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Thanks you three, I'm so glad you loved them! The last chapter was a fave of mine... mainly beause it's Mattie/Cassie, and I love writing their friendship, especially scenes like the final one, where it truly shows how important it is to both of them! Tasha - Lucas is a bit blind, isn't he? I keep thinking as I write him that he comes across a bit thick at times (unintentional, I swear) but they have both changed... its been a year, and people can grow so much in a year, especially when they are apart, living different lives (that much I know first hand!) As for a Mattie/Luke reunion... we'll have to wait and see if it ever happens *whistles innocently* Kat - I've always loved big cities, so thats written from the heart. You never realise how much of yourself you put into stories until someone points out parts and you go "Hey, thats a bit like me"... as for where the story is going... to a good place, I promise. Kase - First of all, you must have finished exams, so congratulations! I hope you did well! I don't know how anyone can be expected to be nice to people 24/7, I just can't imagine it, we're all cows at one stage or another. I think that's part of Luke's problem... he keeps invisioning the old Matilda, instead of opening his eyes and seeing the new one. Exactly like you said! Yeah... only.... 6 more chapters left, I think. But it's not that sad, I promise I'll still write stories! Thanks again for the amazing reveiws :)

Thanks. I like the idea of Collision, it works well with the plot I've outlined. Confusing plots are fun... most of the time, I really hate taking the easy, cliched route... which is where all the confusion comes in... although sometimes I can even confuse myself... Thanks for those who commented too, since I thought of them, I'd always been leaning towards World Come Undone, and Of Sins & Sacrafice, and now I have Tainted Muses idea, I've got three to play around with. Hopefully after I've written some, one of the titles will stand out more

Thanks guys, I'm glad you like it Especially Anna, she's my fave to write!

I need help with titles for a new story, I've got some in mind, but any opinions/thoughts would be great. Here is some kind of idea about what the story will most likely be about. Matilda & Henry move to the bay from boarding school when they are 17. Both used to being (kinda) rich, but mainly spoiled, they are stuck up brats who intend to cause problems in the sea-side town. Ric & Drew are best mates, having grown up together. Luke is a mysterious loner who mocks Matilda openly when she begins school with them. Cassie, Belle & Anna are best friends who hate Ric & Drew with a passion, but they hate Matilda and Henry even more so when they arrive with the belief that they are going to take over Summer Bay High. Need more? Highlight if you want this ruined for you. Title ideas I have are: World Come Undone (or simply World Undone) Of Sins & Sacrafice Miles from Home All My Life Thoughts? Opinions? Criticisms about the plot line? Anything is useful at this stage!

Thanks so much you two, I'm so glad you liked it! Hopefully the final one will be up sometime soon. And then, maybe in the New Year, a new story... who knows?

I'd completely forgotten about this story. Thanks carmelle, I'm really glad you enjoyed it

I had the same idea this morning! Something akin to a Writers etiquette thread? Especially after seeing what Emmasi had to say, and how it helped by simply changing the structure. I'd support this thread 100% if it were to go ahead, because it would teach both good technique, and creative ways of structure, wording and such.

Man, those reveiws were love Thanks so much everyone, I'm glad you're still enjoying it, despite the fact that I'm kinda toying with our main characters. I'd like to take a moment to defend Sara here. While writing this chapter, I knew that it would seem as if Sara would have had a drastic makeover, from angel to devil, but, try to keep in mind we're only seeing her through Mattie's eyes... and maybe Mattie has her own reasons for viewing Sara the way she does... I'm inspired, and writing more as we speak, so I really hope to have another chapter posted soon, and then another soon after, as I have time off this weekend But thanks for the continued support, and wonderful reviews!

Wooo! Go ILM & SKYKAT. That was a brilliant chapter. Drama and intrigue, and Hayley is still the number one person on my imaginary hit list! She's so evil, but naive at the same time. But I think Kane is going to bring her back to reality a little... because maybe she's in a little over her head. I loved the moments between Cassie and Martha, showing that they aren't exactly the most perfect of friends, or people, but still care about one another and don't want to see them get hurt. And I loved Cassie's moment of vulnerability, and her reasoning behind Kane... it made perfect sesne, and was so well written! Can't wait for more... but I would wait a month to read one update of this brilliant fic!

