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Great chapter! Poor Brody! Having to only rely on Phoebe must be terrible! I'm glad she is there for him though, Tori and Justin don't seem to care to much... Though they might now that they know Nate didn't give Brody his meds... I think Brody should go to McCarthy, because Kat's as useless as ever. Ash is dead (because she kinda killed him..) and she's already thinking about Justin! Mason is as conniving as ever, and he's really got the upper hand on Kat. She would do anything he asks now and would still only be thinking of herself. Looking forward to more!

Great chapter! Surprised at the VJ and Olivia development. I wonder if Olivia will be able to keep quiet about it while living with Billie. I'm glad Billie and VJ are friends now. Nice continuation of Leah and Zac. Not sure they will be able to cope with another child though, especially as Leah may not be completely on board. Wondering how April is going to affect Dex and Lottie. I Look forward to more

Great chapter! Poor Brody! Such a shame no-one believes him. Disappointed in Tori for dismissing his concerns. And Justin. But he has Phoebe so she should be able to help, right? Argh! Kat, once again can't do her job can she?! Lying to Brody like that, letting Mason get away with it all. Letting Mason continue killing basically! She didn't seem to care much about Ash though did she?? I loved he inner monologue about how she's such a great cop. Always does everything by the book! Looking forward to more!

Great chapter! Really liked Ash and Billie. Felt a bit sorry for Ash because Billie didn't tell him herself, but i understand how hard that would be. Surprised to see James, and Olivia was quick to blurt out her rape. I'm glad James realized that she should stay with Irene, and i liked their brief chat about Hunter. And Leah and Zac might be expanding their family? Interesting.. Looking forward to more!

Great chapter! Loved Billie with Chris, Irene and Olivia. Really beautiful. Also liked Irene telling VJ and Leah the truth and their reactions. Hoping VJ and Billie will eventually work it out, but in the meantime I'm glad she has Irene. Nice little scene with Olivia and Hunter. It must be tough for both of them to see each other after what has happened-what Hunter did. And now they both have to live with the consequences. Looking forward to more!

Great ending! Cute Hope and Raffy! They do sound like dog names which i never noticed before... Mason continuing to not realize he's a dog was great. Him wanting Matt to hold his hand He's the Dogfather! And i loved Matt wanting Jane (Tori). Thanks for sharing! Brilliant!

Great chapter! Surprised that Irene was able to see Mick! That must take some strength. Really liked her supporting Billie. Beautiful scene between them both. VJ's reaction was as expected, as was Leah's. I liked that his feeling's for Billie hasn't changed - he still loves her so when he hears the truth I think he will continue to support her. Looking forward to more!

Great chapter! Nice cliffhanger there! Pressure was building for Billie so I'm glad she realized she had to tell him. Wonder how he react.. Also really liked Lottie in this chapter. And the Matt and Evie development was nice too. I look forward to more

Great chapter! Oh my Mason is seriously... um.. disturbed.. Poor Evie. Poor Brody. I don't blame Brody for being suspicious about Mason poisoning him, though by Brody not eating maybe Mason's hoping he'll just eventually starve to death. And not taking pain meds would be extremely difficult, so i commend him for being able to do that. I wonder how long it will take for someone to notice the tension between Brody and Mason. Worried for Matt and Zac. Seems like no-one is safe, not even Evie's uncle... Love that your dislike of Kat is showing, haha! Going after her own sexual needs instead of stopping a murderer. And i liked Mason's inner thoughts commenting on what a shrill voice Leah has Looking forward to more!

Great chapter! Oh my! That was very cheesy! Haha! Loved everything, especially Brody's candy house and the addition of the bakers. And Evie taking on some dog qualities but no-one being worried about that at all. Matt checking Tori out is fitting too. Looking forward to more!

Great chapter! Loved Batman! And Brody and Tori's disappointment at Batman being Decker.. Loved how everyone screamed that Mason was a dog While he's as clueless as ever.. And i liked the addition of Kyle too I look forward to more!

