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Great update I love how Angelo was there to help Charlie, and it was good for Xavier and Ruby to have some time alone to talk about things. And it's so good he was there when she collapsed, poor Charlie And flip, they were lucky Nic was around! I hope she's ok but at least Angelo's there with her, and Ruby will soon be. I'm so glad everything is out in the open between Xavier and Ruby, it's good that he is going to be there for her. Update soon!

Yayy, that was funny! Loved the bit with Jay/Gina/Ruby, I wonder if she's figured it out? And I hope Ruby stays on, cos she isn't needed at home, Gina needs her more! The stuff with the kids in the hospital was so sweet I hope Angelo isn't in pain for too much longer, it seems to be quite bad. Charlie and the wheelchair. Great update Danni

Oh I can't wait to see what happens next! Haha Colleen, she's so funny, and she's never nosey for no reason! And saying she is family, they could almost call her auntie Colleen liked the way Angelo hugged Xavier, and Ruby was so brave for telling him the truth. Great update!

Aw that was such a lovely chapter, I loved it! I love how protective of Charlie and Ruby Angelo is, and how he was able to take Xavier away so that Ruby could talk to Charlie. I'm so glad that they still have such a close relationship, if not closer than before. But I did laugh at Xavier threatening Angelo if Ruby got hurt so sweet! I wonder when Ruby will tell him?? Or will he work it out? Cos he's been told half of it... I guess we'll find out! Great as usual!

Aw, Colleen dropping the plate I love how Angelo's place is now beside Charlie and how cute was he when he was wanting to hold her hand. Ooh Ruby is telling Xavier...I wonder if she will actually come out and say Charlie is her mum or will she regret it and freak out before then? I can't wait to the next chapter to find out! Great as usual!

That was lovely. Colleen is hilarious I could just picture her hanging round their table, scribbling the orders down quickly and then dropping the spray, they worked that one well, it'll sure give her something to tell Madge Wilkins! And Angelo told Charlie he loved her it's a pity he can't find anything out about the case, but hopefully it won't take too long. I love how Ruby and Ross are still ok after all of this, even though she's calling him Ross now. I wonder if Colleen will say something...or will she just try and eavesdrop in their conversation? Update soon!!

Yayy, I'm so glad that everyone is ok, I was getting worried about the baby there! It was so well written, I could sense the urgency, the pain, and then the relief Poor wee Ben, I hope Morag got there in time and he's ok I loved how Charlie was so worried that she hadn't told Angelo she loved him, and he could have died, but then she told him a million times when she saw him that was funny. I hope she's ok and they all get home safe. Wonderful as usual

That was just lovely, especially the ending, loved the heart-to-heart, it was beautiful, you're such a good writer. I loved especially the bit where Charlie said that she couldn't have gotten through it if Ruby hadn't been growing inside her, Ruby helped her through it all even before she was born, amazing. It's so good that Charlie and Ruby still have such a close relationship that Ruby can talk to Charlie about these things and not bottle them up. I loved how Charlie came out of the room and hugged Ross, and Morag hugged Charlie, I love the relationship Charlie and Ruby have with Morag Haha I wonder if Angelo will be able to refrain from asking Georgie about the case...not sure, maybe she should stay away from him! It would be so good if it was resolved soon though, they've all been through a lot. Love this!

Oh my goodess, what is going to happen next?? Cliffhanger!! I hope he's ok and Charlie and the baby too and with Ruby away how is Charlie going to cope. It was so funny Angelo getting over-excited about buying the stuff and wanting to buy the whole shop! If Charlie hadn't have stepped in poor Ben would have been waiting to get picked up for a long time It's lovely that Ruby went to see Gina, it's nice that you brought her into the story, it was lovely to see that although they're both still struggling with losing Xav that they have Callum to help them through it. Update soon! We need to find out if Angelo is ok!

Aw that was lovely, I don't have time for a normal/long (debatable ) comment, I know, it's wierd for me!! Loved that, and I hope Georgie can continue it on. I loved the chuby moment at the end, and also how Morag is being strong for both her and Ross, he couldn't do this without her!! Colleen but you've got to love her! Good update

Aw that was beautiful Danni! I loved how Angelo didn't want to go shopping but then he started picking out all these baby outfits, how lovely! I'm glad it didn't turn into a big argument, and it was lovely the way he said he loved hormonal Charlie I'm glad we know more about Morag now and what she was doing in the city, I wonder if she will find something? It's probably good that Ruby is away for a few days during all of this cos it would be hard on her and having Jay around makes things more complicated. Oh and I'm looking forward to their night out! Great update as usual!

