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Great chapter! I liked the conversation between Charlie and Nicole, even though Nicole has just infuriated me more! I can't believe she's trying to get Charlie to cut her some slack! I know it takes two to have an affair, but Nicole knew Charlie and Angelo were together. Anyway, the sooner she leaves, the better! I hope Angelo keeps his promise and that he will be there for the baby What wrong with Ruby??????????? Loved the hug bit More soon please

Great chapter, you have me proper hooked, I wanna know what Liam owes Bianca well should have vomited on Heath! would have been funny and the 'You make me sick' comment, more soon please

Great chapter Yes Charlie, take your own advice Liam and Heath punchup! YEA!!!! I can see that happening, More soon please

LOVE this chapter That date! wow, beautiful Brax falling more for Charlie! And They kissed! ! Preview sounds WOW, More soon please (PS, call me Cally )

I read the first chapter, but seemes to forgot to comment...i need to keep tabs next time! The first chapter was great, Annie as A Braxton???? Felt sorry for Brax, and the father isn't a nice bloke at ALL! Brax determined to find out if Annie is his sister is sweet, and Cheryl seems to want to find her, Fab two chapters, can't wait for the next one Hope Aaron's is found safe and soon xx

Liam can't be that mad with Bianca, she didn't know Heath dealt the drugs.... Anyway, I'm glad Bianca told Liam about her and Heath and that she's pregnant. will have to see if he is 'man' enough to move through this Is Charlie pregnant too?? Sure seems it with the little remarks. Someone posted how funny it would be, I agreee, it would be funny! Heath AND Brax Great update, more soon please

Oh My God! For some strange reason, I haven't commented on ANY chapter! I thought I had done. Chapter 1: I love the start and how you've got Charlie 'running away', and how you've introduced her with her past still very much plaguing her. Oooh! Brax has noticed her already! Chapter 2: I was thinking that the rude girl was Ruby -And I was right! Brax! I just love him (So will Charlie to I hope ) Chapter 3: I loved how Brax wanted to comfort Charlie -but couldn't and how the women wanted to help to. Martha! Been judgmental -that doesn't surprise me! Glad Jenny isn't telling anyone and that she put Martha back into place Chapter 4: Great idea to have each characters reactions when they get home and are with their partners. I felt for Mark when he was worrying that Charlie wanted Ruby back. Ruby overheard! I do feel for her Chapter 5: I just love Brax and how he wants to comfort Charlie. And I did love: Awkward on the beach at that last part.... Chapter 6: Great chapter! didn't see that slap coming! I can see why Ruby felt the need to slap Charlie, but poor Charlie! Now thinking history is going to repeat itself! Ooh, and Brax at the end...Maybe he will chase after Charlie...... Chapter 7: Jack and Brax more concerned with Charlie than they are Ruby! -Love it! No Ruby, That didn't work the way you wanted it to! Brax comforting Charlie <3 Chapter 8: Great chapter! I'm glad Charlie went around to Ruby's house to explain everything, and that Ruby was able to figure it out for herself, I don't think Charlie really wanted to say the word rape. Chapter 9: Brax got through to Ruby! Its what she needed, walk a mile in someone else's shoes Ruby! It helps! Now Charlie and Ruby are at an understanding! Yey, its what they both need Chapter 10: I loved this chapter! Ruby isn't angry anymore, and Charlie and Ruby are making progress! And that last bit- sooooo SWEET! Chapter 11: It seems nothing will wipe the smiles off Charlie and Ruby's faces -why should it?? Ruby fearing rejection if Charlie didn't go back, -I can see why she would think this, but at the same time, I don't think Charlie will want to loose Ruby for a second time, not after everything. Chapter 12: It seems like Charlie and Ruby are now mum and daughter.....the banter between the two, the laughing -how sweet! Brax asking Charlie out!!!!!!!! LOVE!!!! And Ruby helping Charlie to choose something to wear >< This made me laugh! I'm really enjoying reading this! Keep it up!

Bianca pregnant to Heath! interesting.... Wonder how he'll react Glad she confided in Charlie, but Charlie is right; Bianca is the one who has to make her mind up More soon please

Loved it when Charlie slammed the scan picture on the table- Go Charlie! I can't believe that Angelo needed proof! Hopefully the alcohol wont do too much damage/harm to the baby Brax asking Charlie out and/or to meet up April's reaction to what Ruby was saying -such an April thing! Update soon please Danni!

Brax was there for Charlie And There aren't enough to show how that is Great update, can't wait for the next one

Danni! What a chapter! Love Charlie&Bianca's friendship..... and I like how you had it questioned about Charlie sleeping with men before she gets to actually know them, stemming from Grant Nicole! I don't care that she's all upset over Angelo been a father! KARMA love, that's what it is, KARMA (I know this is a fic, but she just gets me so ) More soon please Danni!

