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Wow, what an update Danni!! I don't know where to start! Enjoyed the scene with Ruby and Jay, it must have given her a sense of closure, but I couldn't help but wonder as I read it if she was going to blurt out about the baby. And the bit at Xavier's grave was so sad poor Ruby and wee Cal. You wrote it so well. Disney store, wow what madness! Wee Ben was so cute and Ava, well typical girl! I thought Angelo was handling it well but I wish Charlie would stop overruling him in every parenting matter. And I think I would have felt sorry for Ava and bought her something in the end, of course she's bound to feel that they're so preoccupied with Chloe. I hope Chloe's going to be ok, she's been through a lot

I loved all of the stuff with Ruby and Nicole, especially with the kids, I think Nic has been the most understanding person throughout all of this It is great she's so supportive, especially since Gina is finding it hard to come to terms with, hopefully that'll change. And Ruby resorting to blackmail that was funny! Still loving how dad comes out so naturally, it makes them seem even more like a family. Colleen as long as Charlie remembers not to take the things she says too seriously. Loving this Danni

I love how Charlie has started to open up to Leah, and she can see that she too is a single mother with a trail of broken relationships, hopefully she'll prove to be a valuable friend for Charlie. And everyone seems so friendly towards them, it was nice of Jack to introduce Martha, and their reactions to Ruby were to be expected but it's a pity it seems to have caused a fight between them, hopefully they'll work things out soon. It's nice to see that he is standing up for Charlie and not just assuming she's a slut or something. And chuby especially their hug in the restaurant and Ruby noticing the difference in Charlie, it just shows just how much they are in sync Loving this Cally! Thankyou!

Ooh Ruby, I really liked the ending, it's like she already has a mother/child bond with the baby. Loved the Rangelo ( ) bit, I think it's lovely that when she asked him for his true opinion he didn't want to influence her. He'll be a granda again, maybe that's his secret reason! Ruby going to see Jay, intriguing but completely understandable. Loved the changelo banter about Charlie having 3 kids with a murderer, that made me laugh Poor Ruby, I hope things start to pick up for her Ok I really should get back to my work, I could go on for a while yet!

Oh Gina was harsh, it was expected but she went way over the top and she's just made it a hundred times harder for Ruby although Ruby shouldn't have compared Angelo and Jay Ruby's right, it's not the baby's fault, that's my attitude towards the situation. Lovely chuby moment I feel a bit sorry for Angelo and Morag, Charlie shouldn't have given away their feelings without letting Ruby talk to them cos now they're being shut out. Awk bless Ava and Ben not wanting to go to the hospital, and the baking..so cute! I think the chat with Nic and Ruby was really nice, I'm sure she'll be a really good friend whatever Ruby decides to do. Brilliant update Danni, looking forward to seeing what Ruby's decision is

Chapter 6 I love the sound of the house! And it's lovely that Charlie wants to spend all of her money on Ruby. Charlie, the male police officer who they think Georgina will like, maybe Officer Williams will like HER that really was funny!! I love how you had a bit with Martha and Rachel in it, hopefully they can befriend Charlie. Awk bless Charlie, wanting a fresh start, but it really would be easier if she was completely truthful first time round, even if she is worried about how people will react. Chapter 7 Hahahaha Jack's reaction! I'm so glad she mentioned Ruby, she didn't need to elaborate, they'll work it out anyway, looks like they're starting to twig onto something already! Oooh Angelo and Charlie do I sense something there? I think so! Oh dear, Morag and Alf, poor Charlie. And Leah not being able to speak when she found out just how closely they were related Loving this Cally, thankyou so much, you're a star

Wow Danni you wrote that so well, I'm really glad you decided to do a scene in the court. Poor Gina and Ruby, it must have been so hard for them to cope, and although it wasn't the best time for Gina to find out about the baby, it was probably easier on Ruby to blurt it out rather than trying to keep it a secret for longer or telling them all individually and just prolonging the pain. Loved the bit with changelo and the coffee, when he stopped her from pouring it I had to laugh it was nice that you put some light entertainment in this chapter too! I hope Charlie isn't going to be mad at Angelo now, but none of them should influence Ruby's decision, although if she does decide to keep it she will need to talk to them cos she can't do it alone. Really really liked this chapter Danni!

