Sunny Girl

Amazing ILM - Incredible ... I'm speechless. Will leave a longer review later when I have more time. Hope things are going okay for you.

Really liked it. Very appropriate, considering ...

What was the name of the song played a lot when Pippa was a coma?

Awww .... I love the scene between Lance and Sally; I can picture it so clearly in my head. And the moment between Steven and Sally - You capture moments like this so well! I'm very impressed ILM!!!

Congratulations ILM and Skykat - you're a fantastic combination and together you produced an even better chapter ...

*Gasps in shock! Wow ! I didn't see that coming!

Yay!!! You've updated ILM .... Great writing and I love the interaction between Lance and Sally! You've captured their scenes just perfectly.

It sounded like the entire ocean had been trapped in the clouds, and had managed to escape. Beautiful sentence Eli and an intriguing chapter ...

Did you have this up on fanfiction.net? I don't know why, it just seems a little familar! I'm still loving it though ILM ...

I really like it - I'll be looking forward to seeing where you go with this ...

Maybe you could post your original fiction for us somewhere ???... I'll be sad if that's the end of what I see of your writing ... I bet you could make a career of it!!! If that is the case though, maybe you could take your time with the finishing of Sally Called.....

It's interesting looking at things from Dani's pespective. I feel Home and Away tried to brush over Dani's rape, and tried to air brush it out of the viewers' minds. The writers were too busy trying to portay Kane and Kirsty as the Romeo and Juliet of a new era. And it worked, really well. I became swept into their story too. Anyway: Excellent writing as always ILM. I look forward to seeing where you go with this.

I'm loving this Kat - you 'get' the characters so well. I always saw Hayley as a bit of a witch, until Ella took over and I'm glad I wasn't the only one.

You can't stop!! This story and Kat's are basically the only ones I keep my teeth stuck into, and can really empathise with... I don't mind the wait, as long as there's a chapter eventually. Sally is my favourite character (in case you hadn't already noticed) and I do prefer old style Home and Away story telling and the way you two write fits that brief exactly. . . . So write away!!!... Both of you can always be sure of at least one avid enchanted reader in me, anyhow!!! And Kat's right! Exclusive clubs really are the best ...

I love all of it!!! You write so well. And you nail all of the scenes !...

I loved the "Crab Queen" comment - that was great!!!

YES, it was!!! Well done - a huge congratulations goes out to you!!!!

Close ... Very Close !!!

Yes!!!

This is classic Kat! I love your style of writing and can't wait for more . . . Are you planning to continue "Return to the Bay" ??? I hope so, I'm hanging for an update!!!

That's right - I remember reading that over on fanfic.net .... You never know - you could be a fortune teller, I hear business is booming over in Europe!!!

There was an actual conversation eeriliy similar to that in "Home and Away" itself. Fantastic chapter I Love Music - you hit the right mark with the characters every time. Congratulations ...

It's great SKYKAT ... I love the way you can mix the old characters with the new and make their relationships seem so believable ... Please continue with this and I'm waiting for an update of "Return to the Bay" too.

That was beautifully written I Love Music and it just shows how much Pip loved her kids, especially Sally ...

Nope!!!