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sevenpuddings

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  1. Thanks everyone, there should be more up soon, I'm glad you're all enjoying it though!
  2. Thank you all so much. I'm so glad everyone loved the story, and I'm glad you're all decisive about whether Mattie lived or died... even though SKYKAT seems to be the only one to believe I'm not that cruel. Maybe one day I'll finish it properly, and everyone will see what I believe too... Don't worry, more stories will be coming in your direction soon!
  3. I don't know if she's dead or not... that my friend, is for you to decide in your own mind. Was she finally saved, or did she save herself?
  4. For an introduction of Anna's physical appearance, I used Matties Point of View. The rest of the story, bar for the final chapter, will be in Anna's, my original character I created so Ric wasn't alone! I'm glad you liked it
  5. Jack gay? I can see it working... LoL That was cute fluff once more. All these negative tests, yet she's still sick. Shouldn't she have seen a doctor by now? You're keeping the suspence high, aren't you? Mattie/Luke fluff is so adorable, I can't wait to know what happens on their holiday. Great update, can't wait for more!
  6. Yay, that was so cute! But with the cliffhangers? tut tut, I hate them so much! Especially when its subtle and not so shocking... I wanna know if Martha really is knocked up! LoL It was a very cute update! Luke so knows he missed out on everything! And Martha and Jack are surprisingly cute... yes, I'm tolerating them in this story Jackie, thats a huge feat, and a credit to your writing skills! Can't wait for the next update!
  7. Thanks so much Tess and Annie, I'm so happy you enjoyed the final chapter. And Tess.. just to keep you (and everyone else) guessing... who say's she's dead? Oh yeah, there could be a whole other story there... but most likely won't be. I just love openended endings! Thanks again for the reviews throughout the story, they really meant a lot to me!
  8. If you read my stories, most people know I'm a fan of endings that are unexpected. Mainly for two reasons. Shocking the reader to keep them keen, and also, keeping stories openended so if (by chance) one day you'd like to add more, you've got so many roads to take. However, its pretty cool to sometimes give everyone a happy ending... I should do that more often actually.
  9. LMAO, I spelt Disaster wrong. Woops Oh well. If any mods stumble upon this, can you edit? I was rushed, and also, I can't spell! I'm glad everyone likes it, seeing as the next chapters are all going to be from Anna's POV, kind of like how she see's the group together. Just to clarify, Drew & Belle are together, Henry & Cassie are together and Mattie & Luke are together, and thats how they are going to stay, because I'm such a nice person and want my ships together. Plus, this is basically a Ric/Anna story, so I hope you will all continue to enjoy it! More up soon!
  10. Mattie is so evil, lol! And that Luke cannot hold his booze! Very well written chapter Jackie, it was so cute, and funny, and sweet, and I love Mattie's present for him, that was so adorable Can't wait for more!
  11. Aww thanks everyone! I know its sad that its coming to an end... and because I've been a bad little chicken and have written very little of MWASD (The final in the Summer trilogy) I have a little surprise in store for anyone that will be willing to read it. Yep, bet you're all sitting on the edge of your seats now The final chapter should be up soon. I hope it doesn't disappoint. Thats all I have to say. Thanks again for the amazing reviews! Jess
  12. *Squeals* OMG, seriously? That was AMAZING! Wow, stunning. I love, love, love it. So descriptive, so emotive, so blown away like. I want more Jack/Mattie fics please... I know its wrong, but something about the way you write them just makes them so perfect... its like a deliciously dark secret that needs to remain hidden away. I can't wait for the final part... yet I can, because its been such an amazing story.
  13. Oh I love this thread idea... you basically described the middle of every one of my stories! As for changing the style, is it as subtle as the way things are described/how you use your language as opposed to changing tense/person... because changing tense and person would be completely confusing, where as changing the way words are used to describe events can be refreshing for a story Does that make any sense at all?
  14. Okay, I'm going to say it, because I have every other time I've read a chapter with them in it... Henry and Belle are F&$^ing HOT! I mean seriously Kase, are you trying to make me jealous as I read? Because I am, I want Henry to be looking at me like that... *pouts* (Which is also slightly derranged, as I'm older than him... but, meh) I loved it, every last word. The descriptions are amazing, and the characters are so well developed, and I just loved it. Mattie and Luke were sweet, but Mattie is up to something... and I hope she shares soon, because its not right for her to be like that alone. But, Henry and Belle stole the show. PLEASE add more... I will beg, if necessary! (And Year 12 is a witch! I know what you're feeling hun, this time last year I felt it too... but the light at the end of the tunnel is oh so bright at this stage, right? And you're right, the summer afterwards, is brilliant for writing, SQUEE at the promise of more stories!)
  15. What's not to get? Also, if you don't understand, try asking the author for an explination, or waiting for more of the story to come as whatever it is your confused about may be explained. I loved this update. It was so raw and dark in the middle of what should have been a happy moment for Mattie and Luke. Its so descritive, it has be glued to every word, and I can't wait for more. This is one heck of a story!
  16. Ohhhh sounds awesome... and dramatic... I can't wait to read it! (I'm a very happy chappy now that I know I shall get more M/L from you! )
  17. Yay! I'm so glad... not to pick on Nicole or Annie, but seriously, it was brilliantly finished, and I loved the ending, would not change a thing for the world. However, I wouldn't not want another Mattie/Luke story from you...*nudges jackandmartha!!!*
  18. Three chapters in one day, what a nice surprise for when I wake up! I loved them all! I can't wait for Surfers Paradise either, I think they'll have a blast! And I felt so bad for Martha, but I hope she wished for the baby, because that would be so cute! I can't wait for more!
  19. Henry is my hero And I'm so glad the confrontation is coming. Can't wait for more, even though it will be sad to see this story come to an end!
  20. Yay, that was so cute. I'm loving the interaction between everyone. So sweet... not to mention the fluff overload which you know I love more than anything! They all just seem so perfect for one another... like the title... they are Written in the Stars (which, coincidentally, is the BEST Gilmore Girls episode EVER!) Can't wait for more!
  21. Wow. Seriously, thats so brilliant. The writing is so intriguing, and I find myself constantly sitting waiting for more. And its really showing the development of the feelings. I can't wait for more on this, even though I'm a hardcore Mattie/Luke lover, I'm really loving this story, because its just so different and daring! As for some that review... *shakes head* how about reading the topic title and sub title before reviewing?
  22. Aww so cute! I'm enjoying this friendship thing, its working for me. And their interaction is so great. And Ella is so cute! I hope Robbie and Tasha are in it a fair bit more too, because they would just be the icing on the cake. I can't wait to see where this goes, its such a cute story!
  23. Awwww Jackie that was such a perfect ending. I love how there was family time, and Tony and Beth getting married, thats so adorable. I love how strong Mattie and Luke appeared to be in the end, it was that little bit of fluff that made it that much better... I've loved this story from beginning to end, it was beautifully written and handled so brilliantly! Well done hun!
  24. Awww male bonding all round. That was great Jackie. I'm glad that Luke was still angry, because he had every right to be, just I just hope that they can move past this, and look towards the future. Can't wait for more (so happy your on the writing spree!)
  25. I enjoyed this story, I really did. I thought the emotive language used was stunning, and the feelings described were so real to me. In saying that, some moments felt as if they were repeating ones that have had before. But it kind of worked. I did love the openendeedness of the story though, I thought it worked well... and because of that, I don't feel the need for a sequel, because its better to leave people guessing.
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