from getting into the house by kicking him, and glad she actually listened to Charlie (unlike the show lol) and I loved how she was armed with some spray! The seriousness of the Grant situation to the squeal of excitement Ruby gave Charlie was a great contrast, and just shows their relationship -love it! And I really do not like the sound of the ending! Poor Charlie! Although, I found that, whilst I was reading it, I could see it happen right in front of me. Well done for that writing -Amazing! Update soon! I want to know if Charlie is rescued by Brax

The Adventure Of Sherlock Holmes Smarter Brother

HOW have I missed updates???!!!!! Anyway... Chapter 13: Loved the Charlie and Brax interaction and the whole 'its a date, No it isn't' and then the kiss Poor Rubes Love the relatinship she and Charlie have and i LOVE how Ruby is still hating Nicole and Angelo and laughing that they are having problems Chapter 14 The Nicole/Angelo chat was nice, at leas Nicole isshowing some maturity in the situation. But Angelo still wants the bay -this is a sticky situation for all involved... ooooooooooooohhhhhhh....what are Heath and Brax doing?? Like April and Ruby's friendship and glad that Ruby has told Casey that she isn't quite ready to tell him about Grant yet Capter 15 Can't believe that Angelo still want's Ruby to confide in hm like she used to...Is he DREAMING???? How can he think that? He makes me soo Ruby's reaction to the abortion was perfect- I could see her doing that on screen! But I am glad Charlie is keeping the baby but now she has to tell Angelo...... Chapter 16 Loved the Charlie and Ruby bit and I thought Rub was goingto fnd out about Charlie's drinking.... Charlie really can't hide her pegnancy for much longer, not now with morning sickness Uh-oh! don't like the sound of that ending..... More soon please Danni, these chapters were FAB

Great update Finally, Charlie saw her baby daughter I love the name, but its a shame she can't concieve again Hopefully Liam and Heath can get along..... more soon please