Laura158

Great Ending! Lots of humour rolled into one chapter! John was hilarious - what a tricky situation he got himself into! Thank you for such an entertaining story - I loved every minute I look forward to reading more of your fanfictions.

Loved it! Nice warning about the uncontrollable fits of laughter at the beginning - that made me start laughing in itself! Glad they found the watch and ring! Morag not being able to open the door was one of my favourite bits - because it's so ridiculous! It can't be that hard to open a door! Great work!

Once again, I've loved the last two updates. I like how I can never predict what is going to happen next - and what does happen is very entertaining. I've been reading some of your other stories as you suggested and really love the ideas behind them - very clever! I'm looking forward to the next update!

I love this story!! It is very hilarious and I find myself smiling throughout several parts. Thank you and congratulations on writing such an entertaining story! I'm eagerly looking forward to reading more!

Fantastic update! I'm really glad Ella is starting to work through her problems and that she has recognised the source. Hopefully now she can begin to let go of her protectiveness over Sam and trust Roman with him. Loved it, thank you!

Great update I like the interaction between the boys - give some comic relief Ella is very sneaky! I love the stories of her in the past. Hopefully going to Bosnia will help Roman heal... just a little bit at least! Looking forward to reading more

Great update Angelo deserved that punch - how cruel taunting a man, when it was his fault that he was separated from his family for so long. I can kinda understand the rationale behind Roman's thinking of Ella being in control while he is falling apart. I'm looking forward on seeing how you write Roman's struggle letting people help him.

I hope Mike's meddling works out well for Ella It's so sweet that he knows his mother so well, and is concerned for both of them. Roman needs helping and hopefully the councelling will improve his mental state. Great update I am looking forward to reading more.

Great chapter It's sad seeing how broken Ella and Roman are and I'm glad Ella's taking steps to address Roman's issues. The conversation between Nicole, Aden and Geoff also showed the great impact Ella and Roman have on their lives. It's upsetting seeing how sad everyone is but I'm happy that they have decided to support them in Roman's eventual recovery (fingers -crossed! ) Looking forward to the next update

I’m sorry for not commenting in such a long time. Now, I have finally caught up to the present and have found it an emotionally exhausting experience. Tele, you have kept me on the edge of my seat and figuratively begging for more – luckily all I had to do was read the next update and now I’m not sure how I’ll manage having to wait for the next update. The family have been through A LOT in this fiction! From when the family found out Roman was still alive to dealing with Alexis and his men to the current circumstance of a broken relationship between Ella and Roman. Commenting on the individual events of this story, would take too many words, and I have had a range of opinions throughout, but the drama and relationships between the characters make it a fantastic read. Currently I am worried about the state of Roman’s mind and hope that you can find a way to fix their relationship! I’m looking forward to the next update

I have found this story and am absolutely fasinated by the strong storyline and am itching to find out how it continues. As I went through each chapter I took note of what comments I would have said after each one, which makes this a very long comment. Sorry. (I'm not expecting you to read it all..) Prologue: Wow! Great start, but I am already a bit concerned for Ella's mental health state. Chapter 1: I have a lot to say about this chapter. First of all at the begining Ella seems really tense and uptight and is being a bit tough on Roman. I feel sorry for him. Then the bit with Ella in the shower is so truely sad. I can't believe that Ella is in such a bad frame of mind to want to hurt herself again.I'm so glad Roman has realised how badly depressed Ella is and is getting Rachel to help. Chapter 2: It is so sad to see Ella stuggling so badly, I really hope she takes the advice and help from Rachel. Roman is sorting everything out as usual - hopefully it works this time. Chapter 3: My favourite part was the bit where Sophie was talking to Sammy during the night. It was so sweet Chapter 4: I'm glad that Roman and Ella are slowly progressing towards a stage where they can communicate more easily. I love reading the parts with the children they really are adorable Chapter 5: Roman seems to be stuggling with the situation a little. I just hope things get better for them both. Chapter 6: Awww that was an amazing chapter. It was nice to see Ella making progress and for both her and Roman to come to terms with some of the triggers of her issues. You are an amazing writer and are able to express the emotions in each chapter so magnificantly that I become so involved and personally feel the pain and happiness of the characters. I'm looking forward to reading more and seeing how this story develops further.

Wow~ I loved that, with Mike being Nancy Drew and then sneaking up on Pete and Jacko. It made me smile It's these sneaky and cheeky parts that I really like about this story. There's been a lot of violence when Ella and Mike found out about Roman I can't imagine how the rest of the family will react if they find out. Where do they all think Ella is when she's been with Roman? Great Work! I really can't wait for more

I think you deserve the comments Wow! Ella can't be pregnant again! Why did she leave Roman? It is not the end of them I'm almost postive! Poor Mike, what a shock. Wonder how he will react afterwards when she wakes up. Great Work

Okay, I've finally read all of it up to the present and I am so glad you wrote it Tele! I originally wrote a really long comment but my computer stuffed up and I lost it all, so I've decided this one will be shorter (but not very short... you don't have to read it all) ~ At the begining I couldn't believe you'd killed Roman off. To read the emotions and happenings of the family and to find out how much they'd been broken was heartbreaking. You write the emotions so well and create wonderful personalities in each of your characters that I am attached to them! I shed a few tears during the first few chapters. To see how Sammy was struggling... I just was amazed you'd killed Roman. But then you made him in witness protection - which I must say I was a bit happier about because of the possibility that he could reunite with his family and most importantly Ella. I figured that for him to stay away from his family for that long, there must be a real threat to them, because they've gotten through all the other bad people in the past. I'm still waiting to find out about this - I agree with what Ella said, they should of made the decision together. I was almost squealing when I read that Ella found out about Roman! You portrayed their interactions well and I hope they can find a way to be together forever So happy Mike's back, it's made me realise how much Lily's grown and that Danni and him really need to be with each other - they're turning into a version of Ella and Roman. I am liking Danni's friend Michelle its brought out another side of Danni through it. All the children have grown up so much! Glad you gave an update of ages Gabby and Jacob - well I can kind of see why there breakup would of happened but all that matters is that her and Daniella have a loving and supporting family. Good to see the boys back - Roman needs them to help him through the mess with Ella. Am liking Roman's 'second' life actually... Betsy will guess something's up I think.. but yet another interesting character. So sorry for the long comment but your fiction deserves it