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Great Ending! Lots of humour rolled into one chapter! John was hilarious - what a tricky situation he got himself into! Thank you for such an entertaining story - I loved every minute I look forward to reading more of your fanfictions.

Loved it! Nice warning about the uncontrollable fits of laughter at the beginning - that made me start laughing in itself! Glad they found the watch and ring! Morag not being able to open the door was one of my favourite bits - because it's so ridiculous! It can't be that hard to open a door! Great work!

Once again, I've loved the last two updates. I like how I can never predict what is going to happen next - and what does happen is very entertaining. I've been reading some of your other stories as you suggested and really love the ideas behind them - very clever! I'm looking forward to the next update!

I love this story!! It is very hilarious and I find myself smiling throughout several parts. Thank you and congratulations on writing such an entertaining story! I'm eagerly looking forward to reading more!

Fantastic update! I'm really glad Ella is starting to work through her problems and that she has recognised the source. Hopefully now she can begin to let go of her protectiveness over Sam and trust Roman with him. Loved it, thank you!

Great update I like the interaction between the boys - give some comic relief Ella is very sneaky! I love the stories of her in the past. Hopefully going to Bosnia will help Roman heal... just a little bit at least! Looking forward to reading more

Great update Angelo deserved that punch - how cruel taunting a man, when it was his fault that he was separated from his family for so long. I can kinda understand the rationale behind Roman's thinking of Ella being in control while he is falling apart. I'm looking forward on seeing how you write Roman's struggle letting people help him.

I hope Mike's meddling works out well for Ella It's so sweet that he knows his mother so well, and is concerned for both of them. Roman needs helping and hopefully the councelling will improve his mental state. Great update I am looking forward to reading more.

Great chapter It's sad seeing how broken Ella and Roman are and I'm glad Ella's taking steps to address Roman's issues. The conversation between Nicole, Aden and Geoff also showed the great impact Ella and Roman have on their lives. It's upsetting seeing how sad everyone is but I'm happy that they have decided to support them in Roman's eventual recovery (fingers -crossed! ) Looking forward to the next update

I’m sorry for not commenting in such a long time. Now, I have finally caught up to the present and have found it an emotionally exhausting experience. Tele, you have kept me on the edge of my seat and figuratively begging for more – luckily all I had to do was read the next update and now I’m not sure how I’ll manage having to wait for the next update. The family have been through A LOT in this fiction! From when the family found out Roman was still alive to dealing with Alexis and his men to the current circumstance of a broken relationship between Ella and Roman. Commenting on the individual events of this story, would take too many words, and I have had a range of opinions throughout, but the drama and relationships between the characters make it a fantastic read. Currently I am worried about the state of Roman’s mind and hope that you can find a way to fix their relationship! I’m looking forward to the next update

I have found this story and am absolutely fasinated by the strong storyline and am itching to find out how it continues. As I went through each chapter I took note of what comments I would have said after each one, which makes this a very long comment. Sorry. (I'm not expecting you to read it all..) Prologue: Wow! Great start, but I am already a bit concerned for Ella's mental health state. Chapter 1: I have a lot to say about this chapter. First of all at the begining Ella seems really tense and uptight and is being a bit tough on Roman. I feel sorry for him. Then the bit with Ella in the shower is so truely sad. I can't believe that Ella is in such a bad frame of mind to want to hurt herself again.I'm so glad Roman has realised how badly depressed Ella is and is getting Rachel to help. Chapter 2: It is so sad to see Ella stuggling so badly, I really hope she takes the advice and help from Rachel. Roman is sorting everything out as usual - hopefully it works this time. Chapter 3: My favourite part was the bit where Sophie was talking to Sammy during the night. It was so sweet Chapter 4: I'm glad that Roman and Ella are slowly progressing towards a stage where they can communicate more easily. I love reading the parts with the children they really are adorable Chapter 5: Roman seems to be stuggling with the situation a little. I just hope things get better for them both. Chapter 6: Awww that was an amazing chapter. It was nice to see Ella making progress and for both her and Roman to come to terms with some of the triggers of her issues. You are an amazing writer and are able to express the emotions in each chapter so magnificantly that I become so involved and personally feel the pain and happiness of the characters. I'm looking forward to reading more and seeing how this story develops further.

