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Great Chapter but I was hoping Brax was going to be there somewhere oh well I am sure he will show up sooner or later. I really enjoy reading this story can't wait for more

The part between Charlie, Brax and Lily was beautifu I loved it. Oh no I hope something doesn't happen to Lily Can't Wait for more

Oh poor Charlie I felt so sorry for her she did a great job delivering the baby, but it would be so hard so watch the man you're in love with like that with another woman and their child without it being the woman he had an affair with. I am not sure Charlie and Brax's relationship will survive this. Not sure at all that Charlie will be able to cope with the baby now it is here. I hope she does and they don't break up again. Can't wait for the next update. Great Writing

This was a fantastic fan fiction that I have thoroughly enjoyed from start to finish. I will miss getting to read this story but the ending was great. I hope you continue writing. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Great Chapter. I hope Brax and Heath do a deal and don't go to jail. It was really great to see heath stand by his brother like that I am glad that Charlie got Jacob back. I love how Ruby wasn't aloud to use the phone. I am also enjoying Morag in this story she is great. Can't wait to read more

Great Ending. Brax and Charlie getting married and the Braxtons back together. I loved the Blood and Sand at the end. I hope you write another story this one was great can't wait to see

I love the relationship that Charlie and Ruby have got now in this story, it is really lovely. Poor Charlie having to choose between her child and the man she is in love with. Of course she will choose her son but what a horrible place to be put in, it would be heart breaking I can't wait for the next chapter really enjoying this story

That was a sweet chapter the way the girls all bonded over their grief. I can't wait for more, the chapter always seems to end just as you get right into it Great Writing

Lovely interaction between Charlie and Jacob. Poor Nicole I actually felt really sorry for her I hope Charlie gets Jacob back really soon. Great Writing

OMG that last paragraph was so beautifully written. Poor Danielle . I wonder what will happen next Great Writing

I love the mother daughter chat it was from the heart and beautiful. I hope Ruby chooses Casey and Charlie gets back with Brax and they get Jacob back Can't wait to read more

I think maybe it is Brax who gets shot but he won't die. Great Chapter I wasn't so sure I liked this story with Angelo in it. But the more I read now the more I want to read. It has turned into a story I love now and have to come back and read. Great writing. Can't wait to see who got shot

That is so sad Poor Ellie. Interesting update not expected at all. I will definitely have to continue to read to see what happens next.

Great Chapter!! You always seem to find a way to leave us wanting to read more. Great Writing. I hope Casey and Ruby will be okay.

I loved how Charlie realised she could be there for Brax regardless of the situation, that is true love Great Update I am still not sure everything will be ok with the baby will have to see?? Looking forward to the next chapter

Oh No I hope at least Heath makes it to meet his sister before she passes away.

That was so sad. Fantastic writing. I almost wish this was the start of a story and you were going to continue with it too

Oh my God he called social services. Great chapter but we all know what this means for Brax and Charlie. Poor Charlie losing Jacob. I agree with Sazzle I hope Brax or Ruby gives Angelo a smack in the head he deserves it, he wasn't worried about the baby he was only thinking of himself. I hope Charlie gets Jacob back really soon. Great Writing

Wow I hope Brax does break up with Tegan and goes back to Charlie. I want to read more now I can't wait for next update

Great Chapter!! I hope Brax doesn't go to jail. I want Angelo to go away already he is really annoying me at the moment. Can't wait for another update.

I love this story I was excited when I saw that you had updated it and I hope you are feeling better. I can't wait for more. I loved the chat between Brax and Charlie and I can't wait to see what her response will be. I also enjoy the interactions between Olivia and Brax and also Olivia and Ruby it's great.

Great Chapter I can't wait for another update

I really like Charlie and Brax in this story. I don't want Charlie to find out the truth even though I know she is going to. I like happy Charlie and Brax. Can't wait to read more

That Chapter was great. Can't wait for the next

I love this story. I hope Charlie doesn't get back with Joey. I can't wait for the next update