Oh that ending was lovely, I loved the way Angelo rushed over to Charlie and just held her, and the way she was leaning on him and he was comforting her and then how Charlie was leaning on Ruby. It's so nice that Ruby wanted to go in with Charlie, to be there for her and to try and help her through it. Toby's mum, what was she thinking? If Charlie's ok with it then it's nothing to do with her! VJ is so cute, I loved how he went and picked her a teddy, aww. And Colleen, I wonder if she'll figure something out, or will she just outright ask them! You never know with Colleen but I'm sure thinking about it will occupy her time anyway! Loving this, great work Cally!

Aw I hope you feel better soon. I wonder if Nicole will come up with some sort of explanation? Could be interesting Poor Charlie, I hope Angelo is able to get the photos arranged, but at least he was the one who was able to be with her in the room and he handled it well. Can't wait to read about VJ again

Aw that ending was so perfect Danni, it was beautiful!! I'm glad that things seem to be ok with Ava and Angelo now, although I wonder what's going on with Ruby... and also with Morag and Angelo, although I suppose it really doesn't matter cos at least they actually seem to be able to have a conversation, I hope thag means that Morag has realised that Angelo isn't going to hurt Charlie again. I loved all of the changelo moments throughout that, they were lovely and I'm glad that Angelo told Charlie about Shelly straight away, and at least she understood, cos no doubt Shelly will have her own version. And the kids were super cute as usual! Beautiful update

Aw that was brilliant, I love how Angelo is trying so hard to protect Charlie and Morag is right, that is a good thing that has come out of all of this. I love how she just melts into his arms, and he makes her feel safe and protected. I loved Irene's bit about the woman at the paint shop, I could just hear her saying that in my head, typical Irene, she knows how to handle Colleen well! It's nice to see Ruby spending some time with her friends, I'm sure they'll all start getting really confused as to why she keeps calling "her dad" Ross. I wonder if they'll ask her about it...hmm. Great update!!

Aw it's cool the way Roman and Angelo are getting on well, long may it continue! And then everything's ok between Charlie and Leah and now Ruby and Xavier are really happy so it's all good!! I liked the wee chat that Roman and Angelo had, it's funny how it started out as a simple question and one word answer and then they're shouting at the tv a while later! I love that Angelo came to see Charlie before he came to work, I'm really looking forward to seeing how their relationship develops, and I love how she knows when he's keeping something from her. Loving this!!

Well I thought it was great!! I loved the start, the lovely wee moment with Charlie and Angelo when she was sleeping and then Roman and Leah walk in Thought the wee chat with Ruby and Xavier was really nice, I'm glad she didn't just say it without talking to Charlie first, and it's not like he's going to guess. I hope everything will be better between Roman and Angelo, it would make it a lot easier on Charlie. Lovely chapter

Ah, how could I have missed your update??? Wow, that was brilliant!! Colleen is so funny, you write her really well, loved the wee criminal bit I could just imagine her saying that! And Xavier, well he did wing it but it seemed to work ok! It was so funny! I'm sure that wasn't quite what Ruby had been expecting! I loved the wee moment with Ruby and Charlie, it's great that they are going to try and get past this together, and I'm sure Angelo will help them both I love how honest he is with Morag and Ross about his feelings for Charlie, it's quite funny sometimes! I loved the wee chat Charlie and Angelo had, I'm glad he knows she's over Roman. I can't wait to read what happens next with Roman and Leah! Great update!!

Aw, that was lovely. I'm so glad that although things have been a bit strained between Charlie and Ruby that Ruby still opened up to her about how much she misses Xavier, and the stuff about Jay too. I thought it was funny when Jay saw Angelo's badge and it all clicked that he was Ruby's dad I think it would be really interesting if they did the whole dinner thing, I wonder would Charlie interrogate him or would Angelo be the one to do that? And as usual, Ben is beyond cute, and Callum too, you write them so well! Update soon, this Jay thing is so mysterious!