I loved that chapter, it was so easygoing in a relaxed and cool way And Angelo glad he's made an appearance!! And Romeo and Xavier Something tells me Charlie and Ruby will have no problem making friends in the bay. That's me away for a girly weekend now, see you on Monday! Keep writing

Oh my goodness Ruby I thought for sure it would be negative!!! Oh dear, this complicates things so much! I wonder how Angelo will react and Gina would be devestated. The scene in the hospital was so cute with Ava, I hope Chloe is ok in the long run, she's been through enough. And yayy Charlie is home, loved Ben's reaction. But oh my goodness Ruby

Ok so I told myself that I wouldn't read this until my exams were over, but as of this afternoon they are over so here I am! You've probably been wondering where I am but you know I wouldn't abandon your fiction Chapter 1 - Great start Cally, I am SO glad you decided to write another fiction I loved the way you wrote the bit in the shower about the tears, very poignant. Ruby and Charlie seem to have a close relationship but typical Charlie blaming herself for her relationship problems. And Ruby, relationships are never easy for her either. A move for them could be a new start, it could be good. Maybe it's just me but Toby seems like a sleeze. Chapter 2 - It's good that Hannah is there for Ruby, and I know she was trying to protect her, but not sure that's the best idea. Toby doesn't deserve Ruby, I knew he was a player, they should feel bad, they shouldn't have done anything while the two of them are together. It's good that Charlie was there to listen to Ruby's troubles, Ruby needs to be able to rely on Charlie as much as she relies on Ruby. And of course she would jump at the move, but maybe it's not such a bad idea. Chapter 3 - Wow, that was beautiful, Ruby is willing to move because she wants to help Charlie progress in her career and to thank her for everything she has done for her. I liked the bit with Ruby and Charlie going to school, they seemed so happy. Of course Ruby and Stacey were going to end up fighting, it was funny though! I'm sure Charlie was sad leaving the station, and Keith and everyone else, that was such a lovely ending. Chapter 4 - I loved the mother/daughter easygoing feel of this chapter. And burning the stuff Toby gave her along with Charlie's stuff was a great idea, to leave their bad memories behind and start over. Wow, another perfect ending, such a beautiful picture. I am loving this Cally, I can see this is going to be beautiful

Oh Danni that was lovely! I'm so glad they finally got to hold her, and Angelo would have regretted it if he didn't go back in. And now it looks like things are looking up for them as a couple hopefully the two of them spending so much time with Chloe will really help their relationship as they help each other cope with everything. I had to laugh at Angelo's reaction to the word Shelly I don't think he would ever believe she had apologised! Great update as usual

Oh wow Danni, I see you've been busy. That was so beautiful, you captured the emotions perfectly. Loved the bit with Charlie and Shelly, hopefully she'll realise now that Angelo didn't do it cos he doesn't love her, he was drunk, and it's tearing him up inside, hopefully now she'll talk to him and things will improve. But although Shelly has apologised, I hope she goes away for good and they don't have to see her or bump into her again, cos now Charlie will think of how Shelly knows she is the victim or rape, and that'll make things worse. The changelo bits were lovely, he has such a way of calming her down, but I hope it doesn't all get too much for him cos it hurts him too, he's Chloe's father, and if he bottles it all up it won't be good. Wow, such a beautiful chapter Danni, your writing is amazing

Brilliant updates Danni Chapter 78 - Antonia now that made me giggle, haven't heard that one before! I'm glad that Charlie told Angelo she didn't like the name, cos he needed to hear it from her. I can't believe she settled for it as a middle name though, nice compromise. And Chloe is a lovely name Poor little baby and all the blood tests, she needs to come home, Angelo and Charlie need to hold their baby girl. Enjoyed the wee chat with Angelo and Ruby, I like the way their relationship is based on being able to talk to and help each other, usually what they can't tell Charlie, it's nice that they each have a confidant. Chapter 79 - I love Morag in the grandmother role, she's so good with the kids. I'm glad Charlie is learning to lean on Angelo as they both need each other to help them through this. The chat with Rachel and Charlie was nice, hopefully it helped put things into perspective for Charlie and will stop her stressing so much. Poor Chloe, I hope she is ok.

Loved that Danni, especially the stuff with the kids, and Ben not wanting to see the baby, I hope he changes his mind soon! Poor Ava wanting to hold her little sister, I'm sure Charlie and Angelo feel the same way! Glad to see Morag too Sorry this is short, must dash and do some last minute maths!!

Wow Shelly seemed to come through ok, I hope she can save this baby cos it seems like she actually wants to!! Poor Angelo, he wanted so much to be there, stupid phone! And poor wee Ben, he's so cute not wanting to leave his daddy, Matthew is lovely too. Great advice Angelo has been given, but he'll get a chance to put it into practice sooner than he thinks, that is if he gets to see Charlie soon. Hopefully they will get her and peanut to the hospital soon and it will all be ok. Wonderful as usual Danni!

