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Love first one!

Great chapter! I loved the ending. Poor Martha. Can't you just make them happy for one whole chapter? Update soon.

Yeah, good too. What you up to other than BttB?

Welcome back Amy! How's you?

Saw II.

I'm good. Just wasting my day on the internet once again. You?

LOL at the first one! Like cropping of third one. Also really like the 5th and 6th one's cropping too.

Great chapter. Although, Poor Martha i hate Leon . Hope Martha gets found. Update soon. Yay for the preview being back.

Great chapter!! I really loved that Martha got him a special gift that was then explained further on. The length was fine! Hope this makes them get back together now! Hope Jack's wish comes true. Update soon.

Very sad chapter. Nevertheless was good. I can see it from both point of views but i really want them to just get back together! A birthday is all they need at the moment.

Love cropping on third one! Really original.

Like first Annie one.

Great chapter. This chapter was quite realistic, i mean in real life if i heard my girlfriend saying she didn't trust me it would be a big deal so i like how you wrote it from both of their point of views so we can see each other's view on the situation. Hope they get back together though.

Love the robbie and tasha stuff! Aswell as the Ric and Mattie stuff. Love that b&w icon too!

I think Martha was wrong to worry too. Poor Jack hearing that. Great chapter. Update soon

Great chapter. I really liked that, Kim was funny in it and Martha 'why does everyone keep asking me that?' Cant wait for more. Martha should have just told him.

Sorry, was just giving my opinion. I guess i could have put in a less blunt way.

Okay chapter. I don't like Laurie. I seriously don't want her in it at all. All that seems to be happening is either sex or other girls. Hope Jack has a good explanation, and Martha doesn't get hurt.

^^ I love LMS. Last movie i saw was Nancy Drew. Thought it was quite good.

I'm in need of an update. Can i expect to find one later?

Lol. Great chapters as always. I loved the memories and that there wasn't actually that much fluff in the latest one even though you said there would be. I think some of the parts in these recent chapters have been just as descriptive as mine. Update soon. Not too keen on the preview.

It was good. But sad. I think Geoff should have kept the mug but i can see why he did what he did.

I agree. I would love 10 more chapters (lily free ) to wrap up the fic. I don't really want this fic to end though. I loved the latest two chapters Jack and Martha at their best. I can't wait for the next chapter. Curious as to where they are going to go.

Yay! She took the pill. Great chapter. Looking forward to reading more about the two of them, glad it isn't three. Update soon.

I loved that chap! You write Jack and Martha so well. I really liked that it was just the two of them in the chap and i'm glad they had sex but i don't want martha to be pregnant as if the baby comes it'll get all the attention and the focus won't be on martha and jack's relationship. Update soon! Can't wait for more.