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Loving this so much! Loving having some happy Chax and that they are having good hanging out time!! Glad that Ruby and Xavier made up...he still iritates me but glad that they sorted things out... Each update contains loads and always enjoyable. Really well done and thanks for continuous updates

Beautiful last couple of updates! Really loving the Chax happy time and the family time is brilliant! Really looking forward to more and hoping that Charlie and Brax get to go away... Your writing is fabulous as always! Really well done! Thank you!

Gorgeous update! So happy the kids were returned home and liked their reactions...really great writing and loved Brax and Charlie having to work to get Riley to understand. Bless all the kids...loved them all coming into the room at the end. Bless Chax! Love it! Know we've still got the court case to get through with Brax and it being on Charlies birthday but really hoping that Ryan gets done for all his nastiness and Chax family can have their holiday and proposal... Really great chapter! Thanks so much!!

Amazing update! Really beautiful writing! Loved Chax being honest with one another and Brax being strong enough to not have the drink. Really great chapter and loved Charlie looking after him... Hate Lara...what a mean harsh woman. Please have the kids returned soon! Heart breaking for Chax...gorgeous writing but looking forward to their return Thanks!

Brilliant update once again! Loved vulnerable sad Brax and him getting their toys out Bless him and Charlie...they are being so supportive of one another.. Really great interaction and chat! Glad Charlie and Bianca made up...and loved that Bianca gave update of how the kids are. Really hope their visit goes well and they are reunited soon. Hating Georgia! She is seriously rude to Brax! Glad she seems to believe him about the assault but he is broken hearted too..little bit of power has certainly gone straight to her head. Excited for more! Thanks

Fabulous 2 updates Danni! Great interaction between Charlie and Brax and glad that they are supporting one another. Was sovglad they got to see Paige and hoping the kids are returned home soon. Really lovely how you set the scenes and felt the vulnerability and love between characters. Finally Liam has gone to the station...he seriously needs to sort it out... Loving the story! Thanks for continued updates Looking forward to more as always. Thanks

Great last few updates! Can not stand Liam but was so glad Brax kept control as does not need any more run ins with cops before his court date. Ryan is complete scum bag saying it was Brax who hit him! SO glad that Charlie and Brax are supporting eachother and not pushing away. Really heart breaking with the kids being taken... literally wanted to punch the docs lady but glad they're at least with Irene. Proper scary about Paige and looking forward to Chax being able to see her. Hope that they are reunited with kiddies soon! Loving this! Sorry didn't comment individually on last few updates but mental week at work and just checking in. Thanks again!

Liam is being a complete tool! Appreciate he's a little upset right now but needs to get a grip and its Bianca who is dealing really well with the news and looking after the kids. Watson as well! What a miserable woman! Getting all 'sergeant watson' and not Georgina... Power trip or what! Loved Chax and the feather boa and their little chat. Always enjoy each update. Thanks

Gorgeous update and enjoyed Charlie assisting Bianca! Was not expecting her delivering baby at all. Great emotion shown and glad that Brax is mindful of Charlie. Really excited for more when you are able and hopeful for more Chax talk. Hope your Mum gets well soon and family life settles for you. Thanks!

Really lovely update! Enjoyed Brax hanging out with Paige and really liked Charlie organising their play date together. Liam needs to sort it out! Brax and Charlie have become so solid and want their happy family time to continue... Interested to see what is coming next! Thanks

Great update... Sad that it was confirmed he fathered Bella but at least Bianca now has the information and she has Bella. Liam needs a kick up the butt pretty quickly. I'm surprised how well Charlie and Brax are taking it with him not bothered at all about potentially splitting up their family for what he did to Ryan. Interested to see how Ryan is and whether he will remember anything... Anxious time for Chax but glad they are coming closer together and not freaking out and being harsh or pushing away. Fab as always - Thank you!

Amazing writing!! This story continues to include so much description, love and great interaction and conversation. Loads still going on.... Didn't like Emma seeing the house...what is that about? Maybe just a coincidence or maybe she is as twisted as her father?? Hope she doesn't cause too much upset to Chax and the kids. Brax wanting Paige to want to hang out with him was so cute! You write the kids so well and adore the story! Thank you! Looking forward to more...thanks

Each update is always top standard! Really felt for Chax both obviously thinking about Ryan but trying to keep him out of their thoughts. Liked Bianca sticking up for Brax and wanting Liam to go to the cops... Can't stand Ryan but want him to do jail time and not die please... Liam would do serious time for that... Brilliant interaction and convo as always! Continue to love this story! Thanks

As ever...a great update! Bianca sure isn't happy at Liam but can understand what he has done. Hoping this doesn't end Liam locked up and also hoping that Watson can realise Brax has nothing to do with it. Charlie and Brax...totally love them and nice hang out time with the kids... Please enable happy Chax ahead...he can't be locked up please! Thanks as always!

