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Great chapter! Oh dear Doesn't look very good for Kyle now does it? I really hope he is okay... Is he always going to suffer?? I thought that Brax would use Josh and Andy for Kyle's escape plan! I'm glad they're all trying to help each other out. I understand Ricky's concern completely, but it is very, very likely Kyle will die if he stays in jail so i understand Brax needing to get him out by whatever means he see's necessary. I like Josh and Andy's reaction to everything too. Josh is certainly behaving quite selfishly, and blaming everything on Andy, which is very in character. I like that you're showing how their life is far from perfect, and that their relationship is suffering. Spending the rest of their lives together with no other human contact certainly wouldn't be a walk in the park. I look forward to more

Interesting start! I like that you're exploring the realities of life on the run. It's certainly not easy and even though they love each other and are thankful for each other, Josh and Andy's relationship will be tested in a way it's never been tested before. There really is no going back. Poor Kyle I feel really bad for him, going through such a terrible ordeal. Like that he has Brax and his family, but at the moment, he probably just wants to be left alone. Understandable he's not letting Brax in to help him. I hope that Brax will somehow be able to help Josh and Andy. And Kyle as well. I look forward to more

Lovely ending Glad Oscar caught up with Josh, with both of them confessing their feelings for each other. Was quite surprised that Evie and Andy got married but i think they could actually be good together in the right circumstance, as this story demonstrates. Nice to see Zac still having reservations about Evie being with him- that is a natural response i suppose given what Andy has done in the past. Liked Oscar walking Evie down the aisle and the banter between everyone. Especially Maddy pointing out that Josh has slept with everyone except his own brother And i was surprised at Billie and Chris too, but i liked it Liked how everyone got a happy ending

Great chapter! Yay! Glad that it seems like everyone might get a happy ending Oscar looking back at everything that had happened and realizing that he loves Josh was really nice. Pity he didn't realize it sooner- poor Josh, can't even be happy for his ex-girlfriend and his brother because he's too heartbroken Loved his talk with Andy and giving him his blessing to be with Evie, even though he didn't need to. Hope Oscar finds Josh, update soon

Great little one-shot! Glad Olivia believed Hunter over Tabitha- a girl she just met. As Ludub said, Hunter would never say anything like that about Olivia.

Great chapter! Glad Josh convinced Oscar to get medical help- it does seem he is in a really weird and fragile mental state X-Men and superman I get why Zac is angry but there's not much he can do if Oscar want (needs) Josh with him. Josh is, once again, just doing what people want him to and refusing would be cruel and could ultimately lead to Oscar's death. Liked the scene where Josh basically said goodbye to Oscar as he realized this is likely to be the last time they are together like that. Poor Josh I also get why Zac's shocked at the Evie/Andy development and why he would be worried- Andy is older and an ex-crim, never mind this being all so incestuous I think Evie and Andy are good together- Andy's certainly been there for her lately and she is old enough to know what she wants. I liked Zac's giggling though- it really is funny and seems so ridiculous that this has all happened- none of them could've imagined it thats for sure I look forward to more

Great chapter! Poor Oscar It looks like he is seriously ill but it's all very amusing too! Thinking Josh is dead and having severe hallucinations... Surprised that Josh nearly went all the way with a guy he just met I liked his inner turmoil at whether or not he should be doing it, very well written, very amusing Really like how Andy and Evie have gotten closer.. maybe too close for Josh to be comfortable with but he can't really talk thought can he?! I appreciated how guilty they looked, especially Andy. Lucky for Josh he didn't walk in on worse... But they've got bigger problems now- Oscar. I look forward to more, update soon

Great chapter! Poor Oscar, haha! Can't catch a break. Having sexy dreams about other men Loved that at first he was surprised but then he just went with it because it was the best dream he'd ever had and people on pain medication can be a little nutty I liked that he wondered what the doctors did to his brain to make him gay Was really surprised to see Kyle in Oscar's dream. And then Andy. Pity Evie and the nurse kept waking him up! And now he's hallucinating Josh! Just when i thought he was getting better. Wouldn't want to be Evie, walking in on Oscar Hope Oscar is okay. I look forward to more

