Laura158

Great update How you introduced Tobias was perfect! I liked how they all seemed to know who each other were straight away. The flashback was interesting, they had lots of fun when they were younger! I hope Tobias comes back to meet the rest of his family - there is certainly alot to take in! Great work , Can't wait for more

Wow! I've missed a lot! Sorry I haven't commented recently... It's taken me ages to catch up, I've missed 25 chapters ! You update so regularly- I love it! I would write a summary about all the parts I've loved and opinions I've had but that would be too long..... So: I absolutely love Ella and Roman's relationship, while they always seem to be disagreeing about something they have obvious chemistry. I wish this was an actual story - on television or something..... I can't believe they're fighting again! It always seems to be in the same kind of way - they threaten to leave each other ( or something like that ) and throw insults around Hope that they can get through this time of grieving... I can't believe they lost the babies! But Roman's got a point - why did Ella say she heard them cry? Looking forward to more Ella and Roman. The way the family interacts is so perfect! I wish my family was like that. The kids are so well behaved, I loved the snow day! Jacob was so nasty hurting Sophie - I'm glad that's being sorted out, with the Gardy bit. How can he still be alive?? He cannot come back to ruin their lives again. Lily and Liam are so adorable, I love how Lily is always looking out for him! They're so many kids in this fiction it's hard to keep track of what age they are. I'm not sure how you do it! Lily's about 3 or 4? I'm guessing? She can seem very grown up at times especially when she knows exactly what to say to Ella. I could go on but..... I think that's most of it extremely summarised. You are a fantastic writer and I can't wait for more

Great update It was Amy-Belle's thats interesting I wasn't expecting that! Uhh Martha again How can she do that to them she really is a nasty piece of work. Can't wait for the next update

I'm so sorry I haven't updated in a while! Sorry.... It's so sweet Charlie was panicking over not having told Angelo that she loved him before the crash I'm glad they're all alright and hope they continue to stay that way! Angelo seems very supportive of Charlie and the baby and is acting the proud father I loved the interaction between Ruby and Gina and think it would be a good idea to live with her (apart from the part that she wouldn't be with Charlie of course) I think she should stay well away from Jay! Fantastic few updates again I'm sorry I didn't comment... You write fantastically and I just want to find out what happens next

This is fantastic The way you write the characters with such emotion makes me forget that it's not happening in real life! I feel so very familiar with the characters because of this and I think you do an amazing job Arrr Martha, What do u think you're doing- someone needs to teach her a lesson Jacko or Pete perhaps (not Roman he needs to look after Ella) I hope Marcus' isn't Roman's but if it turns out so then I would imagine Ella would need to be excepting because Roman always was of Meggy and Sammy... Loved the part where Roman said this part It made me smile. Ella and Roman have been through so much and finally they're working out the way to save alot of trouble when it comes to being upset and angry with one another. I hope they remember that in the times that are coming - cause I have a bad feeling that they're going to need it Absolutely splendid work. Can't wait for more - I'm totally and utterly addicted

Great update The situation with Rachel and the Baby doesn't sound too good I hope they are both okay and nothing too bad happens to them... there families already gone through enough But I guess It'll get get worse before it gets better... Tony saved Rachel and the baby Fantastic bit of writing

You've started another Yay! These Roman and Ella stories are addictive I tell you! You write the most AMAZING fictions You write so emotionally and can put in a good bit of drama Martha back...oh noo. (But it's going to be interesting) They shouldn't tell Roman and Ella - cause Roman can't keep anything from Ella and Rachel was right about the miscarriage for Ella.... Martha needs to stay away from them! Little Jack's been adopted out Poor Tony - I hope he gets to see him soon. Can't wait for more!

Ohh no! Poor Rachel! I wonder what's wrong?? I hope nothing happens to the baby and her. After all they've been through so far they must get past this! Please let them be okay. Written fantastically

Great updates!! I loved the wedding! It was so sweet with the ceremony and all the bridesmaids. I liked when Roman sent Ella the letter before the wedding telling her that while she's probably plotting to get away just stop and read... You could tell she'd been think about climbing down the balcony! I loved it! Fantastic work!

Great Update I would be annoyed at Ruby if she wasn't looking after her son and leaving it all up to Charlie if that was me - so I think Charlie was right telling her off! I love Ben! He was so sweet with the drawing, friend and non stop chatter! Reminds me of my brother Fantastic Work - I always love reading this fiction!

Ahh I was right! His memory problems weren't short term!! Oh noo... but they'll get through it- they always do I can definately see some problems arising from this though. Great Update! I love how they're always there to support each other. Fantastic Work

Oh thanks It's nice you take the time to read all the comments you get! I loved that conversation about names with the whole family! Why doesn't Angelo want a name of a flower?? I really want to know what happening with Jay! I'm positive that something is going on that will hurt Ruby... what a shame, Ruby deserves someone nice. Great Update

