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Great Update I don't think Charlie is being fair asking him to give up the river boys they are like his family, what would she say if he asked her to give up Leah and Bianca. Even though I want Brax and Charlie together I couldn't help but like Ryan in this chapter his advice was fantastic. Can't wait to see what is next

Charlie's strength and generosity in this chapter was just wow I don't think I could do it either . I find myself a little conflicted with this story on one hand I want Tegan to get better and be a mum for Lily and on the other I feel like I want to Tegan to leave and let Brax and Charlie raise Lily. Can't wait to see where you take this story

Another great update you never fail to write well I hope Charlie gives Brax a chance. I also hope Jacob warms to him, I want to see some nice interactions between them. I really loved how Charlie took Ruby getting engaged it was really nice to see Can't wait for more

Fantastic Story!!! I absolutely loved it. The ending was great. I can't wait to see what stories you come up with next. You're a great writer

I am the same as everyone else I thought she was going to see Brax I was actually really shocked when she went to Ryan's. I wonder where you will go next with this story it's great can't wait for more.

How funny Charlie and Bianca going to cooking classes, should be hilarious. Can't wait to see. Great Update

Great Chapter. How good of Gina to give Casey the chance at the school. I suspect the end is near for this story. I wonder what will happen next

Great Update! I am glad Brax is finally growing up by the sounds of it. I hope Charlie turns up too. Can't wait to see where you go with this story next it's great

What a really loving chapter. I loved the Morag, Aria and Charlie part with the chocolate cake it was nice to see the softer side of Morag Can't wait to read what happens next

I felt a little bit sorry for Tegan in this update. I hope she makes the effort to get better and bond with Lily. I also liked Charlie and how caring she was toward Tegan after everything that has happened. Can't wait for more

I liked that we got to see a little bit of a softer side to Charlie at the graveyard. I hope she lets her guard down a bit with Brax. Really enjoyed that chapter can't wait for the next

I love them being a loving family it is great I wish Charlie wasn't so uptight and worrying all the time Looking forward to more

I like that Brax is back. I think he has a lot of making up to do to get Charlie back though. I still want Brax to meet Jacob so that Charlie can see that he could make a great Dad to Jacob. I like that Bianca was sticking up for Charlie but her advice was a little off I think. I am Team Brax at the moment I love your writing and I can't wait for more

I will be sad to see this story end I have really enjoyed reading it. I wonder who Brax's love interest will be I really liked Casey and Mel in this chapter Can't wait for more

Soo cute Loved Aria in this chapter. What a beautiful family Can't wait to read more

Great Chapter love the interaction between Charlie and Ruby and Charlie and Jacob I hope Brax is out I so want to see him and Jacob playing and having fun together but I am not sure Charlie will allow it. Can't wait for more please, please update soon

I like the update but I am with the others I can't warm to Ryan I want Brax to come back I would also like to see Brax and Jacob have some time together I think it would be sweet. However I am really enjoying your story can't wait to read more

Really sweet update between Charlie and her daughters It will be great to see them as a family in Vanuatu. I also hope we get to Heath and Valen interaction in this story. I want to see him as a dad. Can't wait for more

How sweet Mel saying Thank you to Casey. Poor Heath he doesn't know how to deal with his grief. I am enjoying this story I hope Charlie and Ruby are in it more soon

I can't believe Tegan she is such a tart. She should just get on with her life and let Brax and Charlie take care of Lily. I am glad Lily is okay. Can't wait to read more Great Update

Loved this update. Oh no Don't make Tegan pregnant The last two sentences were fantastic. I can't believe Charlie asked if it was too soon I was so excited to see this story was updated can't wait to read more

Another fantastic chapter. I love that Casey was sticking up for Mel, it was really sweet. Is the part about Brax and Charlie the beginning of them seeing each other in a different way, maybe a more romantic way. I love your stories they are great, you're a great writer.

I hope Ruby and Charlie sort things out and compromise with each other. I am still waiting for Brax to reappear in this story, will be interesting to see when he does. Great Update, will definitely be waiting for the next one

Another great chapter. I hope Lily is going to be ok I can't wait for more.

I absolutely love this story I can't wait for another update to see if Brax does actually break up with Tegan, I hope he does. I love the interaction between Olivia and Brax it is lovely I hope you can update soon