Thought that Tegan would change her mind and want to keep the baby and can totally understand that although she will have to allow Brax and Charlie to be a part of the babies life. I think if she is changing her mind as she now wants to be a mother than that is fair enough and good but if it is to spite Charlie then it will end in tears! Great writing and very interested to see how story develops and how both Charlie and Brax react when they find out. Looking forward to more, thanks

This is a beautiful update! Bless Charlie and Brax and how they have wanted the other to always think good of them and been fearful of anything different. Loved his reaction and how he seemed to not know what to do and how to handle it but so glad they were at least able to speak a little and begin to listen to eachother. Gutted for Brax as he realised the friendship he has had with Grant when he has been the cause of their separation and pain. Really wanted the conversation to continue and sad that Ella turned up!! I know she is obviously with Brax now and does seem lovely and all that but I hope that we don't have to get to know her too well I mean...Brax was still thinking of Charlie long before she actually returned so it seems he has not been able to fully give himself to anyone else. Eager for more as soon as you're able!! Amazing writing and natural expressions of feelings! Thanks!!

Great last 2 updates! Watson is on a proper power trip and was so rude to Charlie and Brax. Brax has not done anything criminal for years and bashing Ryan was only following him trying to assault Charlie so clearly he should not be punished for this. Good on Liam...Bianca will be gutted that he has taken it into his own hands and the possible repurcussions however remembering that must be awful and again Liam has acted out of love and trying to protect and defend the ones he loves! Hope Brax doesn't go down for it and Liam gets good defence too. Love Brax and Charlie and them looking out for eachother. Really well written and excited for more! Thank you again!

Really loved this update and the happy, fun Chax conversation and interaction... Very nice Can see Xavier being over protective of Ruby but understandable I guess with her going away. Liked Brax getting stictched up by Charlie and having to make pancakes for everyone... Really nice writing! Looking forward to more. Thank you!

I LOVE this story!! Each update I am hooked and so excited for the next. I review on fanfic already however this is brilliant so you get one here too. Amazing story and writing! I love how its developed and how you write the characters reactions and interaction. It is very real and full of emotions... Very excited for more... Please update soon! Thanks SO much for sharing!

Ryan is actually mental!! He is a complete scum bag and can't believe he is still trying it on with Charlie and going on about her dropping charges but him wanting Brax to go to jail!! Ryan has lost the plot! Horrible man! Enjoyed Chax hanging out at end. Great update

I'm so sorry I've not checked in for a while! Updates and story has continued to be outstanding! Loving all the family interaction and Ruby is lovely buying them their dream house. So much coming up.... Trial on Charlies birthday, holiday and potential proposal and cannot believe that scumbag has come back and is at the door!! Really hope that Charlie is ok and that he doesn't harm her and mess too much with her head again! Glad that Bianca is there and hope that her seeing Charlie in that position of fear will get her to do paternity test and prove that Ryan is just awful. Great writing as ever...great conversation and interaction with the kids and great seeing the strength of Chax relationship! Please don't send him to jail!! Hope that you had fab time when your family were over and as always...thanks very much for sharing! Looking forward to more!

Amazing!! Beautifully written and oh my gosh the emotion! Love the conversations with Leah and Miles and Jack and Martha and them each sticking up for their significant friend The Braxtons are so united for eachother and can feel that although they are all feeling different things they are still very close - Fab writing!! Casey with Ruby and the way Charlie turned up at hospital was a brilliant way for them to see eachother! I am desperate for how they react and the conversations....so looking forward to when you are next able to update!! Please soon Love this!! Thanks

Oh my gosh.....Anticipation is crazy!! I'm so excited for Brax and Charlie to meet again!! That was a beautiful amazing update and lovely and long! Thank you!! Loved Casey and Ruby knowing eachother and their brief meeting... Felt bad for Charlie when Jack reacted like that but totally understand him sticking up for Brax. Really looking forward to how this develops and so eager!! Thank you! Very eager for next update!!

Loved Jacob in this and Brax still looking out for her. Really wanting Charlie to report it. Surely the police will understand and Brax won't get put away for it... Love your writing and this story continues to be fab!! Thanks so much for taking time and sharing!! Looking forward to your next update as always and hope you continue to enjoy your family time

Great writing and emotion again. Charlie locking the car door was so vulnerable and Brax is being very gentle which is nice. Did not see Ryan being Bellas dad coming at all. Oh my gosh! Craziness! You continue to surprise and I loved all the conversation especially with the kids and when they were racing.... Enjoy your family time and look forward to updates when you are able. Thanks as always!