Laura158

Aww Ella ! She definately needs councelling... I hope she can eventually get back to the person she was before all the children. The happy, bubbly person she was, with the clever ideas all the time It's difficult for them to deal with all of this with a full house Amazingly written, you have a wonderful talent. I honestly can't wait to continue reading

Nice update Amy-Belle is having her baby! Wow that was quick. It's nice she's got Toby with her. I hope Ella and Roman don't separate, but this time it does feel like they will Can't wait for more

Oh My Goodness!!! They found the baby!! Awww you had me almost crying! It's so wonderful!! Ella really isn't well and I hope she gets help soon, It's a shame she blames Rachel. Fabulous work! I want to read more about the babies! I need to know what happens

Great 2 updates I loved their christmas! and the way they showed Sammy his present of the desk! That was so nice Mike and Georgie were nice helping him set it up! Seems like they all enjoyed their presents! Lily and the tiara's made me laugh! Fantastically written as always Happy New Year! I hope their will be more Roman and Ella during this year!

Great Update Ella is so smart! I liked how she explained how she worked it out! She had me puzzled - as per my last comment - of how she worked it out. She's a clever cookie! They're going to have a great christmas. I think all the children will like their presents I wonder whether Martha is getting any presents? Fantastic work! I loved it, can't wait for the christmas day!

Awww that was a fabulous chapter! I loved it Ella is so nice and clever! I didn't realise that when she asked Martha how long, that she was refering to cancer! How on earth did Ella realise that? I liked how Roman is going to be Marcus' father whether or not he actually is. That's sweet This has been one of my favourite chapters, it is so touching to think that Ella would do that for Martha and Marcus. Well Done

Great 2 updates! I think my favourite part is when all the children are together and interacting! I love those bits It's good that Ella's home, just in time for christmas for the sound of it. I think it is good how she went away for a while, to stop her fighting with Roman all the time. I think they should do that more often. Stay speaking nicely and spend some time for themselves and with the individual kids. Fantastic work, I really love reading this

Great update I liked seeing them shop seperately. Roman in the shop was sweet Buying the baby clothes and not knowing what the other things were. James is sneaky. It's a good idea Ella's got John to watch out for her. When I read it, I'd forgotten about that Gardy person.... The bit at the end was nice with the boys having time with Roman Fantastic work as always!

Great Update ! I liked that Ella was perfectly normal when she was on the phone after just leaving Roman. With how they were casually talking about christmas! Fantastic writing as usual! I really enjoy reading this fiction

Great updates! I really love the last one with them decorating the christmas tree! The bit where they had their own baubles was nice. It's good to see them all getting along well as a family. It made me feel in a very christmasy mood From other updates... How awful can Martha be, I couldn't believe it when she did that to Roman and Ella. But I liked the bit when Ella said they would get through it It was a bit scary when Roman broke down about her being pregnant- he's always been so strong. I can't believe she might be pregnant! Seriously doesn't she already h ave enough children! This time it would be really pushing it if she didn't die - which would be terrible! I've almost forgotten that these babies are still missing. We haven't heard much about the investigation recently... wonder how long until they're reunited? Poor Marcus having to leave with Martha again, I was starting to like him and I think Ella was too. I hope we hear of him again. Fantastic work writing this, I love it

Great 2 updates I agree with Pollymoon and Carina, Ella is becoming attached to Marcus. Their life is pretty busy! I hope Ella and Roman talk and work out there problems - once again! Fantastic work! I can't wait for more

Amazing update That was fantastic, you should never give up writing! Really like it when Roman and Ella just talk to each other to work things out Is Sammy 10? He's grown up! Please update again, you have an amazing talent for writing

What!!! You can't give up writing! You are so fantastic at it! You write the most amazing stories and fictions and I would really like to read some more Why are you going to give up writing? I love this fiction and would really like to see how it ends. Please continue

Bad timing.... Hope Ella and Roman can work through this one. Roman's such a gentleman - always helping Martha when she was falling Fantastically written, well done

Fantastic Updates Sorry I have commented recently, but I think the story has really progressed well and I just really want to find out who took the babies and the story behind this Gardy man. As usual the family parts are really cute- They all get along so well, and support each other! I love this fiction!!! Can't wait for more!

Amazing! Toby seems to be really fitting in with the family well. If I was in his shoes I would not be able to remember all their names! It's such a big family with so many generations I like the full name call bit, where Sammy and Meggy both stopped and came to him immediately! I hope Amy-Belle tells her parents soon! Otherwise it'll get back to them some other way. I can see Amy-Belle and Toby working well together... Fantastic work! Can't wait for more

Amazing as usual! I liked Tobias talking with Leah - the bit with Ella's note! That made me smile. I wonder if it's Amy Belle he walked into?? The ending with Sophie and the babies was really cute I liked when Sophie said "If we get to know him it won’t be so big a shock if he is Daddy’s." It was so sweet, I really like Sophie, how all the kids are so understanding. Also the last bit she said " we know that it might not be very nice for you but when we figured out who Marcus was we thought you’d like him anyway because he’s really like shy" It's said that it made Ella cry but I imagine Sophie's a little be right - that Ella will learn to like Marcus Fantastic work! Loved every bit

Amazing! I loved when Tobias came to meet them all ! and Ella surfing - she really sacrificed a lot for her family! Brilliant work I really can't wait for more p.s. I like the happy family chapters try to keep them like that for a while eh?

Fantastic update! I really liked the part with all the kids coming out of school. It really showed their personalities - I hope Ella lets Marcus come over. While I don't like Martha I quite like Marcus. I have a feeling he's missed out on all of the family type activities. Really liked the bit of Ruby, Nicole and Annie - there friendship is really strong Fantastic work! Can't wait for more!

Aww fantastic! The bit with Sammy was cute Oh no Dr Andrews is dead.... hopefully something good will come of that! Great work, I can't wait for more

Great Update Ella can be really frustrating at times! If she's going to be angry all the time than what the point of getting the babies back - because she doesn't seem to be wanting to spend any time with her other kids! Loved the tickling part Fantastic work Can't wait for more

Wow! - That's all I'm able to say recently! That was fantastic! It's clever to think of twins... a bit obvious after everything thats happened with the babies! I really do hope that they find this Gardy person - and work out who Dr Andrews is. I like that they've got a team helping with this investigation, the more resources the better! Can't wait for more

Wow!! I started to think something was suss with that birthing situation.... It'll be interesting how it turns out. I hope they are alive - but it'll be a big twist! I liked when Ella came into the Diner in time to control Liam. He's so cheeky! Such a change from the usual perfectly behaved kids. We can really see him as a character now, being away from Lily for a while! (Though I must admit I like him better when he's with Lily because it's fun to imagine a family that that well behaved and bonded!) I'm glad Mike's decided to continue with uni it'll be worth it and I'm sure Danni will support him doing it. Loved it! Fantastic Work

Great update I really do hope Tobias comes to meet everyone in Summer Bay! The end bit with the photo album was so sweet Can't wait for more