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I loved Ross' comparison between Ruby and Charlie, and I'm glad she took it well Operation was a success! Can't wait for part 2 You are a legend Cally - Sam!

I love hwo Ruby worries over Charlie, it's so sweet and how they used to be Hopefully they can get closer than they ever could as sisters. Good chapter, cant wait to see how the op went, - Sam!

That last line was so sweet, it brought the biggest grin onto my face And you wrote the experience of being in shock perfectly, I know because I had a huge accident and the shock of it consumed me a day later and it was very similar to how you described it, so well done on that, it was spot on. - Sam!

This Jay has me intrigued, he seems way too laid back and I dont think I fully trust him yet Ruby the supernanny there with the naughty step! Brought forth a little grin Amazeballs - Sam!

Aww They are getting back to how they used to be! I love Charlie and Ruby's relationship in this fic, - Sam!

N'awww that chapter was so cute! Using Charlie Love to tell her mum that she loves her, it made me feel warm and fuzzy Poor Morag's feeling the pressure, Angelo was a sweetheart to offer his comfort 5 year old Ruby was amazing, and written very well, I just loved this chapter all in all Cally, Can't wait for the next one, - Sam!

In trouble with neighbours and police? What did she do? Ruby really seems to be struggling, I just wish she'd say all this to Charlie Good stuff, - Sam!

I love hearing little memories like that, it was sad though I feel so bad for Charlie, I just hope Ruby can work through her issues and learn to love Charlie as a mother. Beautifully written as always - Sam!

Aww Ruby's little hug was cute I hope Rubes can start to move on soon :/ I still think Angelo is a sleaze bag - Sam!

Let's just hope Ruby's not pregnant too! Great update, - Sam!

Aww poor Rubes :/ I'm glad Ross said what he did, it was really sweet Marvelous stuff, keep it coming - Sam!

Roman is a moron Poor Angelo, he's done nothing but help and is rewarded with a punch Wonder what's going on in Ruby's head now, and how all this must be affecting Charlie Can't wait for more, - Sam!

The description of an embrace was perfect, and you get better as the chapters go by! It gives me chills every time somebody says 'I'll be with you until the end' and it's used in the perfect places at the perfect time It was sad to see Charlie's uncertainty when it came to Ruby helping her back into bed, but I'm glad that was resolved I enjoyed this chapter immensly and as always, look forward to next time - Sam!

Aww I loved this chapter, the determination Charlie had at the end was beautiful. I'm glad they hugged, it shows that they can move forward. Very well written, I liked the little "She felt her nose tingle and her eyes fill up with tears" you could almost feel the same thing I love the way you're going with this and look forward to another chapter - Sam!

Poor Ross :/ you can see just how much he regrets the decision all those years back, at least Morag is good enough to understand, help out and not judge.. she is a legend after all Angelo is so sweet, he's so respectful towards Ross and really seems to care about Charlie and Ruby, I can't wait to find out what's happening with Mother & Daughter behind closed doors, hopefully they will take the big first step towards bridging the gap! Amazing chapter, I love these character seperation chapters and even the thoughts and feelings chapter a few back, its bringing a whole new perspective and I feel like I'm in the story because of it I love how you write this and it is hands down one of my favourites, I look forward to your next update Cally, - Sam!

It's good that they can start to talk, it's a shame it took the brain power of a little girl to get there! Lol, Poor Ben Good stuff, - Sam!

I'm glad he's trying, but Nicole is right, he needs to sort everything else out too, Good stuff - Sam!

I completely agree 100% with what Lauren says, especially with the therapy thing, I hadn't even though about that! Hopefully this new storyline will remind people that last years storyline did actually happen - Sam!

Gardy Shocking stuff! - Sam!

Wow this chapter was amazing! The slow motion part was written perfectly, I literally saw the events happening in slow motion This was super emotional and im left wondering how Ruby is going to feel now that she has her real birth certificate.. Fantastic as always Cally, - Sam!

Now I need to know what Ruby is thinking, it's killing me! Angelo was cute with the donuts I hope they get stuff sorted in their chat and that Charlie is ok, blacking out cant be good! Awesome as always, - Sam!

Another fantastic chapter, I'm so on edge, I need to know Ruby's reaction! I'm dying here lol! Oh and she knows that Charlie has the birth certificate, that could be interesting Literally can't wait for the next update, - Sam!

Curious as to who it is Poor Rubes, I love the motherly instinct kicking in when Charlie had a go at Aden Aden was a bit harsh though! Can't wait for more - Sam!

Oh I can't wait to read Ruby's reaction to Charlie's diary entries from way back when! The birth certificate in the pillow case is cute, I wonder if she'll show it to Ruby? Morag was a sweet heart once again, and even shed a tear! I love the random things that Marilyn comes out with, she's such a jolly person Love this fic, I look forward to the next chapter - Sam!

Woah didn't see that coming, but I'm glad she found the birth certificate, maybe Ruby will feel better after seeing it and after reading the journals. Bless Morag for doing that! She can be so sweet sometimes The thoughts and feeling were brilliant and very well written, it's a good way to keep what they're feeling fresh in our memories. Another amazing chapter Cally, can't wait for more - Sam!