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Great Update. I am glad the twins are doing well. I thought Jacob might get jealous. As much as I love Brax I find him to be a little bit arrogant and selfish in this story, even a little childish I felt like he was throwing a tantrum about Charlie trying to help him he is a first time parent she is not. Get over it Brax. Can't wait for more I absolutely love this story

Another Great Chapter. I really enjoy the Charlie and Lily relationship. I hope Brax and Charlie can work things out and stay together this time. Charlie should tell Brax the truth about where she is going it will only cause trouble. Can't wait for more Update Soon Please

All I can say about that chapter is WOW Absolutely loved it

How cute little Aria was when she found out about the puppy Poor Charlie begin jealous because Aria thinks Brax is getting the puppy but really funny too Can't wait to see how Aria goes with the puppy

Another fantastic update I was a little surprised at Charlie opening up to Tegan like that I really hope that Tegan tells Charlie the truth about the kiss. Glad that Lily is okay and I hope Charlie gets to return her to Brax soon. Can't wait for more Update Soon Please

Another great chapter. Poor Charlie thinking that Brax was going to propose, but how sweet that he wants to adopt Jacob How funny Charlie wearing Brax's pjs I used to do that to my hubby when I was pregnant Can't wait to see what happens next and what Charlie decides

I hope Tegan being pregnant doesn't get in between Charlie and Brax Poor Olivia having to have her needles Can't wait for more I really like this story

What a nice update seeing the softer side of Brax how cute I hope Baby A is okay I hope Ruby does well with her singing. Can't wait for more great story so far

Great Update Really funny I couldn't stop laughing at Aria using the display toilet. I wonder what the shop assistant will have to say. Can't wait to find out

I was so excited for this story. I am glad you didn't make us wait First chapter was fantastic I loved it. Can't wait for more

Wow What a last chapter I can definitely say I have absolutely loved this story I didn't want it to end. You are one very talented writer. I really,really would love to see a sequel and most definitely would read it. I hope to see more stories from you soon

Another fantastic update I loved Jacob giving Brax a chance and warming to him. I don't want this story to end Is there going to be a sequel?

OMG it really was Casey who raped Ruby Can't wait to see what happens next. Great writing as always

Toddlers they can be such a handful at times. What a cheeky little bugger. I have kids and they complained about monsters so we used to use fly spray or some sort of spray and call it monster spray, maybe that would help Aria with the monsters Really enjoying this story. Please Update soon

I always love reading this story you are a great writer. The way you have written about Ruby being raped is truly amazing. I am loving Brax and Charlie back together I am sure Brax and Jacob will start getting along soon. Can't wait to read more. Looking forward to the next update

Fantastic Update Another cliffhanger I am not going to be able to stop thinking about this now. I hope you update really soon the suspense will drive me nuts. I hope Lily will be okay and Charlie will find them safe and sound and then return Lily to Brax. I also hope that if Charlie finds them Tegan will tell her the truth about the kiss.

Another great update. You never fail to write well. I am loving Brax and Charlie getting back together, I hope the stay together this time I also like that Brax says he has to win Jacob over as well that is really sweet I can't wait to read more Please Update Soon

Great update I was only joking about a hint I seem to be with the majority I hope she is going to see Brax too. Ruby was very sweet to Charlie in this chapter Looking forward to more

I loved that chapter it was light hearted and really funny. I can't wait to read more

I feel sorry for Brax a little in the last few chapters. I loved the interaction between Charlie and Lily in this chapter. Oh No I hope they find Lily and Tegan before something happens to Lily Charlie will help find Lily I hope. Great Writing you always seem to make me feel the emotions of the characters. Please Update Soon

I am still not sure who I believe Casey or Ruby??? I am with totally please give us a hint the suspense on this one is driving me crazy Naughty Jacob Please Please Update really soon.

Wow. I can't decide who I believe because I couldn't see either of them lying Poor Brax I think Charlie should ask Ruby how she feels about her seeing Brax. Can't wait for more please update soon

Great Update! I think that Jacob is being a little bit of a spoilt brat screaming and getting his way over the teddy, especially since it was Xavier's from when he was a little boy. I agreed with Ruby. I wonder whether Charlie will give Brax another chance or not??? Can't wait to see what happens next???

I can't stand that skank Tegan I hope Brax doesn't betray Charlie again I don't think so but I think Tegan will try and make it look like he has. If Brax does there is no way Charlie will or should forgive him again. I also can't wait to see what is coming up in the next couple of chapters Please Update really soon.

Finally great to see she is a normal kid and is naughty and defiant sometimes ( terrible twos's) I can't believe Brax fell asleep while taking care of Aria he should be cleaning up the mess. I agree with helen 2289 I want to see Heath and Valen time too. Great Update really enjoyed this chapter Update soon Please