Jen1205

You can just feel the connection between Charlie and Brax even after all the years apart. Now Brax finally nows the reasons behind her leaving I hope they can leave the past behind and get to know each other again, Ella does seems nice but Chax are meant to be. I think I said this before but I LOVE this story and you are a brilliant writer, Can't wait for the next chapter

Just catching up on the chapters I've missed. So much going on I don't know where to start Can't believe Brax was kept in custody while Ryan was released . I'm so happy Brax was let out in time to view the new house though. I'm loving Chax at the moment, even with everything going on they seem to be closer than ever The twins are the cutest, I love Riley she really is a sweetie, the way she brought in Paiges teddy into Chalies bed was so cute and Ruby is pregnant, aww so happy for her and Xavier. Can't wait for your next update

Wow that was brilliant, I couldn't stop reading, such a gripping chapter seeing the pain all of them are feeling. I'm so relieved Brax has finally let her explain and what a way to end the chapter, I can't wait to see his reaction now he finally knows the truth. Please update soon and Thank you for the extra long chapter, I'm sure it takes alot of time but its really appreciated

That was heartbreaking to read, I hope they can work things out eventually, I can understand why Brax is almost pushing her away now but I wish he would let her explain. Really great chapter and very well written, Please update soon

Wow that was brilliant, the way you built up the tension throughout the chapter was excellent and then when they finally see each other Really can't wait to see the first conversation between the 2 of them, Please update soon

Amazing update, the flashback was devastating, Poor Charlie and Ruby to lose both parents like that Oooh Brax is getting closer to knowing Charlie is back, I cannot wait for that first conversation between them, even though he has a girlfriend I don't think she will be able to keep Chax apart. Really looking forward to your next update

Wow I didn't see that coming, Poor Charlie, I'm so relieved that Brax got there in time to stop Ryan. I hope Charlie lets Brax help her now rather than shut him out.I'm sure this will stir some horrible memorys for both Charlie and Ruby Great chapter Danni and very intense, Can't wait to see what happens next

The twins are so cute, I love Riley she is turning into such a tomboy. Poor Chax having their plans interrupted Great chapter and I love the happy Chax scenes I hope you continue with the story Danni, this and Nothing lasts forever are 2 of my favourite Chax fanfics. I love the fact you update so regularly and you definitely know how to keep the drama alive so it will never get boring

I'v missed so much in the last week, More drama I'm proud of Brax I thought he handled the situation with Ryan very well and I'm glad he trusted Charlie enough to know Ryan is just trying to cause trouble. Loved the last chapter with the girls learning to ride their bikes, I think Riley is getting a stubborn streak. Can't wait for your next update

Yay I'm so glad Chax are still going strong, Brax sounds like he is teasing Charlie, seriously he needs to put a ring on it as Beyonce would say So intrigued about Bianca's new guy, I'm guessing he is Bella's father, I think you have a big twist coming for us but I'l keep my guess to myself for now, Another great chapter Danni, Can't wait for the next one

That was really well written Danni, I had no idea who was getting married right up until the end. How cute are the twins? I think I love Riley, I can see her being just like Brax and being a surfer when she grows up. Can't wait to see how Chax are after 2 years and I'm so happy Ruby and Xavier are married hopefully we get a Chax wedding too

Aww so cute that Ruby and Casey connected instantly I'm dying to see Brax's reaction to Charlie being back, its going to be intense. Great Chapter again and I can't wait for more

Phew, I let out a huge sigh of relief reading that, I was actually terrified to read it I think Brax needs to grow up and be a father to the children he does have and fix things with Charlie. Ah I'm so happy, Thank you Danni

I'm totally team Charlie on this, Brax admitting that he wants to be the father to her best friends baby was never going to go down well. He should have expected Charlie to be angry and try to hit him where it hurts, just like he has done with her with the comment about Charlie not being able to give him more children. The last few chapters have been amazing Danni, so much drama and tension, I hope things work out and we get happy Chax, Can't wait for the next chapter

Great chapter, It was nice to see all the girls talking and seeing where their lifes are after 10 years, I'm guessing Brax has moved on and rightly so, I don't think Charlie could of expected him to wait 10 years for her. Can't wait for your next update