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I'm loving this fiction Danni! I can't believe that it was Ruby who found them I'm not liking them right now and Angelo doesn't deserve Charlie back even if he wanted her. I really hope she doesn't abort the baby, I can't believe Angelo thought about it! Looking forward to the next update

Chapter 3 - I HATE Nicole, how could she say Charlie is lying?? It's good that Ruby has Casey to offload to and Charlie has Leah. Angelo better believe her and not move away! And how could he ask her for proof? Chapter 4 - I really liked this chapter. Loved Charlie and Ruby's wee chat, simply lovely How could Angelo accuse her of lying? I loved Charlie's reaction to him saying Nicole put the idea in his head. But demanding proof? And now she's out drinking, that's really not good. I hope Angelo doesn't walk in cos he'll never believe her now and he'll jet off to Italy with his "family". Loving this Danni! xo

Oh dear, you've only started and I'm behind already, I knew I would forget to read this! Chapter 1 - Wow, Angelo cheated on Charlie I'm feeling Ruby's hatred!! Charlie being pregnant definitely makes things interesting, she still loves him How could you ask if it's worth continuing?? It is Chapter 2 - I hate Angelo, I love how Charlie just tells it like it is, I can't believe he had an affair! And how could he say he still loves her? That means nothing now I would have just slapped him...and then Ruby should slap Nicole! Oh goodness, I thought he was going to say Nicole was pregnant, phew! But he better not go!!!!!! I am loving this Danni! xo

Great update Cally! I hope Charlie confides in Leah more...and Angelo, ring him!!! Mr Lowis unsure about this man, I thought it was going to turn out to be Charlie and Ruby he was looking for, but if it was Angelo did a really good job of covering up. And why was he suddenly so interested in Angelo?? Update soon my exams start next week so I need some amusement! Well that's probably what I don't need, but anyway!

Cally!! I was looking for an excuse to not start revising and I came on here and saw I had missed an update You have no idea how happy that made me!! Anyway, loved this update, Angelo is so sweet I hope Charlie does call him while he's away cos I'm sure he'll be thinking about her all day! Martha I really don't like her! I'm glad Jack is standing up to her and telling her to wise up, but I do hope they can sort their problems out. I hope Martha doesn't give in and read the file, cos she'd change her attitude to Charlie, and it would be better if she just stopped judging her and tried to get to know her properly. Loving this! Update soon please

I loved the Angelo/Ruby bit at the end, and how he still wants to get to know Charlie better after finding out the truth about the rape. And the date was lovely I hope they go on another one...and soon! It's nice to see Ross and Morag back I am loving this story!!

Aw Danni I loved that! I really don't want this story to end I love how Charlie took a step back and let Angelo do things, and it's good she was able to go to work and let Angelo and Chloe spend some time together, I really enjoyed the bonding. I'm also enjoying that Angelo is getting up at night! Ben and Callum were super cute as usual, the big brother stuff was adorable And it's nice to see Ruby settled in her own home again. I want to say update soon, but I don't!

I am loving this Cally!! I love how Angelo and Charlie are on a date, I'm so glad she said yes!! I wish Jack and Martha would wise up, he's always been so nice to Charlie, idiot! And Georgie's been really nice about it all, I hope they can become friends. I can't wait to see how the rest of the date goes!! Update soon!

Glad to have you back Danni! It's great that Ruby is finally house-hunting. I had to laugh at Charlie pointing out all of the things wrong with it although it's understandable that she doesn't want her to leave again. I hope Charlie and Angelo get the whole work and night feeds sorted. Loved the, I'll give you proper coffee but don't tell Dad!

I loved that end scene, it looks like Ben is slowly coming around to the idea of Chloe being a permanant fixture in the house! And Nigel the worm, how could you say no to that! I hope changelo work something out, but maybe a sitter wouldn't be such a bad idea, and money could prove to be a problem if Angelo stopped working. They really need to grow up and stop arguing about everything! Hope you're having a great time, again I'm sorry I didn't get talking to you before you went!

Oh wow Cally, that was fantastic, I actually don't know where to begin! Poor Charlie at the start, I'm glad she was able to let loose when out with the girls. I love how well she was received by the teens, even if it was a bit awkward, and Dex was able to keep his comments to himself for once I thought Ruby handled all of the questions really well. Martha I loved the changelo stuff, especially when the teens were talking about it. Spilling water over Angelo but it did end up in a really nice moment I can't wait to see how this develops!! I LOVED this chapter!

Oh no, I missed two updates, I am sorry Chapter 95 Aw Ben was so cute when his great idea was to make mud pies, and Nigel the worm I'm glad that changelo didn't fight, their little hiccup didn't go any further I loved the end when they were both standing over Chloe's cot. What a nice picture of a happy family Chapter 96 I'm glad the doctor thought everything was ok with Chloe, and it's great that she doesn't need her monitor. And I'm so glad Charlie was able to leave Chloe with Angelo, I feel like she doesn't trust him to look after her properly! I did like the comment “How do you think Angelo will do with a 3 month old, a 10 month old, a jealous big brother and Ava?” I think it's great that Ruby wants to take the big step and move out of her parent's house, but I can't help but think that her emotions are still raw after the miscarriage and she needs her family around her. “She just wanted a cuddle from her Daddy” how cute! And the next minute Benjamin is getting told off, how does he manage to be so cute through it all! I didn't expect Chloe to be in the picture, and I suppose he hasn't had a great relationship with Charlie for a while, but it was a bit harsh. I'm glad she made it onto the picture in the end! Really enjoyed this chapter Danni

Loved this chapter Cally! You write Marilyn and Alf SO perfectly!! And I loved Angelo's reaction to seeing Charlie and that fact that Leah and Charlie are going there for dinner, I am slightly suspicious that Charlie initiated it in this particular venue I'm glad Charlie was ok with Ruby confiding in Nicole, well not that she actually told her but it's nice that she'll be able to talk to her about it and Charlie won't mind. I hope Charlie confides in Leah because she could really do with a friend, and I know she sort of has Jack but he's a man and he's a policeman so she'd always be afraid of him looking at things differently. Loving this Cally, thankyou!

Aw, wee Ben is so cute! I'm glad Charlie finally went to play with him, even if she did have to be told by Angelo, and I'm glad he said what he did by the way. I loved the stuff with Gina and Ruby, the box of memories is a great idea, and hopefully her and Gina can put the whole baby thing behind them and try to get past it. I thought the picture you painted at the end was beautiful, Ava holding the baby and Angelo cupping her head, a wee family portrait! Your writing never ceases to amaze me Danni, looking forward to the next chapter!

It's official, Angelo has appeared I hope they'll be bumping into each other a lot more often!! I love the Jack and Charlie work colleagues/friends thing going on, it's good that she knows she has someone to talk to, even if she doesn't want to talk. And I'm glad all the teens were fine with Charlie's age and didnt' freak out, although the Poppy story obviously upset her. And I loved Dex's reaction to the lack of slapping etc between Ruby and Indi It's good she has Nicole, I hope Charlie understands that she only told her cos there's only so long she can bottle things up for and she just had to tell someone or else Charlie would get it all and she knows Charlie feels bad enough about it all. Colleen she will never change! But that's why we love her, you write her character so perfectly with all of her little mannerisms. Keep up the good work Cally!