Aww, thanks guys, I'm glad you can see Anna as an actual human, that means a lot. That chapter was possibly my favourite, it just flowed from me, like everyone was in tune. Only two more left Kase but fear not, another story featuring the fab 8 is in the works. Just need to find time to write *kicks evil work*

Thanks guys, I'm so glad you all enjoyed it. Hopefully I touched the inner romantic in each of you More soon... but I make no promises, you'll just have to wait and find out what will happen next!

Aww that was so perfect Jackie! Baby girls, thats so sweet! And Mattie was so adorable waiting for their birth! But she so had a right to want to see her nieces when they are born! Of course, Mattie/Luke were adorable, such a sweet, perfect ending to such an amazing story. You know how much I love my fluff, and you didn't disappoint! Seriously amazing work as per usual, I'm loving it, and can't wait for the sequal, but don't hurry, the wait will just build up more anticipation!

That so deserves one big AWWWWWWWWWWWWW That was so perfect Jackie. Funnily enough, I watched the end of Con Air on Friday night to hear that song... it was perfect for this occasion, perfect! And Matilda and Lucas are So perfect, and now they are married, and Guh, soooo much fluff, so sweet, so adorable, and only one more chapter *cries* why? I especially loved the Henry/Mattie moment... Henry is love... and that was too perfect for words... awwww! I love this story, and I don't want it to end!

Ohh Jen, the last one is so pretty! I love the blueish/greenish tinge you've got going on there! Very nice work!

Thanks you two, glad you liked it! Kase, I'm glad you love crazy, drunk Mattie, because I love writing her She's so much fun to throw in there! More soon!

Only two... *sniffs* That was full of fluff and love I'm so in love with Mattie and Luke... makes me miss them so much! But, thats what fic is for, right? It was perfect, its so cute how they can finish one another sentences! So very adorable. And I hope Mattie will be able to walk... will this be another Angel/Shane scenario... hmm *ponders*... more soon, I hope!

Double whammy! And man, you're pulling out all the big stops aren't you? Martha pissed with Jack was funny, Jack sucking up was funnier, but still cute when they had their declaration of love! But Mattie and Lucas, awwww , and OMG, and you so totally know how much I HATE cliffhangers! One of these days, someone will come for you... I cannot wait for more! Please update soon!

Aww, thanks for the amazing response everyone. I'm glad you can feel the chemistry between them... I kinda wanted that, more than anything, because it means you can actually see them being together... There will be more soon Only three more chapters though

Aww thanks guys! I'm glad you all loved the Luke/Kit conversation... I thought it would make be a little different to the common Mattie/Kit conversation... and yay for Sara's fanclub Although, I understand how everyone that reads is a ML shipper at heart! And Kat... keep on guessing... I myself, have no idea where that particular relationship is headed... so no one will probably know until... hmm, the final chapter... More soonish!

Aww cute Mattie and Luke And poor Martha. Jake better make it up to her *shakes fists angrily* or someone will get him... Can't wait for more Jackie!

I'm so intrigued, to say the least. I mean, I wasn't a fan of any of these characters on screen, but the way you (and Kat) write them, I just can't help feel everything they are feeling. I'm enjoying Dani's POV the most... I don't know why, maybe because I can't remember what really happened after the trial on TV, and have a feeling it was brushed aside, but I know I wanna read more, and see how you explore each of the characters thought and feelings, because its like you've got this amazing ability to make them jump off the page at you!

Me, write an awkward, tension filled reunion? Lord no, that comes later I'm so glad you all enjoyed it. And yes Kat, the 'it' chapter, the one everyone couldn't wait to read! I think that makes it an 'it' chapter. Hopefully, my muse is returning, and there will be another update soon. Hopefully!

Poor Martha... hormones are so evil! But I'm sure she already knows that! And Mattie and Luke are very adorable, I'm really excited about the trial now, reckon Mattie will get some good experience, and get back at the person who hit them! Can't wait for more!

Thanks Kase... I realised, after writing this chapter, having initially promoted it as a Rhianna story... there not much Rhianna till the end... it kind of became about the girls... doesn't it always? I'm glad you enjoyed it though, this story is seriously so much fun to write! And yes... the Gilmore way must live on!

If I ever beg you for one thing, it would be to, in the end, fix Will and Gypsy. Her part almost had me in tears, I just wanted Will to go over there and take her in his arms and make her better It was so beautifully written Kat. Noah and Kit are cute. I'm still wrapping my head around them, but really feeling the love between the two. I'm also waiting patiently for Cassie and Martha to grow backbones and dish it back out to Hayley, but I have faith that that day will come! Hmm... I wonder, what could Kane ever be up to? I can't wait for more of this story!