Laura158

Great few updates! It's good Charlie let Angelo in finally! Poor Ruby having lost Xavier.. has he died? Geoff's right she will eventually find someone else. It made me smile in the previous update when Angelo sent Ava and Ben off to get a jug of water! Great work!

Great update! So glad Angelo was okay and that he saved Charlie! The kids are so cute, and I can't blame Ava for wanting to see her mum! It would be very stressful for both Ava and Ben because they're so young and don't fully understand. Looks like Ruby's sorted herself out and is now looking after Ava, Ben and Calumn! But she just left Calumn with Nicole and Geoff to go and get Ava and Ben- then went straight to the hospital! Fantastic Work!

Wow! Fantastic Fiction so far!! I love it! Sad that Charlie and Angelo are always fighting... Hope both Charlie and Angelo are okay after the fire! I was wondering when she would think about where Angelo was! Great work and I look forward to another update soon!

You had me convinced it was Charlie and Angelo's Wedding!! Great suspense! I loved it! Awww Charlie and Angelo are engaged again And she said she loved him!! Absolutely loved it!

Awww.. I liked the ending! Their going on a date! Glad Charlie didn't have an affair.. I thought she might be working undercover Great Chapter, More soon please

I've just started reading this fiction and I'm loving it! You write so well and really display the emotions of the characters beautifully I liked that Charlie told Ruby about the memories and how Ruby's being so supportive! Hope Charlie remembers more soon...