Laura158

Sorry I didn't comment on the other update I didn't see it until now! Great work I loved the little converstation between Tony and Rachel and I am so glad that Lucas has heard what he really needed to hear about hid relationship with Tony. It's so touching You write it beautifully Oh no! I hope Rachel's okay and that nothing happens to the baby! Why did she decide to walk home? She could have rung Toy from inside the hospital - its late and it really isn't a very good idea to go walking around in the dark! Tony always forgetting little things adds a bit of humour into it and always makes me smile! Fantastic and I can't wait for more!

Great update I don't think Angelo should have promised Ava and Ben that him and Charlie were going to get back together... I think it might cause trouble later on. But Ava was being sooo cute I might have done the same thing! I liked the conversation between Ruby and Jay and hope they form a friendship Oh nooo! Charlie! I hope she's okay...

Awww Charlie might feel something for the baby! You had me worried that she had terminated the baby while Angelo was shouting at her!! Great Work!! I love this fiction so much and can't wait until they (hopefully) get back together!

The family's all home together!! Poor Rachel having Tony shout at her when she was hurting Charlie being arrested! I want to see what happens when she talks to Angelo Great Work!

Aww poor Ava and Ben not having their dad around I loved Ben's quick acceptance and not bothering with it! It was so cute I like Charlie's conversation with Ava such strong meaningful words. Tickles always cheer up little kids Great work I can't wait for more!

Oh! Why did Angelo put the blame on Charlie?? It is sooo not the right thing to do! She's going to be mad when she finds out! I'm glad Tony's going to be okay and that his memory problem shouldn't worsen... I like the small conversation between Lucas and Rachel. It made me smile It's good Lucas is going to change his life around a bit! He really is like his father Great work!

Great update I love how Tony was so excited about the baby and couldn't sit still! Not remembering what he did and said to Jack a few minutes before is understanderble because he really has just come out of a coma so you can see he'll be confused. I just hope it doesn't become a long term problem.... The moment at the end with Lucas and Tony was lovely I knew Tony loved him but Lucas was just to focused to see it. Can't wait for more!!

Aww great update! I loved Ava and Ben ordering their icecreams and Ben asking Leah cute questions all the time! Ava is one smart cookie! She knows somethings wrong with her mum and dad and she could spot Ruby trying to distract her! It's soo cute but realistic. Charlie and Angelo over?? With a baby on the way and 2 young children already I'm not sure how well that will go.... Ruby being the grown up and sensible one taking control and supporting Charlie like that is so lovely- I love their close relationship in this fiction. Can't wait for the next update because I want to see what Charlie ends up telling Ava and Ben and their reactions...

Great few updates! I love the family scenes!! Can't wait for more

Great updates! Sorry I didn't comment on the other one.. I didn't read it until now! Angelo, angelo, angelo why did he cheat on Charlie ! She doesn't deserve it .... I think they need some space from each other then sit down and have a good decent chat about their relationship and this baby. Ava and Ben are soo cute with the DVD and pancakes! I love this story!

Aww great update! Tony's reation to the baby was soo sweet I can just imagine him being all fragile and recovering then bursting out with joy! So Angelo's even more guilty now... I think it's nice Tony's forgiven Angelo I'm not sure how forgiving I would be in that situation.. Tony probably just wants to get on with his life.

Great Update! I can't believe Angelo didn't do the DNA test!!!!! I wonder who they buried instead and why was he holding Tony's wallet?? I'm so glad he made up with Rachel

Great update! Aww Ava is soo cute she reminds me of my little sister.... This situation that Charlie and Angelo are in is so frustrating! I can see both sides but can't decide which is more right! They need to work it out once and for all... Oh no Angelo don't... you might do something you'll regret!

Good update! I also hope Gabby and Ella can sort out their different views... I like the group of girls chatting

Ohhh fantastic update!!!! Tony's awake! Thank goodness I was starting to get a bit worried about whether the trial was a good thing to do or not.... Rachel, rachel, rachel..... how heartbreaking for her that Tony didn't even acknowledge that she was there when he woke up- but I'm sure he would have if he hadn't just woken up from a coma. He was probably was "feeling woozy and confused and didn’t know where he was or what he was even looking at." Sorry can't work out how to quote ) Martha's right... at least I hope she is... Lucas and Jack have their father back Great work! (You didn't make me cry this time! but you really do write the emotions beautifully...)

Fabulous chapter! I really like the interaction between Lily, Millie and Liam! Their soo cute Wouldn't it be great to have Ella and Roman as parents! they're always so straight forward with what they want Loved it

Fantastic few updates! Sorry I haven't commented for a while but I've caught up now. I loved the talk between Ruby and Angelo with Ruby comforting Angelo.. It was so sweet and I'm happy that they get along so well. I am also relieved that nothing ended up happening to the baby and the Charlie is now telling Angelo the truth about how she feels about the baby. I think she will eventually become more excited for it.... Great updates and I can't wait for more

I've just read all of this fiction so far and I think it is very emotionally moving. I cried sooo many times! You do a great job of capturing the emotion in all the characters and portraying their individual responses to the grief of the death of Tony. - At least thats what I thought as I was reading it until the last few Chapters when we discovered he was actually alive! I can't believe Tony is alive after all of that! It's going to affect them all again!!! Poor Lucas I think Jack and Rachel should decide to go ahead with the trial but then again I think I need a bit more infomation about it before I make my final decision! Great Work!

Fantastic updates! Sorry I haven't commented for a while but I have been reading! I love this story but sometimes I can't believe Roman and Ella can be so perfect but then end up fighting again! Great work

Great update! I like the mother son bonding going on between Ella and Mike Shows real understanding..written well

Awww Charlie's keeping the baby Nicole giving all the instructions made me smile as did Angelo putting the nappy on backwards! Ha! Great work

I've just finished reading all the fictions leading up to this one and I want to say they are fantastic! I loved them - I was addicted It took me a long time to read them but it was definitely worth it! I like how you've created a story with a few main central characters to begin with and have added in other characters which are unknown- in terms of home and away. I also like how you've created a story with children in it. I really enjoy reading the happenings of the children and often had trouble keeping track of them all! Onto the fiction at the momment, I think it's lovely how Mike and Danni are going to get married and love how you've made Ella become such a strong character. I hope Roman and her sort out their problems this time... but I have a feeling that as soon as they do something else drastic will happen Anyway I love it and keep up the great work!

That was soo good! I agree with ashleyjane it would become a good long fic Loved it!

Great update! The man Ruby was talking to was interesting.. want to find some more about him. Charlie and Angelo's arguement over the baby was a shame but I can see both points of view...Angelo's last comment was a taking it a little too far I think. Hope they come to some resolution..

Great Update Poor Ruby, having to go through so many confusing feelings... Loved little Ben not wanting to go to school and Ava playing big sister with him! I liked the talk between Ruby and Charlie, so sweet