Ooh I wonder what Jay is up to?? I'm glad Morag isn't sick, but I'm still wondering what is happening...something isn't right. I'm glad Charlie and Angelo are going to get their wee night out I'm having a bad feeling about Jay and what he's up to, I'm glad Morag was able to arrange a compromise cos Ruby is getting good at abandoning Callum and it's not fair on them, I'm glad Charlie stood up to her! I hope Morag does give Angelo a chance, and once again, Ben is soooo adorable!!! Love it!

I'm glad you enjoyed my comment Haha Gina sure took Mr Jennings down a peg that's what he gets for keeping them in unnecessarily! I'm glad she's so understanding of it all, but poor Ruby missing so much school. I can't believe Charlie has to ID the men, as if she hasn't been through enough! Poor girl, but I suppose if it helps put them behind bars it's worth it. I love how Angelo is always looking out for her and that wee scene with Ruby was nice, it's good that she's happy for Leah and Roman, I'm looking forward to Charlie and Leah's wee chat about it all. Great work!

Oh yayy, lovely chapter! I loved the wee family moment when they were discussing names, and it was so sweet the way Ava liked High School Musical and Hannah Montana names and Ben likes Charlie, aw he's so adorable!! I loved the whole flower thing, it was funny! When Ava is Ruby's age she'll realise how much Ruby wouldn't have wanted her hanging around with her and Jay. I'm glad that it didn't turn into an argument with changelo, I can't believe they actually managed to settle it but it is a good thing! I wonder what's happening with Jay I hope he isn't going to hurt Ruby, I think she has been through enough without more heartbreak. Update soon!

Hey, sorry I'm only getting a chance to read and comment now, but I was away this weekend and then I had school and then a parent's evening thing to go to today. But I'm here now!! Chapter 69 - Poor Xavier I hope he gets to see Ruby eventually, and I hope that when he gets the opportunity he actually goes, hopefully Nicole will talk him round. I love Angelo and Ruby's relationship, it's so nice to see. And I can't believe how well Charlie is doing, she has improved so much, I can't believe she's using her crutches and not wearing a brace, go Charlie! Chapter 70 - I love how Romeo and Nicole are getting sick of Xavier's will I won't I attitude towards going to see Ruby. I'm glad Roman and Leah are going to go and see Charlie before their relationship goes any further, it's nice to see that Leah is still thinking of Charlie although she's excited at the prospect of a relationship with Roman. Ah Charlie's going home yayy she's waited for this moment for so long!! I'm so glad those men are in custody, I thought for a minute that he was going to say they had got the wrong people or they had escaped or there wasn't enough evidence or something, so that was a nice surprise! Nice wee changelo moment too I can't believe Roman and Leah were outside the hospital, what a thing for Charlie to see when emotionally she's been up and down and had a really hard time. Chapter 71 - I love how Ross calls Angelo my boy poor Angelo feeling like he should have been the one to arrest him, but if he hadn't spent all that time at the hospital then maybe he wouldn't have plucked up the courage to tell Charlie he loved her, and then they wouldn't be where they are now. I wonder if Irene has figured out where they were, or more to the point what they were doing... I think so! Great updates as usual!

Yayy that was a beautiful finish to that chapter, I'm so glad they were able to talk things through, and I really hope the baby is a daddy's girl, cos I could just see Angelo doting over her, now he just has to come up with some names! And Charlie calling him a child .And I'm, wondering if Ruby should be concerned, I think she should be...but maybe he's ok, I'm quite intruiged as to what is going on with him! I suppose Ruby got annoyed with Charlie cos she thought Charlie was trying to find fault with him, she's just trying to be a caring mum. I can't wait for more! I love this so much, thankyou!

Aw a baby girl, so cute! I wish Angelo was a bit more excited about it, if he feels he never had a proper father/daughter bond with Ava or Ruby then maybe this is his chance for a close relationship with his daughter. I'm really wondering what Jay is up to, but Charlie noticed it and she's smart so maybe she'll say something to Ruby who'll remember about that time on the beach....and they'll figure something out, I hope he doesn't hurt Ruby And aww Callum crawling, he has got to be the cutest wee boy ever! He's so adorable. Angelo could treat him like a second son and bring him along on the fishing trips in few years! I hope Charlie and Angelo sort this baby stuff out soon before it arrives. Great update, I loved it!