caroline77

I love the way you write Connor. He is so up front with wanting Brax to have a sleepover even though he doesn't understand what that would mean for Charlie and Brax. I look forward to seeing what happens next.

Ooops just when things couldn't get any worse the food critic turns up. I think there will be a quick call Xavier to help them out. I look forward to seeing what happens next.

thank you for two good chapters. I am glad that Charlie and Brax are finally starting to see each other and that Connor is pleased for them. I am not surprised that Angelo is not pleased. He can go take a run and jump Brax talked a lot of sense when he spoke to Charlie about Ruby adopting her baby. I look forward to your next update.

Thank you for two great updates. I think Ruby has a bad case of baby blues. I hope it doesn't get worse.I am glad that Charlie was there for her. I think April will be there when she realises her friend need help. Poor Ruby. I think if she needs a baby sitter on the quick all she would have to do is call Brax and he would be there double quick. Brax being broody was brilliant. I look forward to seeing what happens next. Liam is going to have some serious making up before Ash decides to be alright with his dad.

I have to admit I have never been keen on Natalie. When she first appeared I thought all they had done was take bits out of Charlies character and put them into Natalie. There are too many things with Natalie that match up with Charlie. Charlie ran and so does she and surprise surprise she can't surf either. Some of her behaviour could be discribed as unprofessional for a counsellor. Surely if you had feelings for your patients brother you would wait till after you had helped him before taking things further.

That was two surprises. First Liam turns up and then Ruby has a boy. Rubies and Xaviers baby being a boy was a big surprise. It was good to see that Brax was there when Rubies labour started. I look foward to seeing what happens next. I am glad that the adoption of jacob went through. I hope this helps Brax with his need for another baby.

Brilliant. Charlie and Brax have finally got together I think it will be Connor that Charlie wants to speak to and not Angelo. I have this feeling that he will be very pleased when he finds out. I look forward to seeing what happens next.

Thank you for two amazing updates. Riley is soo cheeky. First interupting Brax and Charlie (They need to buy some brylcreame to put on the door handle!!!!). Then when she got her sister to use a marker pen to create tattoos on her. She will be one very rebellious teenager a proper river girl. I loved Bella wanting to talk Italian all the time. I look forward to the next update.

I am glad that Carla can see the good in Brax. I hope Charlie and Brax can make things work when they do get together. With Connor on Braxs side I don't think Brax can go wrong. Thank you for two great updates. I look forward to reading what happens next between Charlie and Brax.

Thank you for a couple of amazing chapters. I am glad that Brax eventually liked Charlies idea of opening a restaurant together. That was lovely that Brax wanted to let Jacob take over Angeleos when he was older. Bella has certainly got a case of the terrible twos. Riley is certainly adventerous. Yuck picking up the dead bird. I look forward to the next chapter.

Thank you for two great chapters. Very emotional when Charlie stripped the wallpaper from Lily's room. I like the way that Connor is convinced that Brax is Charlie's boyfriend. I look forward to when Charlie can tell Brax that she is not getting back with Angelo. I can see that working relations between Brax and Angelo aren't going to be good. There is going to be a few fireworks I can forcast. I look forward to reading what happens next.

Yippee!! Brax ia awake. I hope he tells the police everything from Heath running off with the money and his car. With a bit of luck that will get heath sent back to jail. Thank you for another great chapter. I look forard to seeing what happens next.

I hope when Brax pulls through he tells the police all he knows about Heath. Stealing Braxs car and stealing the money will be enough to get him sent back inside and hopefully with the guy who knifed Brax. I look forward to reading what happens next.

Thank you for the last two chapters. I am glad that Carla is a wise woman and could see that Charlie was no longer in love with Angelo. Angelo was a bit naughty by saying she could now shack up with Brax. I look forward to seeing what happens next. I think if Charlie had got back together with Angelo he would have let her down. I think he is going to let Connor down eventually.

I have a feeling that Charlie is setting herself up for a fall by going back with Angelo. As a Chax fan I would say that. Another brilliant chapter. I look forward to your next update.

I agree with everyone about Heath. He is one big dirtbag. I hope someone finds Brax and finds him quick. When he is better I think he will hunt Heath down unless the police spot him driving Braxs car.I hope he is caught speeding!!!! I look forward to your next update.

Thank you for a brilliant ending to your story. I enjoyed every minute of your story....even when Tegan appeared. Glad she did the decent thing. I will look forward to reading your next fan fic. Have you thought of a sequel to your story?

Thank you for an amazing yet emotional chapter. Colleen was dreadful in what she said to Charlie. Talk about tactless. She wouldn't do well in the diplomatic corps. When ever she speaks I can see her in my head speaking your words. I'm glad Brax was there to comfort Charlie. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

I hope you had a good holiday. Thank you for another amazing chapter. Brax should swallow his pride and take up Ruby's offer. He will lose more than his freedom if he goes ahead with his plan. I look forward to reading what happens next.

I am glad that Bianca is helping Charlie decide whether or not to see Brax. I think if she did Connor would be pleased. He has done nothing buut play matchmaker for the two of them. I think Angelo was just being spiteful when he said what he did to Charlie about Brax. i look forward to seeing what happens next.

Thank you for another amazing update. Heath is trouble with a capital T. As for frightening the kids he really is a ratbag. I hope he does not cause trouble for chax. He has a nerve expecting Brax just to create a job for him. Being a dishwasher is just right for him.

That was a surprise Heath turning up like that. I was expecting Pa Braxton. Shows how wrong I was hahaha. I hope Heath does not let Brax down but with him hiding his pills I doubt it. I look forward to seeing what happens next.

Just when I think Angelo couldn't sink any lower and he does it again. That guy is such an utter pillock. He is so bad in blaming Connor for Lilys death. I am glad that Brax is there for Charlie and Connor. Thank you for another brilliant chapter.

Thank youi for another amazing chapter. I am glad that Ruby is ok and it was just a false alarm. I am very curious as to who the man is on the bench. I can hazard a guess.......... Please continue with this story it is brilliant.

Thank you for another amazing update. Connor is quite right about Angelo. He is a stupid head. I like the way you write Connor. He is unintentionally playing matchmaker between Charlie and Brax It was funny when he suggested Brax have a sleepover i look forward to seeing what happens next.