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Brax is seriously getting on my nerves! So glad you're back posting.

I'm so hooked on this story, I even had a dream about my favourite fan fic family last night. Just shows how good this story is. I feel a little deja vu with the drugs in the house, Brax letting his mate stay even thought Charlie doesn't want to. Love that Brax wants to see the good in people but there has to be boundaries.

Glad they were still able to have their happy moments even with the looming danger. Shame it was shortlived.

I take it that's Ryan's daughter looking at the house? Nice twist, wondering how it fits in with everything else that's going on.

I loved how the puppies the girls were interested in reflects their personality. I just noticed that Charlie never has to scold Paige with her middle name only Riley Mae. Girl gets into a lot of trouble, doesn't she? I love the little family you've created. Can't wait for more.'

Gee, Charlie's quite the accomplished woman, isn't she? That was some stunt she pulled there. Didn't think they taught that in the police academy. Brilliantly hilarious as always...

Oh the nerve of Ryan thinking he still has a chance with Charlie after trying to rape her! Can't wait for him to get his comeuppance.

Is Ruby getting a little pregnant? Sounds like it. Fan fic kids are always just too adorable. Loved mother and daughter time with Paige. Glad Charlie has some sort of distraction from her mind with her babies.

I'm a little disappointed that they didn't end up together but if you think about it, it sort of fits with the characters. Neither of the boys were ready to take the plunge. April seemed like more of a best friend to me though. I loved Dex and Casey's little acknowledgement of each other at the end. They went their seperate ways but its like the one passionate heart breaking affair they'll always remember when they look back on their lives in 50 years. You're an amazing writer Jen. Loved this story. You have a really distinctive style.

Oh no, I can't believe Xavier died! So out of the blue but so sad.

It's really fitting that Casey sort of got a do over to stand up for Dex the second time around. Loved the little role reversal there between the two at the end. Brilliant as always.

The girl in the dragon tattoo. Amazing!

Thought it was really beautiful the way Ross said Elise was waiting for him. Heartbreaking chapter.

I can't believe I used to actually like Ryan back in the day! That jerk! Poor Charlie, she was just in a good place again fo rthe first time in ages and she has to get attacked. More heartbreak for Charlie.

Charlie creating an alter ego called Esther who's a modelling actress with dreams of starring in a soap? That scene in the hotel room was wrong in so many ways but utterly hilarious as usual. Can't wait for more.

Aww, Captain Jack the second. Glad it looks like Ash is warming up to Bianca. The kids were adorable in that chapter but then again they always are!

Those Rebecca Breeds ones were so vibrant and flirty and attention grabbing. They practically pop out of my screen. Great work.

Charlie and Brax just have problems snowballing one after the other, don't they? Hopefully things will slow down and get a little more relaxed in that household one of these years!

Great chapter, so glad the kids took the news well. I bet Charlie wishes Ruby was there to see her engaged. hopefully they won't be waiting too long. I love that you put a link to the ring. I love visual aids when I'm reading and writing. It's so much better to read when you can picture it too. The ring is gorgeous.

Oh dear, those girls might as well be running a day care centre. If I had to play favourite, which I am, my heart goes to Bella. She's just too adorable. More Italian than Aussie. So this means Liam's the baby daddy right? And Ash is half an orphan is he? Looking forward to seeing how Bianca fits into the stepmother role. Why is it that every one but Brax is running off to the jewellery store? He needs to stop giving advice on marriage and get up off his butt and move it. He's all talk and no action. At this rate, the twins will be married before their parents!

Glad everything's coming together again. I thougth heath could've handled that better; surely they could work it out without an all or nothing ultimatum. I'm looking forward to a Charlie and Ruby reunion. And meeting the twins.

Now i really want to know who Bianca's new man is. And is there a sick boy too? Maybe a little son? You've got me intrigued. And I absolutely love that Bella refuses to speak in English. it's too cute.

I love that Riley's such a little tomboy hating all the girly stuff. Had a feeling it would be Ruby and Xav, guess he must've finally popped the question.

Grr at Grant, exploiting Ruby like that! I have a feeling Heath's going to be a little upset when/if he finds out about the baby. Can't wait to see what happens in 5 years. This is a very interesting take.

Really hope Brax realises how much he's already got and appreciate it. It seems nothing ever goes right for Charlie and Brax in this fic but here's to hoping they can move past this. I'm also so relieved that Brax isn't the dad but I wonder if Bella's ever going to find out who the father is or if Bianca will remember?