Great chapter! Yay! Oscar's back for good Now comes the hard part -telling him what happened and dealing with that Poor Josh The person he loved may as well have 'died' today. I don't blame him for being depressed. Especially with the media onto him and Oscar's family blaming him. And Zac- i understand he is extremely annoyed and angry but yelling at him isn't going to help. Josh, at the beginning, only did what he was asked. But now he is seriously worried he took advantage of him Why did they all have to watch the video's anyway? And why did the media get hold of footage? I don't blame Josh for being really upset. His life really has changed dramatically from where he thought it was going. Love that Andy's trying to help him but i think it really hurt Josh that he laughed at the laptop incident. If what was happening with Josh now happened to anyone else they would probably both have no problem making fun of it and laughing. I look forward to more, update soon

Great chapter! That was awfully funny Evie and Andy were so concerned about Josh, but to walk in on him watching some videos... that would've been mortifying for everyone, but especially Josh Liked Andy's reaction in particular. And liked how both Andy and Evie found the whole Josh's in love with Oscar thing funny beforehand Because it still seems so ridiculous. Glad Josh and Evie were finally able to have an honest conversation about where they sit and Josh's feelings. Poor Josh being so confused... One day the Oscar that he's in love with won't exit, so that's gotta be tough to deal with. I hope he can convince Oscar to get eh scan done, so they can figure out the next step. I look forward to more

Lovely story! Really like how you write Oscar. And the impact that he has had on Maddy was nice to see. Thankyou for sharing

Great chapter! Agree with Red Ranger 1 here- it's very disconcerting the Oscar keeps switching back and forth. In those moments where he is Oscar i feel so sorry for him. Then when he is Evie again and miserable i feel sorry for him too. Poor Billie, being faced with such a difficult situation. Perhaps she should've refused to help him? The thought of there being cameras in Oscar's room is quite frightening. It's hard to know what to do now exactly- keep pretending, perhaps making it even worse, or tell him the truth, which he probably wont believe... Tough situation. Getting more brain scans done to figure out exactly whats going on and the cause of it can help with the recovery, so I'm glad that's what their going to do. I understand Josh needs some time to figure it all out (or hide out from everyone) but he should face the music and be there for Oscar. Something between Andy and Evie perhaps? I look forward to more

Great chapter! Poor confused Josh.. in love with someone that doesn't really exist. Glad Andy was there to support him. And glad Andy was there to support Evie too. A bit heartbreaking for Evie, being honest with herself and admitting Josh is in love with her brother. So Dr Delaney is a bad egg... I feel for Oscar, who has had no say in what has happened to him at all. I look forward to more, update soon

Great chapter! Wow... surprised to see Oscar back for a little while. And he certainly wasn't happy with Josh kissing him Josh has really gotten in too deep now. He knows he loves the Oscar/Evie combination, but also knows that the real Oscar doesn't approve in the slightest... I really liked how Andy was trying to help Josh figure out his feelings. Even though they both felt incredibly awkward I get why Zac was so angry- Oscar hasn't seemed to be getting any better and pretending he is Evie hasn't done them any favours. Josh hadn't really done anything wrong until recently.He probably shouldn't be kissing him so much and being so affectionate, especially now that he has feelings for him, but he was only doing what Evie and the doctors wanted. Now though... he shouldn't be taking advantage of Oscar, who, as Nate pointed out, can't give consent. Poor Oscar though .... waking up for a bit and realizing your sisters boyfriend is kissing you... you're wearing weird clothes... And then he's back to thinking he's Evie Another great chapter, I look forward to more, Update soon

Great chapter! Josh admits to Andy that he thinks he is in love with Oscar Except he's not Oscar- He's Oscar who thinks he's Evie. I really do feel for him and i don't think this is going to end well... I really liked Andy's support, even when Josh started talking about how sex would happen with Oscar It seems to be good timing that Josh has fallen for him in time for Oscar to seduce him But i really hope Josh doesn't do anything- firstly, i still think he could be taking advantage of Oscar, and secondly he does have a fiance, who he shouldn't be cheating on. I think he needs to be honest with Evie- she knows somethings wrong after all. Really liked Billie and Oscar's talk. His memory seems to be remembering tidbits from Oscar's life, like Billie's assault but then forgetting it and loosing track of what he's talking about. Poor Oscar And i liked Maddy being so shocked that Oscar wanted to sleep with Josh. Her ex-boyfriends hooking up I look forward to more, update soon