Oooooh.....I'm loving this. I like how you've delved into their past More soon please

I love the idea behind this, and love how its dedicated to Mark (Get well soon) But I can't follow it.....I've never ever seen any of the Star Wars films..... Its really good though, keep it up

Loved the beginning with Ruby been really worried, love their relationship in this, its so cute and sweet Nicole is seriously playing this childish game? pfft, GROW UP oh my god! Hopefully Angelo wont listen to her Charlie the outburst! (I was laughing sort of too, but that's besides the point) This is messy -I love it! More soon please

yey! A chapter where i aint grr! lol Loved it.... Although, Charlie having a few drinks.....not really a good idea. But I can see why she wants to forget ( I would! ) That last bit LOVE IT More soon please

Great update Love Ruby and Charlie's relationship its so sweet this line Angelo and Nicole are really pi**ing me off! They should just leave and never come back and Angelo should have nothing to do with the baby! One glass shouldn't hurt....I hope it doesn't. Maybe this is where Brax comes into it and Charlie moves on! Loving Bianca helping to get Charlie's mind of her worries, such a good friend More soon please x

NICOLE!!!! you total bitch! I can't believe how angry I am with her! () But, I suppose in some weird way I can see why she'd think Charlie was lying I liked how Ruby went to Casey for comfort, it was sweet. But then making it a lil awkward with the questions/mentionings about Ruby's dad I love Charlie and Leah's friendship More soon please Danni

Beautiful. So well written, the whole fic has and I have enjoyed reading this -thank you so much for sharing this with us. You have a real good knack for writing! I did feel sooo sorry for Charlie and Brax; loosing little Ross :'( But at least they have Haley. I hope to read more from you

Lovely update Glad Cheryl turned up for the wedding and saw how happy Charlie and Brax are Aww, Charlie asked Casey to walk her down the aisle >< Her water broke! Can't wait to read the next chapter, even though it is the last one

Just looked back at the entire fic and realised I haven't commented on any of them since ages ago. Really sorry. So: #42 'damn it Charlie, I know how to breath' Brax gasped 'I've been doing it for thirty years' this made me laugh, loved it. I loved the way you wrote this chapter, and the imagery you painted with Charlie drawing in the journal Brax! Bless him! #49 I loved how you wrote Brax 'seeing' Charlie in the room after seeing her that day. Charlie's conflicts with how she was/is feeling over Heath was well written, I loved the ending....is it Brax she's calling?? Hope so! #57 Very powerfully written. I'm glad Charlie and Brax spoke -at least they both know that they are battling with the same confusing thoughts over Heath. The whole urn thing with Joel in is beautiful. And the ending with the scattering of Joel -Wow, beautiful #65 I'm glad Charlie and Brax are slowly rekindling their friendship. Ruby and Casey trying to figure it out is funny, especially 'Just saying, maybe they really are at each others throats, just not in the way we think' Casey raised his shake in a toast before taking a sip #75 Liked the way you said about the outside worl been beautiful and Charlie's inner world falling apart. And the noodle making LOVED it and again, with Casey and Ruby trying to figure it out. And Leah! oh dear, Charlie burning her hair! #85 Great chapter, like how Charlie and Brax are slowly working on things #93 Oh Colleen! She never changes! I loved the Charlie and Brax sundae bit, and how Leah and Colleen were watching closely to see it all! #100 I can picture the bit where Brax is still holding Charlie -just shows how well you write. Love Leah's comment about living there, and how Casey and Ruby are wanting to ask them, but darent #106 Finally! Charlie and Brax are public! Glad ruby is happy that Charlie is happy. Wonder what Cheryl is gonna do.... #116 Wow! That first bit -powerful, I can see it in my head. And the bedroom with Charlie and Brax....Steamy! I feel for Charlie and her insecurities over her scars, and you've captured that beautifully #125 Charlie and Brax are moving in together! Cheryl really doesn't like Charlie! At least Brax stood up for her! #135 Cheryl really has it in for charlie! and now those pictures reminding Charlie! and just as charlie and Brax are moving forward, Watson and Angelo spoil it! #141 He was gonna propose! Grr! Watson #152 Its good that Watson is doing her job, but at the expense of Charlie and Brax! I like how your writing Watson #160 Charlie and Brax's encounter on the beach -Loved the awkwardness which just shows how attracted to each other they are to be with anyone else! #168 Had to laugh at the image I had of the three of them falling together! And I can picture charlie and Ruby sitting on the couch and looking at the ring and talking about it all #179 Charlie weilding the lamp! OMG major stitch when I read that! I could see it....I keep saying that, but I honestly can. Awww he proposed to her! I loved how they commemorated Joel's death and how it was a day like when they scattered him. Loved the talk about the empire and the grandbabies and the kids, and how they interupted and mocked each other #191 This chapter LOVE. It was sooooooooooooooooo sweet and I just love Chax! And Ruby tripping, adding the comedic value which I love #200 Ruby's well into the idea of the wedding, even though its annoying Charlie, memories of Ross and Morag's wedding pop into mind where Ruby was a 'monster'. Yay! She's pregnant! But, I like how you've mentioned Joel and how she's worried about history repeating itself #208 TWINS!!!!!!!!!!!! awwwwwwwwww. If it weren't for the Cheryl bit, this would have been the happiest chapter. Still great though! #217 I loved this chapter. The descriptions of all the dresses -lovely. and the comedic bit again -this time Charlie and her food HAHA love it!

im gonna bitch slap nicole and punch angelo in his privates! I really got angry with angelo reading that! (sad I know) Poor Charlie! what's he gonna do now he knows she pregnant??!! Update soon danni!