Great chapter! Uh oh for Matt... Things don't look great for him considering what Mason is capable of..And again Mason continues to drug Evie so that she can't remember what he has been doing. Shame she's not putting two and two together. I like that she's so worried about Brody, though it's probably not helping Mason's jealousy.. And it looked like Mason put something in Brody's food as well?! Poor Brody! At least he knows the truth, even though no-one believes him. I think he should speak to Tori, who seems to be more aware of Mason's weirdness than Justin. And it's good that he got the cops involved, but i have a feeling Kat might ruin everything eventually.. And what is Mason using as a fertilizer?! Again, i find it hilarious that Mason continues to admire himself so much And i liked Kat's thoughts too! Looking forward to more!

Great chapter! I liked Justin calling Nate all those names, because it's true..It would be good for Tori to have some female friends. Dex saying VJ had grown was great Good to see Skye on good terms with John and Marilyn, and that Olivia is continuing to do well. I look forward to more

Great chapter! Oh dear... Mason really doesn't care about anyone does he?! Poor Brody I really hope Tori eventually wakes up to what her brother is, but it seems she (and Justin) will be busy supporting Brody. Loving how he continues to be obsessed with himself too, and thinks he deserves an Oscar! Haha! Wondering who the next guy on Mason's list is... I look forward to more!

Great chapter! Loving how disinterested Evie is in Mason/Buddy while he continues to be obsessed with her. Though she may have a problem now...haha! Brilliant! I look forward to more

Great chapter! Really liking Dex and Lottie Like how you came up with a way to save Oscar! I really am happy to see him back, he certainly didn't deserve to die. A bit cruel of him to tell Maddy and not Evie, but I understand his reasoning. Feeling quite sorry for Tori, but i think she can do better than Nate anyway. I look forward to more

Awesome story! Love how obsessed both Buddy and Mason are. The insight into Buddy's jealousy is great Hope he's okay... I look forward to more

Great chapter! Surprise at the end there with Lottie and Dex. I liked everyone trying to be there for Olivia, especially Irene and Skye. And i liked Olivia being protective of Skye considering what Hunter was capable of... Nice twist with Brax and Ricky not getting the happily ever after they wanted. I liked Nate saying Casey should be with Health and Bianca, but i wonder if thats what he really wants. I look forward to more!

Great chapter! Feeling really sorry for Evie. And Mason is continuing his creepy-ness. At least Tori is aware that something may be up with him. And everyone else may catching on too, because his obsessiveness is getting a tad out of hand... Really like Brody and Evie though And Mason being full of himself I really hope he doesn't hurt Brody

Great chapter! Liked Evie trying to be there for Josh. I liked VJ and Skye's chat too. I always liked their friendship. Interested to know whats going on with Baby Casey.. I look forward to more!

Great chapter! Really liking Olivia's recovery. And i liked VJ talking to Billie and Jordan about Hunter. Liked the Palmer scenes with Skye and Tank. Wonder how he will go living with Ash and Kat. I look forward to more

Oh my, i love it! You've got his creepy-ness and obsessiveness down pat! What happened to Evie and what Mason did was very dark, but Mason was so full of himself it was gold! What a creepy guy I loved Brody being there for Evie, even if he's about to be murdered... Great one-shot!

Great chapter! Glad that Hunter's been sentenced. 8 years is a lot more than the community service he got away with on the show. Is that the last we will see of him? Really liked Skye's entrance into the Palmer home and her meeting Marilyn. And i thought Chris and Shandi were quite cute! Loved this- “Guess you’re not going to have me as a son-in-law after all, Johnny Boy,”Chris quipped. “Ain’t that a shame,”John muttered. Glad Olivia seems to be slowly coming to terms with everything I look forward to more

Great chapter! Loving how supporting Irene is regarding Olivia. And it's nice that Skye is back, Olivia would need all the friends she can get as she comes to terms with it. I liked that Olivia wasn't immediately happy to see her- after all, she did skip town and leave her, but I always liked their friendship. Really liked Chris, Shandi, Irene and Billie too. And Kat's idea seems interesting. I look forward to more!

Great chapter! Ooh bad news for Olivia, but at least she's alive...And she doesn't seem to blame Hunter at all, which is completely in character. Really liked Chris and Shandi's date. It's good that Phoebe's plan seems to be working- Kyle could be out of jail sooner rather than later Really liked Matt and Evie's conversation. She's right- she would cover for someone she loves too. I look forward to more!