Oh goodness... So Andy thinks Josh really is gay or at least bi and thinks Josh wants to have a relationship with both twins. Ha! I found Andy's reaction quite understandable because Josh does seem to be very comfortable with Oscar. And not so much with his girlfriend anymore... I don't know what he is going to do now Really liked Andy in this chapter, as well as everyone continuing to be there for Oscar -except Evie, who has had enough of Oscar taking over her life. I wonder how Josh is going to cope with being so confused... I look forward to more, update soon

In my opinion Andy was not solely responsible for the caravan explosion and therefore shouldn't have been charged with 2 counts of manslaughter on his own. It just doesn't sit right with me that Roo and the suppliers can show such negligence and get away scott free. Charge Andy for the appropriate charges, while giving Roo some sort of punishment as well. Because they all did the wrong thing and all contributed to the explosion the way it happened. As i recall Josh spent those weeks in prison (remand) not at the police station. Andy spent all his time there and was never moved to remand. He then got bail once Josh confessed, even after confessing to murdering Jake and being on double manslaughter charges, which i thought was quite odd.

Well we are never going to see eye to eye regarding who is responsible for the explosion, but i do firmly believe that Andy would never have wanted Hannah and Oscar to die. I take your point that Andy certainly shouldn't have started that fight in the first place and should not have driven off like that. To the best of my knowledge Josh spent about a week (or maybe a little more/less in TV land) in remand for covering for Andy and about another week (give or take again) for Charlotte's murder before his sentencing. I think Evie bailed him out the first time. For me, keeping his involvement in Charlotte's murder a secret is character assassination. Yes, Josh has done terrible things in the past, such as covering for his brother time after time. But he showed some sort of remorse then, and was torn between doing the right, moral thing and keeping his brother with him. This year, Josh has shown little or no remorse for killing Charlotte and letting Zac go to jail. It doesn't make sense to me that he would keep it all a secret and not show any remorse, only to benefit himself. He is certainly not the most selfless person in the world, but it just doesn't sit right with me.

Andy was prepared to go to jail for 40 years until Josh confessed and he came up with this plan to save Josh, not necessarily himself. He knows Josh would never have gone without him and would never survive by himself out there. I'm happy but not happy at the same time with this exit. As Ludub said, Andy murdered someone in cold blood and should have gone to prison, but, for now at least, he has escaped justice. He blames himself for Hannah and Oscars death, which, is a good thing by human standards. He did something that contributed to the deaths of 2 people he cared about and loved. I'm glad he showed remorse, because it did show that he cared about them. Tank didn't show much in the end, even if he was willing to go down for it, and neither did Roo really (at least she doesn't seem to anymore at least). All 3 played a big part in the explosion but for me far more of the blame lies with Roo. She was the organizer of the event and provided an unsafe environment. A hazardous environment. Anyone else could've knocked over those gas tanks. I have no idea why Andy was charged with double manslaughter. But this is Home and Away, where the police force don't know what they're doing. For me, I could not confirm that beyond any reasonable doubt that, take Andy and his actions out of the picture that the explosion would not have occurred. The set-up was still hazardous due to Roo's negligence. Was Zac actually sentenced or did he just go to remand? I can't recall. But Josh has been in remand twice recently, for covering up for Andy and killing Charlotte. Sure, he deserved to be punished for hiding his involvement in Charlotte's death but, for me, 25 years is a bit much. Especially, as Ludub said, Angelo in the end got absolutely nothing. And yes, he deserved to be punished for covering for Andy, but him being Charlotte's killer has let me down completely. I just never believed it was in character. But, obviously other people, like the writers didn't think so.

