caroline77

What a lovely end to your story. I hated Tegan in the show as she created a lot of heartache but in your story I felt sorry for her. it was nice to see Brax and Charlie were one happy family with a little one on the way. I enjoyed your story from begining to end.

Although it must have been hard for Charlie to Caseys funeral after what happened I am glad she went. Good to see that Brax is finally admitting he has got a problem with drink. Given that his mother drinks like she does it is no surprise. Hope when Brax gets out of rehab that he can start building bridges with Jacob. Looking forward to what happens next.

Charlie did the right thing by asking Brax to leave. It might be the wake up call he needs to stop getting drunk all time and actually deal with how he is feeling over Casey. Once he deals with how he feels about Casey he will stop his drinking. Well done to Ruby for playing that trick on Matt. Looking forward to seeing were you go next with this. I hope Charlie and Brax sort their problems out. After all they went through in the begining and now they seem to have hit a brick wall.

Oh dear. Brax is going from bad to worse. I know he has lost his brother and in awful circumstances dispite what he'd done to Ruby. Brax getting drunk ain't going to help him deal with this. When he eventually sobers up how upset he feels about Casey will still be there and he will feel worse. loved Charlie trying to be strict with Jacob and Bianca wanting her not to. I hope Charlie and Brax sort thrie problems out. Look forward to your next chapter and were you are taking this brilliant story.

Good to see Ruby and Xavier talking and sorting out their problems. I think they are doing the right thing because by the time Xavier has finished his course Rubys career will be more estabilished and she could be with him more. Good to see Cheryl and Brax talking even if it is over a bottle of booze. I hope Charlie and Brax start talking to each other. They will need to or else they will be in trouble. Looking forward to reading your next chapter. I have enjoyed what I have read.

Thank you for the two new chapters. Boy have Charlie and Brax got some sorting out to do. It is six of one and six of another with Brax wanting Charlie to go to the funeral and Charlie not wanting to go. Perhaps she should have a stiff drink and take a deep breath and go it will be interesting if she does go. Glad Cheryl went to see Brax. Maybe they will make it up. Wonder what Cheryl will say when she meets the twins. That will be very interesting. Looking forward to seeing what happens. I am glad that it appears that Brax did not do anything with Bianca.

I hope Brax doesn't go there with Bianca. I don't think he will as he told her his heart lies with Charlie. In one way you can't blame him for getting drunk after what happened to Casey even though what did was dreadful. I am looking forward to what happens next.

Boy was that a shock.I did not expect that for that to happen to Casey. Cheryl is one hard cookie isn't she. You thought there would have been some forgiveness for Brax given the news he brought. i am looking forward to where you take this story especially how it affects Brax and Charlie. I hope he doesn't take it out on Charlie. I don't think he will as he loves her too much.

What a cliffhanger to end it on. Brilliant. Have enjoyed your story up to now and its predecessor. Looking forward to seeing what happens next...... Will it be Heath or that journo complaining about Brax. Brax was doing the honourable thing by protecting Charlie and ruby. Quite right too. Loved it when Brax took the girls to the beach. Jake was lovely in making sure dad had everything.