Wow~ I loved that, with Mike being Nancy Drew and then sneaking up on Pete and Jacko. It made me smile It's these sneaky and cheeky parts that I really like about this story. There's been a lot of violence when Ella and Mike found out about Roman I can't imagine how the rest of the family will react if they find out. Where do they all think Ella is when she's been with Roman? Great Work! I really can't wait for more

I think you deserve the comments Wow! Ella can't be pregnant again! Why did she leave Roman? It is not the end of them I'm almost postive! Poor Mike, what a shock. Wonder how he will react afterwards when she wakes up. Great Work

Okay, I've finally read all of it up to the present and I am so glad you wrote it Tele! I originally wrote a really long comment but my computer stuffed up and I lost it all, so I've decided this one will be shorter (but not very short... you don't have to read it all) ~ At the begining I couldn't believe you'd killed Roman off. To read the emotions and happenings of the family and to find out how much they'd been broken was heartbreaking. You write the emotions so well and create wonderful personalities in each of your characters that I am attached to them! I shed a few tears during the first few chapters. To see how Sammy was struggling... I just was amazed you'd killed Roman. But then you made him in witness protection - which I must say I was a bit happier about because of the possibility that he could reunite with his family and most importantly Ella. I figured that for him to stay away from his family for that long, there must be a real threat to them, because they've gotten through all the other bad people in the past. I'm still waiting to find out about this - I agree with what Ella said, they should of made the decision together. I was almost squealing when I read that Ella found out about Roman! You portrayed their interactions well and I hope they can find a way to be together forever So happy Mike's back, it's made me realise how much Lily's grown and that Danni and him really need to be with each other - they're turning into a version of Ella and Roman. I am liking Danni's friend Michelle its brought out another side of Danni through it. All the children have grown up so much! Glad you gave an update of ages Gabby and Jacob - well I can kind of see why there breakup would of happened but all that matters is that her and Daniella have a loving and supporting family. Good to see the boys back - Roman needs them to help him through the mess with Ella. Am liking Roman's 'second' life actually... Betsy will guess something's up I think.. but yet another interesting character. So sorry for the long comment but your fiction deserves it

- I don't know what to say. You cannot kill both Roman and Ella. It is not fair, you must make them be okay!! But other than that horrible cliff hanger ending. It was an amazing story! While I can't believe how much it's changed since I last read it! I'm glad they got August back and that she is okay. I can't believe Martha's involved and that she's been using Marcus as a spy! How horrible. And there is so many other parts I want to comment on but, I think the comment would become too long! You write everyone's emotions perfectly, I can't begin to describe how much I love this story, you make me become so emotionally connected to these characters it's amazing. How do you do it? I feel as if I know all the characters personally and that if I met them out on the street I would know all about their past and history. I hope you will be writing another, you cannot absolutely leave it there!!

Amazing updates I'm sorry I haven't commented - I've been really busy (but thats not a good enough excuse ) I'm glad Roman and Ella are sorting things out together. The bit where Ella threw popcorn at Roman made me laugh! The visit to the hospice would have been a tricky time for all of them. I hope Danni finds out more about her mother. Danni and Mike are getting married!!!! Yay! Sophie's turning into such a teenager isn't she! Not sure how Roman and Ella cope with so many children! Lily was really cute when she was worried about August and the bad man.. how old is she? 2? Fantastic updates - I honestly love this story, and the lives of Ella and Roman

Nice update I love how Ella likes to sort everyone out! I hope Annie and Jai go out together. Ella is so clever getting Annie a job direction and setting her up with Jai at the same time Great work

Great updates Scary thought with the car brake Luckily nothing bad happened. They all seem to narrowly escape bad things like that.... must be the name Laura - though I have to say, it's never done me any harm Daniella is a pretty name, but isn't that Danni's real name? I'm a bit confused there... I hope Danni lets someone know what's wrong soon, Ella was nice about it and she reacted very angrily? Fantastic work, I can't wait for more - I really need to find out more about this Gardener person and August!!