Great chapter! So Josh is getting quite used to being affectionate with Oscar... so much so that Evie is annoyed and upset. It does seem to come quite naturally to Josh now and he isn't really holding back anymore, kissing Oscar in front of Billie and VJ, Evie and unintentionally Maddy . I could imagine her face upon seeing that . I feel for him, having to do this when he doesn't want to but trying to do the right thing even though he might be potentially making everything worse. And I feel for Evie too, who wants to do right by her brother but understandably feels jealous and inadequate because Oscar is unintentionally stealing her identity from her. I hope she is okay and gets why Josh couldn't leave Oscar. I also like the addition of Andy and wonder how much about all of this he knows... I feel for Oscar. Finding out about Hannah's death that way would be absolutely terrible and he already wasn't feeling great because everything seems different to how it was before. Another funny (but sad) chapter. I look forward to more, update soon

Ha! Evie's jealous and thinking Josh might be developing feelings for Oscar Josh and Oscar kissing in front of Matt, and even in front of Evie... Love how uncomfortable Josh is, especially with the french kissing . Doesn't help at all that people (including the hospital staff) keep teasing him. I'm glad he is getting more used to it now, though the embarrassment would still be there. Liked the addition of Matt in this chapter, who's reaction to it all certainly isn't helping anything. Nice image of Oscar in girly pajamas with shaved legs and coloured toenails I appreciated Josh and Evie's conversation and Josh being firm that he is not going to sleep with him But he will continue to play along for Evie, who seemed absolutely fine with Josh kissing Oscar until she saw it for herself... I'm glad Josh not only has a problem with his own mortification with kissing Oscar but potentially making fun of him and not knowing what it would be like once Oscar is back to being Oscar... when/ if that happens... Very funny chapter with Josh struggling to deal with kissing his brother-in-law I wonder how long he is going to have to keep pretending... I look forward to more

Another brilliant chapter Love how uncomfortable Josh is with everything. I think he needs some acting lessons or at least try harder... Or Oscar is going to catch on that something is wrong. Oscar already feels pretty awful being in that hospital bed and wants things to go back to normal (as he knows it). I laughed at how uncomfortable Josh was during their kiss though I wonder when Oscar gets out of hospital how far Oscar is going to want to take things... Like the addition of Matt and Maddy. And everyone's reaction when they told them what was happening VJ laughing so much wasn't too good but i suppose you can expect much else in a situation like this... What an awkwardly funny chapter, i look forward to more

Haha Great start Ludub You've really set the scene for an interesting story! Feel really bad for Oscar and i wonder how he is going to think he is Evie for. The rest of the story i guess... At least his family (and Josh) were supportive even though they never imagined this could happen and are probably waiting to wake up from this weird dream It seems Josh was very uncomfortable playing along which is quite understandable. I look forward to the next chapter

Really great ending Hunter really is a genius. He planned that so perfectly so that Kat would get all the blame. Wow. I did actually feel sorry for her, even if she was such an idiot. But she can't really prove that she didn't do it... and absolutely no-one suspects Hunter- who seems to have found his next victim Really liked how Zac, Leah, VJ and Olivia continue to be absolutely oblivious. As soon as the cops found the eye in Kat's freezer i knew she was definitely in trouble... Pretty (absolutely) gross of Hunter to not just torture Josh but remove his body parts- eyeball, fingers, teeth.. At least Andy is now free of his ghost friends . Really liked Andy's death scene. Not too gruesome but you know what Hunter is capable of.. Brilliant writing as usual Lovely ending where Hunter has gotten away with everything and is free to torture (and kill) more and more people..

That was great I actually didn't expect Evie to die so suddenly but she was unwell for a while. And i loved how graphic it was Sad for Zac, Leah and VJ to deal with her loss now. But who do they think poisoned her?? Andy holding off killing himself because Josh is missing. Then Hunter locks him in a coffin. And Andy gets to decide how he would die- I'm sure he has some ideas... Also loved the mention of Round the Twist and his 3 ghosts continuing their torment. Loved how you wrote Kat. So much like the show- thinking she doesn't deserve what is happening to her and being in denial about the facts, thinking Hunter is just a misunderstood kid with a bad mother. I look forward to the final chapter