She's back!!! As if she hasn't caused enough trouble...and she seems to appear when they're having marriage problems, although she did cause them. I loved all the mother/daughter stuff with Ruby, and it's good that Charlie knows that Angelo has been there for Ruby and has been a great help to her. Loved it when Ruby called him dad, and the granddad one made me giggle Hopefully Ruby can talk a bit of sense into Charlie when they're away! Great update

Oh wow, these last two chapters have been amazing, I'm so glad that Charlie and Martha had that chat and put everything into perspective. And the room sounds lovely, trust Angelo to get carried away buying baby girl's clothes, he's going to be the doting father! I loved all the scenes with him and Ava, so happy how well they are getting on. The break away will do Charlie and Ruby good, hopefully it will help them sort things out, and give them a chance to talk aswell, it was a really lovely thought. This is so good Danni, keep up the good work! xo

Yayy your internet is working again!! Lovely chapter for relationships, glad Ruby and Xavier are back on, and of course changelo Dex typical, you write him so well! I LOVED all of the changelo scenes, they were so lovely, they'll make such a good wee family but she better say YES first!! And I love how Ruby plays a part in their relationship. It was beautiful when Ross was looking at the picture, he's going to be a granda! Well again I suppose but yea he'll be excited Hope your internet keeps going so that we get to read more soon, and if not, HAPPY CHRISTMAS

Haha that's funny that Charlie couldn't fit under the bed, Ava is so cute, you have to laugh at her calling the baby peanut! Loved the swimming pool stuff. Ben was the star of the chapter though, he's so cute I just want to eat him! I loved how one minute he wasn't talking to Charlie cos she had taken Ava out without him, but the next minute he's giving her the puppy dog eyes to get Toy Story! Aww! Beautiful ending, lovely scene with mother and daughter. Loved this Danni, get back soon and write more!

Don't you dare feel bad! It's not your fault, technology isn't all that it's built up to be! So...your last chapter, I didn't comment because I WAS IN LONDON Yes that's right, I got rescheduled and got away, so happy! So...back to the point of this. It was actually quite funny the way Ruby blurted it out to Morag and Xavier, I mean I know it's not her news to tell, but oh well, it was done in a funny way...although Charlie might have something different to say about it. I hope the baby's ok, they'll make a lovely wee family! And I'm sure Morag and Xavier won't say anything, I mean Xavier just won't speak at all cos he'll be so careful cos he won't want to lose her again. I can't wait until they decide to tell people, Leah and Ross etc. Wonderful as always, maybe more wonderful cos they're having a baby

Nooo, we're too near the end so happy all the bars are out, I was cringing the whole time the doctor was there, I was convinced he was going to mention the recovery or something in relation to the pregnancy, and that would be it. Hope Ruby and Xavier can get back to where they were. I can't imagine what happens next, it's annoying me! So update soon!

Ah I had this big long comment and stupid thing decided to delete it. Loved the changelo bits, especially when Angelo told her she was always gorgeous, I hope Charlie will open up to Angelo now, they have too many distractions but they need to sort things out cos it's all getting too much. The wedding ring scared me a bit until I read her response. The kids were super-cute as usual, especially Ben (I think I secretly want to kidnap him) As for the Ruby bits, I just can't get over the previous chapter, will she always call him dad now? I hope so! Update soon

Aw, Charlie didn't freak out too much, that's a good sign! Bless Angelo, chattering away with excitement and all that. And it's so good that the bars can still come out, hopefully there won't be any complications with the baby. I still can't believe it, changelo with a wee baby! Loved the wee charlie and ruby bits, of course this will change things but not their relationship. I'm sad it's nearly over Can't believe we're at chapter 108 though, well done

Oh my goodness Charlie's pregnant! This has just brightened my day I nearly missed this update too, basically I should be shopping in London now but my flight was cancelled, I re-booked and it was cancelled again so meh silly snow, and I had to get up at 2:30am for nothing so I'm flippin sleepy!. Loving changelo's relationship, and oh my goodness a baby? This will complicate things, I'm guessing Angelo will be happy but Charlie won't? Just a feeling, I hope I'm wrong! And does this mean the bars can't come out cos she can't have an x-ray? Great verdict at court, hopefully they can move forward now, with their baby! I love how Angelo and Ruby are there through everything, and how he was able to calm her down outside court, and that they were allowed to sit with her when they announced the verdict Update soon cos you can't leave it at this!

Aw, I love how Angelo came and picked her up, she's so lucky to have him. It was lovely that Miles, Irene, Leah etc were there to support Charlie, and it was nice that they could reach her from where they were, I'm sure it meant a lot to Charlie to know they were there. I hope that when the jury see how hard it was for Charlie to be in the same room as them, let alone feel their stares boaring deep into her that they make the right decision and send them away for a very long time. Colleen looking for a phone what would you do with her? Good writing as usual!