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Great two updates, Hope Brax manages to sober Liam up and that Liam will tell the police that he put Ryan in hospital, not Brax!! Aww they're getting a lab !! they're the best kind of dog. I have a black lab called Chad and he is the cutest thing ever !! More soon please

Great update, Like redranger I did wonder how Charlie and Brax would react for finding out that Brax is being investigated for something Liam did. I thought Brax might be angry, but he didn't seem to be !! Oh oh worried by the ending !! More soon please

Great update, More soon please

Amazing update, Can understand his initial anger, but so glad that she persisted and explained everything, and they were so close to connecting like they used to !! I find myself wanting to hate Ella, but you have written her as such a nice person that I can't !! As always, more REALLY soon please !!!

Great update, Actually feel sorry for Watson - she has to do her job by the law, regardless of any friendships she has with Charlies family. It's not her fault that it wasn't too convenient for them. Assuming that Brax being pulled down to the station has something to do with Ryan !! Ruby and xave were too cute together in that update !! More soon please

Great update at the ending!!!! More soon please

Great update, Glad they finally got some alone time !! Hehe loved the grandpa line !! More soon please

Great update, Basically just grrrr Ryan !!! More soon please

Amazing update, Haha the twins were so cute playing favourites !! So cute that rubes bought them the house !! !! Ryan!! I know Charlies scared of him, but realistically with her police training she should be able to take him down if needed!! Hope bee gets help if she can't though!! More soon please

Great update, Totally love the way you write Charlie and biancas friendship, it's jut too funny !! Loved the random heart to heart between Brax and ruby !! More soon please

Great update, Yay ruby bought them the house !! Very aware of the whole court case looming Over them !! More soon please

Amazing update, The house sounds amazing - I want it !! Thinking by the end that using all her money from being in the band that Ruby might buy the house for them !! More soon please

Two massively massively awesome updates !! Wow at the way the truth about Elsie and Ross came out !! Casey and Ruby are too cute around each other !! OMFG AT THE ENDING !!!!!!!!!! MORE REALLY REALLY SOON PLEASE !!!

Great update, I too think that teagan will end up bonding with her baby after it's born, can totally see complications occurring in the future !! Had to laugh at rubys all in good time line about making Charlie a grandma !! Cute that her and Kyle are going to live together !! More soon please

Amazing update !!!! More really soon please !!!!!

Great update, Feel kinda sorry for teagan and the situation that she's in , but at the end of the day she put herself in that position by asking Brax and Charlie to raise her baby!! Aww they're having a boy !!! Haha had to laugh at charlie having to quit working at the diner because of how bad her cooking skills are !! More soon please

Argh my computer kept on saying there was something wrong with the iPS address or something everytime I tried to log on so I missed a bunch if awesome updates !!! Yay Ruby is pregnant !! Aww the end of the last update was well cute !!! More soon please

Ok I swear you are actually a mind reader, coz I was just scrolling through all the fan fics whilst listening to innocent by Taylor swift, and I'm not even kidding as the lines: lost your balance on a tightrope, and lost your mind trying to get it back, were being sung, I saw Your 2 fics, with those two lines as titles!!!! Now if that's not a sign, then I don't know what is, so I decided to read this . and.......... Pretty much the only adequate way of describing this is - WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Amazing writing !!!!!!

Great update, So glad that Charlie told the police what happened, and that John will act as a witness if necessary !! Loved how you referenced to the fact that despite the fact that their twins, Paige is a mini-Charlie and Riley is a mini-Brax !!! Riley and paige were both so damn adorable in their own idividual ways in that update !!! Definitely thinking that ruby's pregnant !! I was kinda surprised that neither of them thought that her being sick could be an indicator of ruby being pregnant, especially seeing as I thought they were supposed to be trying for a baby. More soon please

Amazing update as always !! The whole hospital scene was just heart breaking !!! Even though Heath us still angry, hopefully Bianca has calmed him down a bit!! Glad that Charlie told ruby the truth !! And rubys right - she's gonna have to tell them soon especially now that they're mother and daughter rather than sisters!! Sounds like from the end that they might bump into each other on their run !! and if not summer bays so small they'll have to see each other again at some point!! More soon please !!

Great update, Wow was not expecting Ryan to show up again !!! Thank goodness that John was there!! Glad at least that Charlie has decided to go to the police !! The house they're looking at sounds way awesome !! More soon please

Omg that was so unbelivably amazing !!! I'm glad that both Martha and Leah managed to make jack and miles see that there was a far greater reason for her disappearance than meets the eye!!!! Loved that ruby was saved by Casey !! I love that you had Casey as confused when he didn't hear elsies voice when he phoned the mum contact on rubys phone !!!! OMFG at the ending !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon, I'm actually like addicted to this story and am already craving my next fix !!!

Great update, Awwwwwww Jacob is the cutest thing ever !!!! And the fact that Brax would go to jail if it meant that Ryan would get punished for what he did, shows how much he loves charlie !!! Loved everything about that update !!! More soon please

Great update, Ruby and Charlie interactions were cute in that chapter !! I loved the awkwardness of jack and Charlie being partners, suppose without jack knowing why she left, I can kinda understand his reaction, but still - poor Charlie !! Miles was pretty awesome in that update too . I feel like he will probably take Charlie and ruby being back in the bay better than jack did, but I could be wrong. It must have been so weird for ruby and Casey to meet up, after how young they were when they used to be friends!!! More really soon please !!!!

Great update, Feel so sorry for Charlie being so afraid !! Wow Ryan might be bellas dad !!! More soon please