Woww!!! I've missed sooo many updates!!!! It makes me realise how often you update! You really are fantastic at writing and updating fan fictions. You know just how to keep me interested and absolutely obsessed Where do I start reviewing?? Chapter 46 Ava was so cute when she was talking about her swimming classes and about how she wouldn't be able to tumble turn! Can't believe Shelly's the nurse and that she almost told Ava about the other baby Chapter 47 I hope Morag's telling the truth about visiting Ava and that she's not really sick. Aww Angelo and Charlie's conversation was so nice I'm glad Angelo has decided to have a paternity test. Jay's just becoming even more supspicious... Chapter 48 Angleo's so funny for not wanting to go inside the house because of Morag! Ava was so cute with the swimming bit! Colleen seeing Shelly drinking- It's so good that Colleen wouldn't tell anyone the secret Chapter 49 OMG I can't believe Shelly would lie to them like that- all because of Grant! She's sneaky. Love the way that Charlie told her that Angelo chose her anyway! Chapter 50 Love that they moved in together! The part with Ruby was sweet and I'm glad Morag gives them her blessing (a bit!) Chapter 51 What! How can Angelo not be happy about the baby now? First it was Charlie now Angelo! I'm beginning to wonder whether they really want this baby at all! Awww Callumn's crawling! Chapter 52 Charlie's right something not right about Jay. Ruby shouldn't trust him... I'm glad Charlie and Angelo made up and worked out why Angelo wasn't happy with a girl! I loved interactions between Charlie and Angelo at the end! Over all I think ou do a fantastic job writing this and I'm sorry my comments been so long!

Great few updates! I was shocked that Charlie came to Angelo's defense but after what she said to Jack about lowering to the same level as him it made sense and I could see it was the right thing to do. I wonder who phoned Tony to make him so irritated - maybe he got his results back and they found it wasn't short term?? I love the electronic reminder notebook! Such a good idea- I was thinking that Rachel needed to write him a list of everything he needed to do! Fantastic Writing!

Great Update Thanks for the heads up about Jay! I should read it more carefully next time! Loved that update- I'm soo glad Angelo and Charlie are back together Colleen is soo sweet I wonder how long it will be before she lets the secret slip! I'm happy Charlie told Shelly! I don't think Shelly with be in a hurry to see her again Fantastic Work ! I'm addicted!

Great Update I loved the conversation between Ava, Ruby, Charlie and Angelo at the beginning about Ava's boyfriends! It was sweet to see them interacting with each other in a cheeky way! Not too sure about Jay anymore.. somethings wrong- with the text messages and all. I might of missed something but does he work in a surf shop or something? Fantastic work! Can't wait for more

I liked the storyline of Tony building the boat for Jack without Rachel or Martha knowing, but didn’t like that it seemed like he was having an affair! It was so sweet that he was trying to continue something Jack and him were going to do and was a lovely way to remember Jack – I wonder what happened to the boat when they left the bay? I also loved all the scenes with baby Harry, he is so cute and adorable has the sweetest expressions at times. He seemed to react perfectly to whatever it was that Rachel and Tony were saying to him I’m going to miss how they always seemed to rely, depend and stick together so much. They supported each other through all the tragic events that happened and would always come out stronger from it. They were one of the bay’s best families. I'm going to miss their calming presence in Summer Bay.

Great update I'm so glad Tony and Charlie worked things out and that Charlie's happier now and not being blamed for something she didn't do. Tony was so sweet when he was waiting for Rachel at the hospital But he does seem a bit fragile.... I'm glad Rachel's noticed that he's still hurting too. Wonderful writing! I love it!

Great update Sorry I didn't update on the other part. But I will comment on it now! I'm glad Ruby made Charlie see sense about the situation with Angelo . It's a shame that Morag doesn't support her Ava and Ben are sooo cute and I loved their interactions when they were trying to get the phone. And when Ava wasn't talking to Charlie! She actually makes sense with her motives about it. Fantastic writing! I love it

Great update I love the interaction between Charlie and Ruby and it made me smile when Ruby called Charlie granny on Callums behalf! Oh no Shelly! How can she do that? Turning up at his house ( his old house ) And she's pregnant! Uh oh... not sure how either are going to react..

Fantastic! Sorry I haven't commented in ages but I have been reading I love your fictions! I'm glad Sophie's okay and can't believe Ella's having twins! How old are they getting now?? Loved it!

Great update! I hope the man doesn't come back and try to 'get' her.. Neither of them are recovering very well from their incidents - I think they need some councelling or something. Poor Charlie I'm glad Irene was there and asked how she was. Hope Angelo gets in trouble for placing the blame on Charlie. Fantastic writing as always!

Great update! I'm glad Leah is helping Rachel and I really hoped the Tony leaving her for a while helped a bit. I feel sorry for Charlie because no one is listening to her when she is innocent - like Jack says. I hope they talk to her and decide to not press charges, I would think the most important thing for them is to try to get back to the way they used to be. A happy, loving family Wonderful chapter- I really enjoyed it (apart from Rachel's nightmare stories though!)

Great Update I feel so sorry for Tony! It's not entirely his fault that Rachel went through all that so he shouldn't be blaming himself for it! But like Jack said I would as well if I was in his position. I really hope they decide to not press charges on Charlie! It wasn't her and Jack knows that! Fantastic writing I love this story

Great Update I'm glad someone found Rachel and she's okay, not seriously injured. But the baby situation doesn't sound very good I hope nothing bad happens to it. It's good to see the Holden family interacting together they get along so well now! I can imagine Tony being frantic with worry about Rachel! I hope everything works out! Fantastic work! I absolutely love this fic