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Loved last couple of updates! Brax so cute with Darcy and I'm guessing Caseys fight will lead to him being kicked out... Liked how he stuck up for that girl though even though will land him in trouble. Really fab writing! Thanks for sharing! Looking forward to your next update and any future admiring glances between Chax

Loved update! Hope that Tegan wakes up to herself or at least doesn't let anything serious happen to baby! Love how Charlie has allowed herself to love this little girl and Chax are so cute and seem totally committed...you can really sense the love in your writing. Thanks! Really looking forward to next update

Loving your updates! Brax and Charlie are quality! Love that they're out in the open and Colleen is just funny! Gutted that Tegan is pregnant! Kind of hoping that there is somehow a posibility that she has been a cheater again but not sure...think this will upset Charlie if she thinks she is breaking up the 'family'...hope it doesn't cause too many issues. Thanks for updates! Really love this story

Great updates! Loving this story and thank you for updating so often! Really hoping that Brax is around soon. She is obviously still really cut up about him but being the properly stubborn version of herself. I know Ryan is trying to be 'sweet' and whatever but I found him annoying especially when talking about his travels...urgh... Love the interaction between characters particularly Charlie and Jacob. Really loving your writing and story! I was thinking...lol! ... If you are going to have this Ryan around for a bit and he gets to meet Jacob... - you'd make my day if Jacob didn't get on with him at all but then if Brax pops up Jacob is calmed by him and has good connection... Think this would be cute, haha _ I'm SO eager for Brax...I do hope he pops back up soonish...please... Thanks for your updates! Casey mentioning Brax was nice too...

Thank you for updating again so quickly! Feel spoilt!! Love the awkwardness and the weird blokes!! Could totally sense how much they were freaking her out, lol! Glad that one actually seems decent but think her mind is still occupied with someone else... Can't wait to see how this develops - Still hoping and looking forward to conversation between her and Brax though - hoping for it anyway... Really great, fun chapter! Thanks

I've loved this from chapter 1 with the emotion you portray between Brax and Charlie...Love it! They seem to have both stepped up and Tegan seems very uninterested.... Thanks so much...looking forward to your next update and the bonding time

Great updates! Love how you portray the brothers relationships and characters. Brax is always looking out for him... Fab writing! Thank you for sharing and looking forward to your next update : )

"I hope this next one is okay" - Seriously Danni....your writing is excellent! Loving this story! Obviously I am very much hoping that Brax can get his woman back somehow in the end but I am loving the journey anyhow. Sorry I've not commented on last few chapters! They are fab and thank you for sharing and updating so frequently

Well done with this chapter...really liked Charlie watching little man sleep - Very CUTE!! Like that the boys have got their sentences and it seems they are getting on with it.. Hope that nothing bad happens to them on the 'inside' Hoping for a bit of snitching or something so that Brax can come out early and try and earm his lady back Xav does my head in! - he is SO wet! (In a good way to all you Xavier fans) but I'm hoping Ruby gets over that quickly and either wakes up to Casey or someone new entirely... Thank you for sharing! Especially updating so quickly! Loving the story!! Thanks

Well done! I'm really loving your updates and how the boys are all dealing with their grief in different ways. Writing is great and I like how Brax is trying to deal with life but struggling on... really good tie ins throughout the story! Thank you for sharing! Looking forward to next update!

Really great writing! SO hard on Charlie to witness that but I hope that she carries on the journey and she and Brax can work through it even with it being challenging. You share their interaction and relationship so well and I hope that they can realise how to be together. Looking forward to your next update - Thanks for sharing!!

Thank you so much for sharing this fanfic! Have enjoyed every chapter and the relationships have been great! Really well done! Looking forward to your next story : ) Thanks again!!

Loved your last few updates! Writing has been excellent and the story is brilliant. Really felt for Brax, Charlie and Ruby and SO pleased that baby is back home. Hope that something can work out for Chax and intrigued and excited for your next update!! The conversation and honesty between characters is spot on. Thank you so much for sharing! Really great writing

I really love your fic! Its so honest and real and you share their emotions really well! Thank you for sharing! Glad they are talking to eachother and hope things can go well for the baby. Looking forward to your next update

Really great last few updates! Was surprised that Angelo died but if he didn't involve himself so much and snoop about then he would have been fine. Hope Charlie gets her little man back soon without too much hassle from Nicole - I do feel sad for Nic but she shouldn't put it on Charlie. Really enjoying your writing! Thanks for sharing and looking forward to next update

I've just read your story while enjoying my afternoon off and its wicked - love the story! Loving the characters and their conversations - Really lovely story and great writing! Well done, thank you for sharing and really looking forward to your next update!! Hope that you are feeling ok : )

Really loving this story! Well done...your writing is fab!! Thank you for sharing! Looking forward to more

This is heart breaking but great writing! PLEASE update soon...can't handle baby being away for too long and looking forward to the interaction with Brax. Hope Angelo gets a smack from either Brax or Ruby! What a scumbag!! Really good chapter - looking forward to more

Thank you for sharing this story! The characters and description are really good. Really enjoying each update - well done! Love their directness : )