Great 2 updates I'm glad Gabby had the baby! It's about time! Bit worrying with Ella, I hope she's okay. Shame about the name Laura, I like that name But I can see why it's worrying... What ever name they choose will be nice I'm sure. I hope Mike and Danni sort out themselves, it would be nice to see them have children in the future sometime. Are they married yet? I seem to remember them buying a wedding dress? Or it might have been a bridesmaid dress I suppose... Fantastic work, I loved it

Nice Update! I'm glad Gabby's gone into labour! It's about time! Want to know what the secret was? Liked how the Mum Dad swap day went! Very clever Georgie is so grown up now! High school age! Fantastic work, can't wait for more, need information about the baby!!

Great updates I'm glad Roman talked to Ella about her problems, hopefully they understand each other for the time being. Kai is a nice name, good he finally has a name The part with Aden and Amy Belle was sweet. Liked the separate conversations she had with the children when tucking them into bed. She is a wonderfully understanding mother. Loved how Ella just left Roman with her life and responsiblities for the day, while she took Georgie surfing Very Clever - like the notes Fantastic work! I can't wait to read more!

Thanks for the I really liked this chapter, it's good to see that Fleur's settling in well to the family life. Routine sounds like a good idea, the calender is so organised! Roman's version made me laugh I think the surfing should be on the actual calendar though. I agree with Carina, I think you write the interactions between everyone amazingly! Looking forward to some more

Wow! AMAZING updates I’ve returned home recently and had so many chapters to read! 11 in fact! Which goes to show how often you update Was a bit worried at first when you said you were going away- but then you came back! I hope you had a lovely time in Spain. So here it goes.. all the chapters I missed Chapter 83 I liked the idea about the wallpaper. That's sweet. Glad Fleur is able to come home soon to her amazing family. Chapter 84 Ella did well to leave the kids on the beach alone, apart from freaking out about Sammy. You displayed her emotions perfectly. Lily, Liam, Meggy, Sophie and Roman in the water together was cute! Chapter 85 Oh no! Gardener! Can't believe Roman didn't see him with her. I don't believe Meggy's Gardy's, I think it's to make them doubt each other and fight like they work out later. Chapter 86 Loved the bit with Sophie wearing the bikini and Roman's reaction to it. Bit worried about the DNA test but I'm sure Ella and Roman won't do anything to hurt Meggy. Chapter 87 Sammy and the bad dream was cute. The kids are all too adorable! Chapter 88 Glad Ella and Roman got a chance to relax when surfing - they need it! Gabby must be due soon? It made me laugh with Lily and the word baby! Chapter 89 It's funny to think Roman's a great grandfather! How old is he now? I think it is good that Ella's not pregnant, they don't need any more trouble. Chapter 90 I hope Amy- Belle names the baby soon! I liked when Roman went all soldier to Mike and Jacko. It made me laugh! I loved the bit the babies and Millie calling Miles dad! Chapter 91 Drunk Roman is so funny, but he said some nice things, being very truthful. Big parties at Ella's always seem to end with the men drunk! Coincidence? Or not? Nice idea to make the quilts. Chapter 92 I loved how the kids know what Roman is doing wrong when even he doesn't know! This has been one of my favourite parts! Chapter 93 I loved how Lily had to inspect the room! It was so cute. Glad Ella finally told Sophie about the events round her birth. Sophie is so grown up now! Chapter 94 I'm sure Sophie and Georgie will be fine at high school. Fleur's home! Yay! Shame Roman and Ella still continue to fight. From reading and commenting on all of this I have come to the conclusion that you are the best writer of fan fictions ever! Seriously you do an amazing job expressing emotions and telling strong and emotional storylines. Thankyou for writing this for us to read! Sorry for the long comment

Fantastic Updates I loved how the children put on such a nice dinner for them It was good when Roman and Ella talked about the next year and how they can make things a bit different. I'm going on holidays for a while, so won't be able to read but I'm looking forward to catching up when I return!

I'm so glad they're not going to separate. I liked the update where Ella was cleaning. It was really funny when Nic used to clean The kids were all so sweet offering suggestions for room changes! My favourite part was with Georgie and Sophie! When they did the 'where is she hiding' bit! It was great! Wonderful writing of emotions and of the storyline. You are always a very reliable writer